IshKara OS : Tangled

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It's been a 3 years since Omkara and Ishana are in a relationship.Whatever happened between him and ridhima makes him to doubt his relationship with ishana.He feels ishana is rushing very fast towards marrige and all but the acatual thing was he was scared of the heartbreak again.Omkara decides to take break from their relationship..

Omkara: Ishana,everything is happening so fast.

Ishana : Don't worry there is time.Pehle lunch karna hai fir ghar dekhne chalenge..

(Omkara is in utter shock)

Omkara : Ghar dekhne ?

Ishana: We will shift in new house after we will get married right ?

(Omkara looks her with disbelief and says )

Omkara : Are you serious ? There is no way, I am going to look for a house with you !

I am not going to go anywhere and look for houses with you. No ! No way. Not at all. Thank you.

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(Omkara and ishana standing in their new house)

Ishana : Nice na ?

(Omkara who is standing there and don't know what else to do decides to finally speak up but he looks at her happy face and says)

Omkara : 45K kuch jyada hi kam...

Ishana : I know bahut jyada hai.Let's go somewhere else.

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In Restuarnt

(Ishana looks at omi.She realises his uneasiness and asks)

Ishana : Are you mad at me ? Did i do something ?

(Omkara looks at her)

Omkara : No yaar ! I am fine.I will tell you if something is bothering me.

(He didn't know what to do. He sees someone coming through restaurant. Enters Rudra.Rudra and ishana shout together. "Happy b'day".)

Ishana : Tumhe kya laga main bhul gayi..Happy b'day!!

Aise hi na koi mujhe ladkiyo ka sharukh khan bulata tha.It's 29th june.

(Omkara becomes speechless and puts his head on table says)

Omkara : It's 29th july.

(Ishana in a bit confusion checks her phone again..and looks at omi)

Ishana : Shit !

(Rudra who was also checking his phone looks at omi)

Rudra : Meri koi galti nahi hai bhai.Ye main ishana ki bato me aa gaya and tu facebook pe bhi nahi hai so thoda confusion ho gaya..

(Omkara sees only one candle in his cake and says with smile..)

Omkara : I am 28 not 1 yr old..

(Ishana and rudra who were still in shock looks at each other..)

Ishana : Its a first surprise.

(She says it with embarrassment)

Omkara : Aur kitne surprises hai ? Aur kya kiya tum logo ne ?

(Ishana takes out her mobile and shows him some pics.He sees oberoi mansion in it.)

Ishana : 4 surprises hai. I should have understand this before, how can you leave mansion

.so,it's settled we are going to live in oberoi mansion.

(Omkara becomes very emotional but still decides to speak up.)

Omkara : It's not the house.It's us.You left everything for me and did everything what i said.So, that you can convince me that you have changed.Intially,i was never serious about this relationship because i was scared about getting into relationship again and getting vulnerable again.Somehow my feeligs grew towards you and i got serious but when i got serious..There is something really wrong between us.

(Ishana listens this with tears and says.)

Ishana : What you want ?

Omkara : I think we should take a break..

( Rudra looks on and says to omkara.)

Rudra : Are you sure it's 29th July ?

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(Ishana is sitting with rudra and dadi.She was feeling frustated.After whatever she has done for omkara,she was feeling unhappy.Dadi who was sitting there look at her in worried way while rudra is listning to his ipod.Rudra looks at ishana and finally decides to cheer her up.)

Rudra : Itna kya soch rahe ho ? Break up hi hua hai an..Hazaro logo ko hota hai. Mere bhi hua hai..waise bhi wo kaunsa brad pitt hai, jo dusra nahi milega..Hai na dadi ?

(Dadi looks at her and tell him to shut up.Dadi says..)

Dadi : Beta,he is little naive.He was in relationship before so may be he thinks that you are moving fast..I will talk to him.He will undestand.

(Ishana with frustation says)

Ishana : Dadi,don't anything.Why will you make him understand and how many times.You told me you don't want to force him into arrange marriage and now are you going to make him force for relationship ?..No dadi,ab hogaya mera bas.Mujhe itne complicated cheez me padna hi nahi hai..hogaya mera bas.

(Dadi becomes angry while hearing all this things and says)

Dadi : Tum logo ki genration ki kya problem ? Ye nahi pasand,wo nahi pasand.Gf nahi pasand,badldo.Wife nahi pasand,badldo.Ek din aisa ayega k tum log parents badlna chahoge.Itne saloon ka rishta hai aise kaise chod sakte ho..?

Ishana : To main kya karu dadi aap hi batao..i asked him for marrige he is confused bt ab usko relationship se bhi problem hai..mera hogaya dadi,i have decided.

(Rudra who was not at all in serious mood says)

Rudra : You did basic mistake ishana..tune bahut sur pe chadaya usko..hai na dadi ?..

