A Meeting : A Rudra-Anika OS

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

I literally have no words! Can I bow? 😆

Plz continue this if you can, definitely wanna read the next part!

And, and, and, when did Rudra become so smart?!😃

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Pearl

@pearl.16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Damn !! That was a good one... Seriously I loved it... It was pure perfection !!!!!

Do make a part 2 of this if you can.. Like you know how AnShi meet and all that stuff !! Please..

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vidya29

@vidya29

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Hello,

I really liked this one.I think I have read another one of your works but I like this one a tad bit more.

You have a way with words,endearing us to your interpretation of a character. I would say I like your interpretation of these characters more than the one on the show.

Beautifully expressed and I loved the little details interspersed in the tale that give it depth. I was a bit worried that your Om and Shivaaye hadn't reconciled. My love for these three is what gets me to watch this show and I hoped that they would reconcile.And reconcile,they did! Within a few days it seems.Thank God.

The brotherhood and immense love between these brothers was beautifully depicted.Anika making her own place in this arrangement was the cherry on top.Loved it.

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joya.asya

@joya.asya

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Wow that was amazing 👏
Keep writing

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

I really love the way You described the Rudra and Anika's meeting and the way Rudra was telling what happned I really like the way Rudra describe the Om's anger... toofan se pehle aane vaali shaanti and all.. and last part what rudra did about Om and Shivaay's tiff... I really love the way you added Shivaay and Om spying on Badi ma and bade pa...

Edited by IlaTanwar - 9 years ago

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wordsofwisdom

@wordsofwisdom

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Omg it was just brilliant piece of work , totally love it.
Every emotions were so welly described
A perfect blend of humor& feeling
It can make u laugh & cry at same time
Such a magical use of words
I love om , rudra & Anika bond here
And despised shivaye a lil bit cause of his out of control anger prob
Awesome work

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Wow...I just loved it yaar

What's going on in the forum, one after one amazing story 👏

You wrote it amazingly

I loved it from the beginning to the end...specially the ending of on n rudra⭐️

Seriously...I m speechless don't knw wht to write after this

Awesome👏

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

OMG it's so good can't stop myself reading it again and again
Please write more on this

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Mahalakshmi

@MahaSrilu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

That was damn painful to read...Some one we love immensely and they not trust us...Annika's pain can be imaginable...Liked Rudra's overly tragic story...But ultimately I LOVED IT...Pls continue this one...This is damn good.

~Maha~

Edited by MahaSrilu - 9 years ago