ANSHI / ISHKARA FF PYAR KA BANDHAN. Part 2 on page 8 24/1/17

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I'm so glad I read it quite interesting judging by the prologue.

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Part 1

One woman in her early 50's is doing puja of lord Krishna idol. After finishing her puja she go to her daughters room . one is sleeping peacefully on her bed n another is taking shower .she can assume this by water sound. She move her head in disbelief n call her daughter who is sleeping

Mom - ishu uth ja dekh subah ke 8 baj rahe hai or tu so rahi hai. Anu to kab ki uth gayi or naha bhi rahi hai.

Ishu ( in sleeping tone) - sone do na maa .

Mom - nahi ishu uth jao tumhe college bhi Jana hai fir mat bolna maine uthaya nahi.

She get up immediately n open her eyes

Ish - kya 8 baj gaye

Mom - nahi 8:10 ho gaye 8 baje to mai ayi thi.or pichle 10 min se utha rahi hu tumhe.

Just then anika come out of bathroom.

Is - kya ma aap bhi 10 min mai uthaya mujhe

N she rush to washroom n anika n mom move their head in disbelief.

Ma - iska kuch nahi ho sakta pata nahi kab badi hogi ye

An - ho jayegi ma abhi to uski student life hi khatam nahi hui .

Ma - bas last year hi to hai post graduation ka. Pata nahi ye kya karegi apne future mai

An - don't worry ma .dekhna ek din wo kuch aisa karegi ki aapko or mujhe us par proud hoga. Or waise bhi uske har kadam mai main hu na uske sath.

Ma - sab teri hi shay hai anu ki wo itni careless hai or childish bhi

An - or mujhe wo aise hi acchi lagti hai. Usme mai apna bachpana or teenage jee leti hu ma.

Her ma has tears in her eyes

Ma - kitni badkismat hu mai anika ki tujhe tera teenag nhi de payi. 16 sal ki umar se mere sath kam karne lagi .apni padai bhi private ki tune.koi khushi nahi de payi tujhe.

An - to kya hua ma is ghar ki Badi beti hone k nate meri responsibility hai koi ehsan thode hi kar rahi hu kisi par. Or kisne kaha mai khush nahi hu. Itni pyari ma or Behan ke hote mujhe kya kami hai.ab chalo hume breakfast or tiffin banana hai warna ishana ji ko fir banana mil jayega canteen mai khane ka. To ansu ponch do Mari nirupa Roy or chalo breakfast banane.

She clear her mom tears n both smile n rush to kitchen

Here ishana freshen up n take bath . she is wearing a towel around her till knee n her wet hair dropping water on her bare shoulder.

She come out n her phone ring

Ish - haa soumya bol

So - ishana tujhe pata hai kya hua kal rat maine bahut bura Sapna dekha ki mujhe papa ne pura din bhuke rehne ki punishment di hai. Or ye Sapna subah ka hai. Ma kehti hai subah k sapne sach hote hai.

Ish ( happily) - sach mai aisa hota hai.

So ( sadly) - haa

Is- wow fir to bahut accha hai pata hai maine aaj sapne mai apne prince charming ko dekha . mai na dance kar rahi thi or dance karte karte girne wali thi par usne mujhe bich mai hi pakad liya. Or mai Bach gayi

She said dreamily

So - wow ishana kaisa dikhta tha WO

Is ( sadly) - wahi nahi dekh payi jab mai giri to maine apni ankhe jor se band kar li thi na. ( happily) par aaj usne sapno mai entry to mar li face bhi jaldi hi dekh lungi .

So - baba re mai phone rakhti hu papa awaj de rahe hai kahi mera sapna sach na ho jaye.

Ishana cut call n think about her dream

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She start singing n dancing

Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye
Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye

She lay on bed n tickle her self

Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye
Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Use Kahon Kabhi Saamne To Aaye

She repeat same n act as she is calling someone

She change her cloth in blue Capri n red n white top n come to kitchen where anika n sunaina ( their ma) preparing breakfast.