(Ishana and dadi look at him angrily and rudra becomes quiet)

Ishana : Where is omi ?

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In Omkara's room

(Omkara was sitting in his room still confused about his decision.Jhanvi looks at him and comes towards him and says)

Jhanvi : It's a third surprise..

(Omkara looks at her.Jhanvi and omkara looks at each other and laugh)

Jhanvi : Here,it is..

(Jhanvi gives him phone and omkara becomes extremly happy while seeing it.It's ridhimas phone call from london.)

Omkara : Ridhima,you are ..

Ridhima : Happy bday !!

(ridhima and omkara laugh)

Ridhima : I knew it but i still i decided to go with rudra's and ishana's plan.

Omkara : Hm..u didn't change..you talked to ishana ?

Ridhima : Ya,it was her idea.She is very sweet.

(Omkara becomes very emotional)

Ridhima : Look,omi whatever happened between us it was long time ago.


5 years ago

Ridhima : I can't do this anymore.I can't keep starting and stoping.

Omkara : What are you saying ? I can't come there.I can't leave my family.You can come over here and can start your work.

Ridhima : Why should i have to come ? Why everytime only girls..I can't come.I just can't.

Omkara : What's going on ? You are not like this.Is there something wrong ? Is there someonelse ?

(Ridhima looks at him and tells that she has fallen in love with somonelse in london.)

Present Day..

Omkara : Ya,it was long time ago..

Ridhima : You have to understand that every relationship doesn't end up like ours. Our relationship didn't work out because we were struggling with the time and our growing fondness towards other people and nothing is wrong about it. We are humans omi,everybody needs someone. You just can't ignore your feelings.I know you are struggling with your relationship because of our past but it wasn't her fault. Don't make her suffer. Stay with the one who makes you happy.She is doing everything to make you happy. I know you love her but you are scared. Trust me, she is the one.

(Omkara still unables to understand it.He says thanks to ridhima and ends the call.He looks at jhanvi.)

Omkara : So,everyone is on ishana's side including you.. i know she loves me and i love her too but still i have confusion about marrige..

(Jhanvi becomes angry and says..)

Jhanvi : What is this immaturity ? What is the problem ? I thought you are more mature than your brother's but you are acting childish..

Omkara : Maa..it's my decision. I think i have the right to get married to whomever i want to get married to and i still have the confusion about whether i love her or not...

Jhnavi : Achha,ab shadi se tum pyaar pe chale gaye..nice work omi.When she wasn't talking about marriage then you were in love with her and when she wants to take the relationship to another level..tab tum doubt kar rahe ho ? Ishana loves you and i know it ! She used to speak with me 2 hours daily so that she can make you happy.

(Omkara annoyingly says )

Omkara : Fine ! I will get married to her tomoorow.

Jhanvi : No ! Don't get married to her.Infact ,don't get married to anyone..but jisse bhi shadi karo na make sure ke wo tumhe ishana se jada khush rake..People keep talking about attraction and compatibility. These things are secondary. Happiness comes from the simple thing..be with the one who make you happy, understand ?

(Omakara hugs jhanvi and finally understands what all are trying to say.He remembers ridhima and ishana both but he find himself laughing with only with ishana and decides to give another chance to relationship.Rudra,dadi and ishana were standing behind the door.They all watch omakara and jhnavi huging.Ishana asks to dadi..)

Ishana : Dadi,ye set to ho jayega na ?

(Dadi looks at her and laughs while pressing her chicks)

Dadi : Jab sath me rahoge,tab sab set hojayega ..lucky are ones who find true love..

Rudra : Nahi to main hoon na..

(Ishana and dadi looks at him and signs him to shut up.Jhanvi leaves the room and signs ishana to go inside.Ishana comes in front of him while making faces.Omkara makes her sit and takes out something from his drawer.)

Ishana : What is it ?

Omkara : It's my surprise and puts the ring in her hand..

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It's my third OS.I have written about Anshi and RumYa.I thought lets write about them.

I know it's not that good but still please comment and like.Thank you.😊

Edited by blu24 - 9 years ago

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harleen_naz thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thnk u😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one , something different:)
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Originally posted by: KRITII

Nice one , something different:)


Thnx😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so cute
ring wala surprise best tha
awesome
achha hai Ridhima was a good friend to Om serial mei bhi aisa hi ho
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Abhiya-

so cute

ring wala surprise best tha
awesome
achha hai Ridhima was a good friend to Om serial mei bhi aisa hi ho

ya I hope that too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow so nice yaar
diffrent concept
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Originally posted by: ...tejaswi...

wow so nice yaar

diffrent concept


I don't think it's that good..bt still thnx 😊
Edited by blu24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww this was such a sweet and light-hearted story of IshKara. 😛
Loved the fun moments between them and all these surprises..😆 but saved best for the last..😳
Awesome work dear. Absolutely loved it.👏
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