Omkara Ishana SS: JHOOTHA HI SAAHI*Banner Updated Pg 1 ,4,8*

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OMKARA ISHANA SS: JHOOTHA HI SAAHI

Part 1:



The phone rings




Voice 1 : Hello ?




Voice 2: Maine marna chahta HOON




Voice 1: Listen Calm down




Voice 2: Nahi...I'm done with this life...bass hogaya I'm committing suicide.




Voice 1: Bass yahi baaki thha na... sirf aapne baare mei soch rahe ho...apne family ka toh socho...unka kya hoga.




Voice 2: Bura lagegA unhe but they'll be fine.

I don't have a reason to live anymore.




Voice 1: Agar reason nai hota toh you wouldn't have called on this number. 😔

Tumhe pata hai tum kitne mean ho, marte marte bhi sirf apne baare mein soch rahe ho, kya kaha tumne Family ko hurt hoga but they'll be fine. Unhe kitna Bura lagegA ki jis bete ko itna bada Kia usne aapni jaan leli.
Chalo family toh theek hai , mere baare mein socha?😡




Voice 2: Magar mai aapko jaanta bhi nai HOON? Pehli baar baat kar raha hoo aapse.😕




Voice 1: haan ik . Magar agar tum Suicide Helpline PE call karke bologe ke ' mai suicide kar raha HOON, don't stop me, I don't have a reason to live and then you commit suicide.' 🤢🤢🤢
Job toh meri jayegi Na ! 😡😡
Isliye itne mean ho.




Voice 2: I'm sorry. Mujhe idea nai tha ki aapki job jayegi 🥱




Voice 1: You better be.
Now calm down . Breathe in and out.
Abb batao kya hai problem.




Voice 2: Mujhe darr lag raha hai yeh zindagi se. Mai nai bata sakta.😭




Voice 1: It's okay . Mai line PE hi HOON . Phone maat cut karna.




Voice 2: Humm.



(After 1hr)



Voice 2: you're there?




Voice 1: yes



(After 3hrs)



Voice 2: you're there?



Voice 1: yess



(The whole night passed,both of them didn't even speak a word about the incident)


Morning:


Voice 2: Ohh I'm really sorry. I had no idea when did I doze off to sleep. Are you still there?



Voice 1: No Problem:)
Feeling better?


Voice 2: Very much. Thanks a lot.



Voice 1: 😊




Voice 2: Aapka naam?




Voice 1: Sorry 'Rules are Rules ' I can't let you know. Aacha tumhara?




Voice 2: You can call me Om.



Voice 1: Om 😃.
Aacha laga tumse baat karke :)


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Heyyaa peeps,
Well couldn't stop myself from writing on my Omie 😳
Really hope you guys like this prologue.
And as the Heading suggests ' JHOOTHA hi Saahi '
Omie saachhai ki Moorti will meet IshanA jiska koi kaam Jhoot bole bina nai hota.
I have a bad habit of mixing Hindi and English. Please bare with me.
If you like this update plz like and comment and agar nai aacha lagla toh bhi comment 😆 and tell where should I make the changes .

Love KRITI 😳

Other Works:
IshKara OS: No More Secrets
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4685069



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KRITII thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index:
Part 1 : Page 1
Part 2 : Page 4
Edited by KRITII - 9 years ago
asyaarshilover thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice and interesting start kriti
Cont soon😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start.I liked it a lot.Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😃 aww so sweet start
even i have that habit of mixing hindi and english 🤣 same pinch

do pm when u update
this girl is so cheerful yaar ishana
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiya_12

Kriti good start
Continue

Thankiee😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Nice and interesting start kriti

Cont soon😛

ThAnkk you soo much 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akirawilliams

Nice start.I liked it a lot.Continue soon.

Thanks Akira 😃
Will try to update soon :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...tejaswi...

😃 aww so sweet start

even i have that habit of mixing hindi and english 🤣 same pinch

do pm when u update
this girl is so cheerful yaar ishana

Hhehehe I'm so use to mixing both the languages 😆
Yes yes will pm you for sure 😃
Ishana's cheerfulness is just one shade of her, there are many more to come.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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gud one kriti... i read it... bt like btn wasnt working

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