She put hand on ma shoulder n tell

Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye

She tickle her ma

Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye

N again act as she is calling someone

Use Kahon Kabhi Saamne To Aaye
Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye

Ma push her aside n she dancingly arrange breakfast table. Anika smile n move head in disbelief.anika n mom prepare more thing

N she pick her big teddy n ask him

Kaisa Hai Kaun Hai Wo Jaane Kahan Hai
Ho Kaisa Hai Kaun Hai Woh Jaane Kahan Hai

Put one finger on her lips n nod her head in yes

Jiske Liye Mere Hoton Pe Aah Hai
Apna Hai Ya Begana Hai Wo
Sach Hai Ya Koi Afsana Hai Wo

She glare in teddy eyes by holding him till her face

Dekhe Ghur Ghur Ke Yunhi Door Door Se
Use Kahon Meri Neend Na Churaye

She repeat older steps again

Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye
Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Use Kahon Kabhi Saamne To Aaye
Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye

She again go to kitchen n hold anika hand n take her till table .anika has bowl in her hand n she kept it

Ishana hug anika from back n sing

Jadoo Se Jaise Koi Chalne Laga Hai
Ho Jadoo Se Jaise Koi Chalne Laga Hai

Put her hand on her heart n swing her body with rhythm

Main Kya Karun Dil Machalne Laga Hai

She told anika

Tera Deewana Kehta Hai Wo
Chup Chup Se Phir Kyon Rahta Hai Wo

She sadly hit her head n anika smiley nod in no

Kar Baitha Bhool Wo Le Aaya Phool Wo

She sit in front of anika holding one flower which she take from vase

Use Kaho Jaaye Chaand Leke Aaye

Now she point toward sky

Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye
Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye
Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Use Kahon Kabhi Saamne To Aaye.

She finish her song n hug anika.

Mom scold her n order them to take breakfast. N they take their breakfast with so much fun.

Ishana leave for her college. N mom go to kitchen to pack anima tiffin box

Anika phone ring n she pick call

An - haa Gupta ji boliye

( Gupta ji is her client)

Gu - anika beta Jo order tumhe diya tha wo ready hai na

An - haa Gupta ji sab ready hai don't worry. Apke pote ka namkaran bahut acche se hoga .

Gu - mujhe tum par pura yakeen hai beta.bas wo kya hai na mere boss bhi aa rahe hai party mai to thoda nervous hu. Wo kahi nahi jate but mai unke papa k jamane se unke yaha kam kar raha hu to wo mere program mai aa rahe hai. To mai chahta hu sab best ho.

An - don't worry sab best hi hoga. Ap chinta chodiye or party k lite ready hoiye.

She cut call n sigh.she take her mother blessing

An - mom hope sab thik ho jaye

Ma - are jaha tu hai waha koi gadbad kaise ho sakti hai. Sab accha hi hoga .ye tiffin le.

She handover anika her tiffin n feed her dahi Shakkar for good luck.

She bid bye to her mother n take her Scotty n left for venue.

Scene shift

Excellence college ( ishana college)

Both ishana n soumya go to their respective class.

( soumya is doing her pg in fine arts. N ishana in dance)

Ishana class

Professor ( female) arrived n all girls wearing white suit n red dupatta take their position n do prananm to their guru ma.

( its kathak dance class n only girls are there in class although college is coed.)

Pro - girls aap sabke liye ek news hai .humne aap sabko art ko or samajhne k liye ek naya kadam uthaya hai or wo hai ek extra subject. Or ye extra subject hoga sculpture ka. Or aaj se hi aapki classes lagengi

Ish - par mam sculpture q .iska dance se kya connection.

Mam - dance n sculpture dono mai feeling n emotion ko samjhna jaruri hota hai. Emotions, postures n facial expression ka connection hai dance or sculptures mai. Ab samjhi.

Or haa apke liye specially humne ek new teacher appoint kiya hai. He is best artist in Mumbai. N very rich too. Sirf humari request par wo aap logo ki class lene ko ready hue hai. To koi bhi unhe tang nahi karega.aise artist k sath kam karne ka mauka mila hai ye aap sabka subhagya hai. Or ye classes 2 month k liye hogi. So girls get ready change your cloths n go to room no 17.

All nod their head n touch guru ma feet n go to change their clothes.

TBC...

Precap - obbros entry in raisingh sister's life . what will happen n how they meet.

To know keep reading