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Hello friends I'm not happy with the way the executed Om's pool scene so here is a short os on the feelings and thoughts of Shivaay during that scene. Please read it and I would love to get reviews and even constructive criticism is welcome so that I can improve my writing.Without further ado
Shivaay pov
It was interesting to have lunch with bade papa, he is nice for a change today and it is clear to anyone with eyes that Rudra was happy to have his father close by and in such a good mood too. But I was worried about Om he was not even seeing bade papa in the eye. I never imagined a day I'll see him laugh like that to the monster comment maybe he also has feelings and Rudra sure looked very glad but Om was still not happy with him but I guess that is a burned bridge now but I hope one day they reconcile. Everything was going on fine at least what passes for fine in our house and suddenly I heard daadi shouting. We all rushed there and what I saw made my head spin. Badi maa was unconscious and the Tv was displaying the news that I desperately wanted to hide from everyone. To say that I was shocked would be an understatement.
Bade papa and badi maa were blaming each other and I couldn't stand their shouting. But the last straw was him raising his hand on her, can't they understand that their constant fighting will only further push their son along the path of destruction. I shouted at them to think of Om and when I sought my brother he was not there. I swear ny heart stopped beating for a second there and all the worst case scenarios went through my mind. The thought of losing Om was like a spear being thrust into my chest and repeatedly rotated till I die. But I pushed those thoughts away because it was not the time for that and I had to stay strong for my brother.
Rudra and I went in search of Om. I was searching for drugs in his room when I heard Rudra calling me. There was that one emotion in his voice which I never wanted to hear from him a very deep seated fear and helplessness. I knew immediately that I've failed as a brother. I couldn't protect my brother from the pain, I made him suffer. It was my mistake that I lost the chip. I ran as fast as my legs could carry me to where Rudra's voice came from and the scene that greeted me was my worst nightmare. I'll never forget it till the end of my life. Time stopped for me and everything else withered away. My little brother was lying lifeless in the pool and my heart just shattered to smithereens seeing him lying there. I heard someone shouting with such raw anguish and belatedly realised it was my own voice shouting Om's name.
I ran to him with Rudra right on my heels and we jumped in the pool and I took Om's chilled hand in mine and checked for a pulse.Those few seconds it took for me to detect a pulse were hell and my heart was thudding so rapidly I thought it might jump out of my chest any moment. Then I got a faint pulse and I could breathe again. Rudra wad hovering nearby with his eyes watering and lips trembling. I immediately took Om by his shoulders as gently as I can because I didn't want to break my brother more than he already was and hugged him close to me. The heartbeat I felt was the most soothing feeling I had ever experienced in my life.Then Rudra and I took him out of the pool and carried him to his room. All were gathered there and seeing his condition Priyanka called the doctor immediately.
Badi maa and Daadi were crying alot and Rudra looked like he was in shock. But I couldn't do anything to alleviate their pain because i myself was breaking inside. Seeing Om lying there with eyes closed no movement and so pale evoked so many bad memories and my heart was exploding. My eyes were burning and I realised I had tears running down my cheeks. I didn't even have the strength to wipe them.
I understood then that without Om I'm nothing. He is the yin to my yang. He keeps me reminded that life is not just about business and there is more to it than money and family name.In short without him I'll not be a true human being. I'll just be a money making machine. I realize that just because I'm the older brother it isn't just me who takes care of them but my little brothers also are taking care of me especially Om who understands me more than I do myself.
The doctor came and checked him. He said that it was a close call and if we had made any delay we could've lost him for good today. Badi maa took his head on her lap and gently kept stroking his hair. He gained consciousness slowly but he didn't say anything. Badi maa told him what he meant to her but bade papa didn't say anything I could detect concern in his eyes. Maybe he understood what grave mistake he had done though I doubt he'll change his ways but he may seeing his son like this after all he proved that he was not a total heartless person during lunch.
Then everyone left the room and it was only Om Rudra and I in the room. Rudra was sitting at the foot of the bed. I took the place where badi maa was sitting and kept his head on my lap. Tears started flowing silently from his eyes but I wiped them off because i could bear anything but sadness in my brothers eyes. He said he was sorry for putting us through this again but I reassured him not to worry because Rudra and I will always follow him and protect him from not only others but even from himself. I started gently stroking his hair and placed a kiss on his forehead. He sighed contentedly and started to drift off holding my other hand.
I sat with my brothers watching because I needed to be sure that they are safe. But I swear that whoever leaked this video and my family especially my Om suffer will face the full wrath of Shivaay Singh Oberoi. I will destroy their life and I'll make them regret the day they were born. But now my place is right here with my brothers watching out for them and protecting them till they can stand strong on their own again.
