An Ode to Om's Deewanis

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Posted: 9 years ago
#1

Hello forumwasis!


I was reading an amusing thread pairing Omkara with Svetlana, and having read a beautiful OS earlier on similar lines, I reckoned that his Deewanis also deserve some appreciation. After all, if the object of their affection has an AT, why should his devoted, rocking deewanis be left behind?


So, here goes ...


Zulfein kya leherayi usne,

Intense stare kya diya usne,

Stillness ka aura kya cast kiya usne,

Haathon ki hunar se putlon ko jaan kya diya usne,

Halki si muskurahat kya chhalkayi usne,

Bas

Palkein bichha kar Omkara ki geheraiyon mein doob gayi anginath deewaniyan uski

Kalpanaon ke saagar mein uncaringly beheti gayi anginath deewaniyan uski

Rang birange sapnon ki tasveer banati gayi anginath deewaniyan uski

Ish bhi na kiya, svet bhi na kiya, Riddhi Siddhi ko yaad bhi na kiya

Bas Omkara ka chant karti gayi anginath deewaniyan uski


~ Ruchi

I can already hear the shouts of Om's brother's innovative profanities 😆

Louboutin ho, ya San Marzano tomatoes ho, toh feel free to chuck ... Otherwise, please maaf karo with an eye roll and a groan of "Oh my maata" 😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
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We om deewanis r crazy.😆
Thnx for dedicating poem for us😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my maata...this is so awesome.👏
I feel like one of the gopi of Krishna 😆
*Proud Om deewani*

The poem is wonderful dear. Do write more.👏

P.S what's your name?😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful !
You dedicated this to us... How lovely !
Isi baat pe meri taraf se ek Sher...

Hum uski har ada ke kayal hai ..
Wah ! Wah !
Hum uski har ada ke kayal hai ..
..
..
..
..
Humare pero me usi ke naam ki payal hai !

😆

I know this was very bad but please don't kill me for this...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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We people are declared and stamped Mental😆
We pair Omie with like anyone and even anything😆

But thanks for this.
Loved it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveangel94

We om deewanis r crazy.😆

Thnx for dedicating poem for us😳


Crazy but amusing! You're welcome :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: alishba_omkara

Oh my maata...this is so awesome.👏

I feel like one of the gopi of Krishna 😆
*Proud Om deewani*

The poem is wonderful dear. Do write more.👏

P.S what's your name?😳


Gopi of Krishna 😆

Thank you!

I'm Ruchi :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: pearl.16

Beautiful !
You dedicated this to us... How lovely !
Isi baat pe meri taraf se ek Sher...

Hum uski har ada ke kayal hai ..
Wah ! Wah !
Hum uski har ada ke kayal hai ..
..
..
..
..
Humare pero me usi ke naam ki payal hai !

😆

I know this was very bad but please don't kill me for this...



Thank you!

Aapki payal ki chhanchhan bahut hi cute hai ;)
Arshi67 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

We people are declared and stamped Mental😆

We pair Omie with like anyone and even anything😆

But thanks for this.
Loved it!


My pleasure :)

Waise, the "anything" is so funny! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww that was a sweet gesture for insane deewanis of him
Thanks for this poem dear I loved it 🤗 ❤️
Proud to be his deewani 😎

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