ShivIka IshKara FF - Ishq Ishq Ishq cha 18 on page 34 update 10.3.17

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Main ek OS likhna chahti thi. Lekin main ye OS hindi me likhungi. I hope u all like it.

CHAPTER 2 - Page 2
CHAPTER 3 - Page 3
CHAPTER 4 - Page 5
CHAPTER 5 - Page 9
CHAPTER 6 - Page 12
CHAPTER 7 - Page 13
CHAPTER 8 - Page 17
CHAPTER 9 - Page 19
CHAPTER 10 - Page 21
CHAPTER 11 - Page 22
CHAPTER 12 - Page 24
CHAPTER 13 - Page 26
CHAPTER 14 - Page 28
CHAPTER 15 - Page 29
CHAPTER 16 - Page 32
CHAPTER 17 - Page 33
CHAPTER 18 - Page 34
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was really nice
Do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1


[COLOR]Story shuru hoti hai jab video leak ho jata hai or is wajah se Oberoi mention me bahut hungama hota hai. OM inse bahut hert hota hai or ghar se chala jata hai. Shivay in sabka zimmedar Anika ko Manta hai or gusse me usase milne jata hai. Wo Anika ke paas pahuchta hai.

Shivay- kimat kya hai tumhari?
Anika- aap pagal hai kya? Aapki himmat kaise hui Mujhse aisa ghatiya sawal karne ki. Aapne Mujhe samajh kya rakha hai?
Shivay- main tumhe bilkul sahi samjha hu. Bolo kitne me bechi wo chip?
Anika- Aapka dimag khrab ho gaya hai kya? Are maine wo chip aapko de to di.
Shivay- Mujhe dene se pehle kise di?
Anika- Are main kyu kisi ko chip dene lagi. Maine chip kisi ko nahi di.
Shivay- Jhooth mat Bolo. Tum janti nahi ho tumhari wajah se mere sath kya hua hai.
Anika- Main bus itna janti hoo ki jo bhi wo meri wajah se nahi hua hai. Ab aap jate hai ya main apni chappal nikalu.

Anika ki baat sunkar Shivay ko gussa aa jata hai or wo Anika ko zor se wall pe dhakka deta hai phir usake close aata hai.

Shivay- Kosis bhi mat karna warna...
Anika- Warna kya? Police ke Hawale kar denge.
Shivay- Tum janti nahi ki tumne jo kiya hai uske badle main tumhara kya haal kar sakta hoo.
Anika- Haath chodiye mera kya badtamizi hai.
Shivay- Tumhari jaisi badtamiz ladki Mujhe tamiz Sikhayegi. Or waise bhi tumne jo mere sath kiya hai...
Anika- kuch nahi kiya hai maine. Aapko yakeen karna hai to karye warna bhad me jaiye.

Anika Shivay ko dhakka de ke waha se Jane lagti hai.

Shivay- Tumhe main itni aasani se maaf nahi karunga. U just wait main tumhara kya haal karta hoo.
Anika- Honge aap Shivay Singh Oberoi. Darte honge log aapse. Per main aapse nahi darti. Jo karna hai kar lijiye.

Anika waha se chali jati hai.

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Omkara apni car me gusse se jaa raha hai. Wo ek Jagah car rokta hai or bahar aata hai. Wo ek gandi si gali hai. OM waha jakar ek ghar ke bahar khada ho jata hai.

OM- Nahi. Main ye nahi kar sakta. Shivay se wada kiya hai maine ki phir kabhi drugs nahi lunga. Chahe kitni bhi problems ho dubara is raste pe kabhi nahi chalunga. Shivay se kiya wada main nahi tod sakta.

OM waha se palat aata hai. Wo apni car ke paas aata hai lekin use chod ke paidal hi Aage nikal jata hai.

OM- Kya mila Mujhe Omkara Oberoi banke. Ye naam ye status mere paas nahi hota to shayad main jyada khush hota. Mere khud ke baap ke paas mere liye kabhi time tha hi nahi. Or ab to wo mere maa ke sath naam ka rishta bhi khatam karna chahte hai. Kash koi Mujhse ye naam ye paise sab le le lekin Mujhe meri pehchan me apna le. Omkara Oberoi ko nahi jaise sirf Omkara se Matlab ho.

OM thoda Aage badhta hai to ek chote se restaurant me ek pita apne bete ko apne haath se khana khila raha hota hai. OM ki aankho me ye dekh ke aansu aa jate hai. Wo restaurant ke andar jata hai or us table ke saamne wali table pe baith jata hai. Wahi ek kone me Ishana bhi baithi hai. Uski nazar omkara pe padti hai.

Ishana- Ye to wahi Lambe baalo wala hai jo us ladke sath tha. Lekin ye yaha kya kar raha hai. Jo insan tip me 10000 de sakta hai wo itne chote se restaurant me kya karne aaya hai.

Waiter OM ke paas aata hai.
Waiter- Kya lenge sir?

Waiter ki aawaz se OM ka Dhyan tootata hai.
Om- wo... ek chai.

Ishana- Pata karna hoga ye yaha kya kar raha hai.

Kuch der baad restaurant me ek Waiter ke haath se plate ek Aadmi ke kapdo pe gir jati hai. Wo us Waiter ko Marne lagta hai. OM bich me aata hai.
Om- maar kyu rahe hai aap ise?
Person - meri itni mehngi shirt khrab kar di isne.
Om- galti se ho gaya hoga.
Person- galti se... lekin ab isake paise kaun dega. Tu dega.
Om- Haa main deta hu.


