//IshKara 4S : Chahat\\ Part 1 updated at Page 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Megha😊

The title of this 4S drew me in - Chahat, its a beauiful word no? and also the fact that its an IshKara fic, and the cherry on the top is that it is a take on the much awaited aftermath of the truth coming out. So, all in all, a lot of reasons for venturing out here.

The prologue was brilliantly written, the agony, the pain, the hurt was so fabulously reflected. I wanted to know more. It was a intriguing monologue from Ishaana that I absolutely loved.

The first chapter absolutely lived up to my expectations. The raw agony experienced by Ishaana was heart wrenching. You laid down the whole story here, what happened, how it happened, and as a bonus treat we have IshKara kids - cute! I liked how you turned what the CVs have shown into how things will move forward. You took the conversation between Ishaana and her dad and turned it around to suit this story - glad for this really. That confession... ❤️ Also, can I hug you for the last night together scene? it was ah-mazing! Truly! I want to jump around dancing because you did not show Om's reaction on knowing the truth... lot of scope here with respect to IshKara... was he angry? upset? sad? betrayed? So many questions!!! I am so excited to read the next parts. Akul and Yuvan.. sweet names!

Megha, fabulous work here. I am enthralled. Awaiting update.

-V😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Loved the update...
Looking forward to next part😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
This is really nice. Ishana and Omkara have a lot of potential and even though they aren't together on the show, stories like these are there to make the IshKara lover feel good.
This was a wonderful read. Continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Wow..such a beautiful update
I loved their past
Omg they hve kids
Bt y she left ???
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Loved it to the core!!! 😃
Awesomely written and described .. 😳
Keep it up! 👏

Waiting for Omkaara's meet with his son.. Ohw! He will look so cute behaving all daddish.. ⭐️
Update soon! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
That was soo well written...
I want to read oms side of the story too abt how he cope dup after ishana left...
Im sure Oms meeting with his son will be really cute😊 with his long hair and acting like om...
I wonder how these two will patch up...
Update soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
This was amazing .. Please continue soon .. can't wait to see the union of omie and his sons .. loved the whole love plot and the conversation between omkara and ishana .. This is too good .. I haven't felt ishana's space to be powerful in the drama, but this one is really good . Very beautifully portrayed. 👏👏 please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
omg
am speechless👏👏👏
u left me like seriously left me for wanting to read more😳😳😳
the way u have penned it up gurl...👏
no words😳😳
u have got me hooked
god i just loved it to moon and back...😳😳😳

perfectly penned...😳

loved the concept
bas omie jaan jaldi uske chotu version ko dekh le...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Omg
its so beautiful dear
I always love the concepts where Couple separates and boy doesn't knows abt his kids I love that this has become my favourite SS
It was so beautiful I could totally feel what Ishana was going through
So excited for next episode
Omkara meets mini Omkara aka Akul Update soon plz plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update...feeling bad for ishaana...

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