I didn't proof read it so please ignore any spelling or grammar mistakes.
Love,
Anya. 😉
Shivaay pov
It was interesting to have lunch with bade papa, he is nice for a change today and it is clear to anyone with eyes that Rudra was happy to have his father close by and in such a good mood too. But I was worried about Om he was not even seeing bade papa in the eye. I never imagined a day I'll see him laugh like that to the monster comment maybe he also has feelings and Rudra sure looked very glad but Om was still not happy with him but I guess that is a burned bridge now but I hope one day they reconcile. Everything was going on fine at least what passes for fine in our house and suddenly I heard daadi shouting. We all rushed there and what I saw made my head spin. Badi maa was unconscious and the Tv was displaying the news that I desperately wanted to hide from everyone. To say that I was shocked would be an understatement.
Bade papa and badi maa were blaming each other and I couldn't stand their shouting. But the last straw was him raising his hand on her, can't they understand that their constant fighting will only further push their son along the path of destruction. I shouted at them to think of Om and when I sought my brother he was not there. I swear ny heart stopped beating for a second there and all the worst case scenarios went through my mind. The thought of losing Om was like a spear being thrust into my chest and repeatedly rotated till I die. But I pushed those thoughts away because it was not the time for that and I had to stay strong for my brother.
Rudra and I went in search of Om. I was searching for drugs in his room when I heard Rudra calling me. There was that one emotion in his voice which I never wanted to hear from him a very deep seated fear and helplessness. I knew immediately that I've failed as a brother. I couldn't protect my brother from the pain, I made him suffer. It was my mistake that I lost the chip. I ran as fast as my legs could carry me to where Rudra's voice came from and the scene that greeted me was my worst nightmare. I'll never forget it till the end of my life. Time stopped for me and everything else withered away. My little brother was lying lifeless in the pool and my heart just shattered to smithereens seeing him lying there. I heard someone shouting with such raw anguish and belatedly realised it was my own voice shouting Om's name.
I ran to him with Rudra right on my heels and we jumped in the pool and I took Om's chilled hand in mine and checked for a pulse.Those few seconds it took for me to detect a pulse were hell and my heart was thudding so rapidly I thought it might jump out of my chest any moment. Then I got a faint pulse and I could breathe again. Rudra wad hovering nearby with his eyes watering and lips trembling. I immediately took Om by his shoulders as gently as I can because I didn't want to break my brother more than he already was and hugged him close to me. The heartbeat I felt was the most soothing feeling I had ever experienced in my life.Then Rudra and I took him out of the pool and carried him to his room. All were gathered there and seeing his condition Priyanka called the doctor immediately.
Badi maa and Daadi were crying alot and Rudra looked like he was in shock. But I couldn't do anything to alleviate their pain because i myself was breaking inside. Seeing Om lying there with eyes closed no movement and so pale evoked so many bad memories and my heart was exploding. My eyes were burning and I realised I had tears running down my cheeks. I didn't even have the strength to wipe them.
I understood then that without Om I'm nothing. He is the yin to my yang. He keeps me reminded that life is not just about business and there is more to it than money and family name.In short without him I'll not be a true human being. I'll just be a money making machine. I realize that just because I'm the older brother it isn't just me who takes care of them but my little brothers also are taking care of me especially Om who understands me more than I do myself.
The doctor came and checked him. He said that it was a close call and if we had made any delay we could've lost him for good today. Badi maa took his head on her lap and gently kept stroking his hair. He gained consciousness slowly but he didn't say anything. Badi maa told him what he meant to her but bade papa didn't say anything I could detect concern in his eyes. Maybe he understood what grave mistake he had done though I doubt he'll change his ways but he may seeing his son like this after all he proved that he was not a total heartless person during lunch.
Then everyone left the room and it was only Om Rudra and I in the room. Rudra was sitting at the foot of the bed. I took the place where badi maa was sitting and kept his head on my lap. Tears started flowing silently from his eyes but I wiped them off because i could bear anything but sadness in my brothers eyes. He said he was sorry for putting us through this again but I reassured him not to worry because Rudra and I will always follow him and protect him from not only others but even from himself. I started gently stroking his hair and placed a kiss on his forehead. He sighed contentedly and started to drift off holding my other hand.
I sat with my brothers watching because I needed to be sure that they are safe. But I swear that whoever leaked this video and my family especially my Om suffer will face the full wrath of Shivaay Singh Oberoi. I will destroy their life and I'll make them regret the day they were born. But now my place is right here with my brothers watching out for them and protecting them till they can stand strong on their own again.
I didn't proof read it so please ignore any spelling or grammar mistakes.
Love,
Anya. 😉
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