OM apna purs nikalna chahta hai per use ehsas hota hai ki purs to wo ghar per hi bhool aaya hai.
Person - Kya hua? Paise nikal.
Om- paise to nahi hai mere paas.
Person- lo khud kangal hai or chala hai dusro ki madad karne. Chal nikal yaha se.

Wo Aadmi OM ko dhakka deta hai or wo darwaze se takra jata hai. Uske sir Pe chot lag jati hai. Ishana ye sab dekh ke hairan ho jati hai.[/COLOR]
Edited by poojaluvnbt - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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itni jaldi kaise path liya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Start
Waiting for more scenes of ShivIka n IshKa ❤️
Update soon and plz do Pm me:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KRITII

Nice Start

Waiting for more scenes of ShivIka n IshKa❤️
Update soon and plz do Pm me:)

Thanks but I can't PM u yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER -2


Om Restaurant se bahar aata hai. Ishana bhi uske piche piche aati hai.

Ishana - kamal hai. Us din to tip me 10000 de diye or aaj paise ho nahi the.

Om ke sir se halka khoon nikal raha hai.
Om- Shivay sahi kehta hai Oberoi naam hai tabhi hum hai. Koi pehchan nahi meri is Oberoi naam ke bina. Sari zindagi is naam ke purchayi ke niche jina hai. Agar main Oberoi nahi to koi nahi mera.

Om ki aankho me aansu hai. Wo ek bike se takrane wala hota hai tabhi Ishana use khich leti hai.
Biker- Are marna hai to Jake train ke Aage kud na meri bike ke Aage kyu Mar raha hai.
Ishana- Tum dekh ke bike nahi chala sakte or dusro ko bolte ho.

Ishana ne om ka haath pakad rakha hai. Wo use road ki side pe lati hai.
Ishana- In rasto pe bahut sambhal ke chalna padta hai. Zara sa idhar udhar huye ki bus cut gaya baba Ji ke ghar ka ticket.

Om ishana ko gaur se dekhe ja raha hai.
Ishana- (maan me) kahi isne Mujhe pehchan to nahi liya.
Om- Thanks.
Ishana- with smile... it's OK. Waise tumhara naam...
Om- main chalta hoo.
Ishana- OK.

Om kuch Aage Jake ek auto rokta hai or usase chala jata hai. Ishana ye dekh ke confuse ho jati hai.

Ishana- Haiii us din jo insan mila tha or aaj jo mila hai dono kitne alag hai. Aisa lagta hai wo raja bhoj tha or ye gangu teli. Ye asal me hai kya? Ye paise wala hai ya isake sath jo tha sirf wo paise Wala tha. Tip usi ne di thi or 50 lakh bhi usi ne diye the. To ye kaun hai?

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In Oberoi mention jab Shivay ghar aata hai to Rudra bahut pareshan hai. Shivay ko dekh ke wo uske gale lag jata hai.
Shivay - Kya hua?
Rudra- OM Bhaiya abhi tak ghar nahi aaye hai. Mujhe unki bahut phikar ho rahi hai.
Shivay - tune phone kiya use?
Rudra - Phone wallet sab ghar pe chod ke gaye hai.
Shivay- Tu pareshan mat ho. Main dhundhta hu use.

Tabhi omkara ghar aata hai.
Shivay - Kaha tha tu or ye chot kaise lagi hai tujhe?
Om- Auto ka bill paid kar de plz.

Omkara itna keh ke apne room me chala jata hai. Shivay uske piche piche jata hai.

Shivay - Tu auto se kyu aaya hai or teri gadi kaha hai.
OM - kuch waqt bina Oberoi naam ke gujarna chahta tha. Isliye auto se...
Shivay - Koi baat nahi. Ye chot kaise lagi tujhe?
Om- aise hi.

Shivay first aid box lekar Omkara ki Patti karta hai.
Shivay - main janta hoo tu bahut pareshan hai. Per tu ghabra mat jiski wajah se tera ye haal hai na main use chodunga nahi.
Om- Jab zakham dene wale apne ho na to unhe saza bhi nahi de sakte. Main thik hoo shivay. Tu pareshan mat ho.
Shivay- Pata hai Mujhe mera bhai bahut strong hai. Mushkil se mushkil situation se bhi yu deal kar leta hai. Ab tu aaram kar main chalta hoo.

Shivay jaane lagta hai to Omkara uska hath pakad ke use rokta hai or zor se use hug karta hai.

OM - Main strong nahi hu shivay. Nahi hu main strong. Main aaj phir usi raste pe chal nikla tha jaha se tu Mujhe itni mushkil se nikal ke laya tha.
Shivay - Kahi tune phir se...
Om- Nahi. Tujhse wada kiya tha na. OM ke sanso ki dor toot sakti hai. Per tujhse kiya wada nahi todunga kabhi.
Shivay - Or kabhi todna bhi mat. Kyunki main tujhe dubara nahi kho sakta. Ek baat Humesha yaad rakhna acche bure her situation me main tere sath khada hu.
Om- janta hoo.
Rudra- or main.. Mujhe alag kar diya. Main bhi to aap ke sath hoo.
Om- aaja.

Rudra bhi waha aa jata hai or teeno sath me hug karte hai.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was sooo emotional...awww my omie 😔
Continue sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So interesting
Love it
Poor om
love the brothers bond moment at the end
Update soon
Pm if possible

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