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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome ya...
U just described shivaay clearly... He truly has taken a bit of everyone s qualities... Really a unique one...
Loved ur chapters.
Pls do update soon...
Looking forward on how shivaay gets his room back...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Hello red,
Thank you for the PM.
I am not writing a lengthy one yet,but I loved it.
Rudra is adorable.It is funny how I am not attracted to any OBro,but your writing strengthens the admiration I have for the characters.You are right,I judged him and dislike him.
But,like people,even a fictional character deserves fairness.not the lovely kind.
I am convinced.
Take care.
P.S. This was still lengthy.Sorry I can't do succinct even if my life depends on it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Bash u my foot!! U r freaking awesome writer!!

U wrote it beautifully!!

Keep it up babes!!

Update next soon..

Thanks 4 pm!!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Bash you for what, for writing such an awesome update. You must be crazy. It was so emotional, om's thoughts about shivaay and his love for his brothers is eyewatering.
Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Beautifully written. Next time do pm me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Amazing
I loved this update dear
Thnx for pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Read the last two parts in a go...
Bitch tia...Lady baba nahi...lady shaitan hai wo...
Bachaya tho bachaya par kya diologue mara Shivay ne...Loved it Totally...

And today's update was a spot on dear red...you nailed it to perfection...after reading Om's description Shivay... The only thought came into my mind is only You understood The Shivay Singh Oberoi perfectly...I also loved the obro's scene...and Rudra's tongue slip... and soumya's "Oh yes,Mr.Oberoi,your wife-" that was amazing.This is by far the best of your updates..

XOXO
~Maha~

P.S:Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
bang on upt
perfect capture of shivaay character
u really read the characters well
the upt was fabulous
loved it so much
self praising rudra is so much
om-shivaay understand each other really well
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

I just loved it.

It is like something really clicked with me and I am looking at Shivaay with a different perspective now. Thanks a lot for that.
I adore your writing. It flows in a tandem and seemingly levels up your narration lending it a healthy curiosity to glue a reader to the screen. I applaud you for that!
The chapter was brilliant.
Rudra as always bubbles up happily and melts even more at Soumya's sight. I loved how Soumya mistook Anika to be Shivaay's wife
Is it weird that I found Shivaay's rants adorable
Om's perpective on Shivaay was intense. Thorouhghly enjoyed it.
Will be waiting for the next.

-Niki



I am so very glad that I could present Shivaay in a different light and make everyone reconsider their dislike for him. I know it won't go away soon enough. But it would, with time.
Plus, your comments make me so excited, Niki. I scroll down to read and reread your comments that is how happy they make me.
Aha, Rudra will always lighten up the mood. And somehow, he is always entranced in Somya's presence. Lol! Poor guy!
And of course, it is not weird that you found Shivaay's rants to be adorable! I personally enjoyed writing that, knowing that something similar would be a part of the show in the future.
I am writing the next part starting tomorrow, and I'll be quick with the update of the One Shot I am dedicating to you.

XOXO
~Red
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tharunisa

Awesome ya...

U just described shivaay clearly... He truly has taken a bit of everyone s qualities... Really a unique one...
Loved ur chapters.
Pls do update soon...
Looking forward on how shivaay gets his room back...


Hahahaha
Thank you dearie for such a lovely comment!
And I couldn't agree more, Shivaay is a reflection of every single Oberoi, unique too!
I will update very soon!

XOXO
~Red

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