Say yes to me. Anshi OS

DEEPZzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

This is beautiful please continue this if possible

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Fireflake

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Absolutely loved it!! 😳
They way how both Shivay and Tej were portrayed, Hats off!! How strong they may be, they still have their weaknesses. It makes them more human and real.
And coming to Rudra, how any more adorable can he get? 😆
Loved the family time. The bond that they all share.
Coming to Anika-Shivay, it is remarkable how subtle and soft he is with her. Excited to know how he is going to win her over.
How should I put it, light-hearted scenes yet strong emotions?
Waiting for your next piece.
Keep writing more! 👍🏼

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wordsofwisdom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

wow diii , this one for me

comg i'm so happyyy & thanks for so awesome b'day gift

awesomeee dii

it was damn hilarious

omg how to explain

i've readd & re-read this

and was smiling like an idiot

tej chocked on his own coffee oh god poor his employees

and can imagine shivaye storming of the office after getting rudra's message

shivaye at anika's home & scared of the lioness called anika

rudra , om & dadi tooo good

poor shivaye obessed with anika

diii plsss a sequel or another part

wanna see how shivaye make anika say yes to him

thanks for the pm dii

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: -Jamina
I just loved it dear!!
Shivaay family are the best 😆
Your awesome saumya count me in ur Fan list girl 😉
Egarely waiting for next One Shot
Jaldhi update Karo plzzz 😊

Thanks...haha...Ik...if you have a brother like Rudra it's always fun😆

I shall upload the next as soon as I finish it.

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: _Angel_love_
Lovely OS 👏😳
Do write more..ur work is amazing 👏👍🏼

Thanks a lot😆

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: srividhya68
i totally loved it
anshi's reaction were superb
honeymoon??...shaadi abhi tak nahi hui😆
total package...awesome os

Hahaha... thanks 😊

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Nichuss
i loved it ... but just a deal... hailaaa

ths bagad billa wont change

Lol...well that's how his brain works...normal language use samajh nahi aati.😆

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Sparklle801
Wonderful but it was kinda short yar. No worries, next part should be long enough 😃 .
So one month shivaay will try to woo her, it is so out of shivaay character. It will be interesting to know.

Thanks...ik it was short..

I won't write everything in the one month... I'll just write the important things that happen 😛

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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