Kabir Saab ki Kashmakash! TS- updated 22-4-18 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: crispsy

It was so beautiful. Please please write more. You are a gifted writer [:Y]

@ghissapitta your reactions are so cute [:>D<]


Thank you. Working on second part 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This was so cute and awesome<3
Absolutely loved it.
Amazing!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was beautiful.😊
Do write more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: arnavkidevani


Thank you. Working on second part 😉

waiting.. Yay 😳 missing ZaBeer
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Would it be acceptable if my story has some slightly mature parts??? If not I'll tone it down. 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: arnavkidevani

Would it be acceptable if my story has some slightly mature parts??? If not I'll tone it down. 😉


You are writer you should write acc to ur imagination. Saw in another forum, most are 18+ OS, FF. It should not be prob i guess
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2 is posted below. I hope you enjoy it and give it the love you all gave my first story.

Thanks in advance

Enjoy!

Aik din kabhi jo
khud ko tarashay
Meri nazar se tu zara

Aankhon se teri
Kya kya chuppa hai
Tujh ko dekhaoon
Main zara

Ik unkahi thi dastaan dastaan
Kehny lage ga aaina

Subhan Allah aaa
Jo ho raha hai pehli dafa hai
Walla aaa!

The gentle warmth of the morning sun peeked through the shutters. Kabir stirred awake from his unrestful slumber as a ray of the morning sun gently caressed his face. Feeling a slight shiver run down his spine due to the Kashmiri chill he sleepily tried to snuggle deeper into the blanket. As he did so, he became aware of a weight on chest and left leg.

Molvi saab felt something stir inside him.

Opening his eyes Kabir instinctively bought his arm to the weight on his chest and looked down. Zara's arm was draped around his neck and in her sleep she was side hugging him. Her leg was on top of his.

Kabir groaned in frustration as he felt a familiar ache return.
"Ya Allah, not again!"

Fully awake now, last nights ordeal came flooding back to him.

The self control kabir had learned over the years had been tested to the limit yesterday as Zara had come out of the bathroom dressed for bed. Walking shyly towards him, clad in the revealing outfit, she had tested his resolve to the max. He had tried, unsuccessfully to avert his eyes. But hadn't been able to.

Her shyness igniting a fire within him.

"Kabir please...erm...tum yay... baand do ge?"

Zara had asked innocently. Stopping dangerously close to him she had turned around, lifted her hair aside and revealed her naked back to him, save for 2 long straps dangling from the neckline.

The sight of Zara's creamy skin had shook molvi saab to the core. Viewing his wife in this unadulterated manner for the first time had created a new and unknown havoc inside him.

"Ya Allah meri madad kar"

Shocked, it had taken Kabir a few minutes to contemplate what was happening. He had stood dumbly until he heard her speak again.

"Please Kabir... karo na...mera haath nahi ponch raha."

The sweetly uttered request had nearly unmanned Kabir. He had groaned in frustration and wondered if the woman even realised what she was doing to him.

Zara was a novice in these matters so had needed an internal pep talk to gather up enough courage to wear the negligee. It had taken her 10 minutes to work out how to get into the garment and then a further 10 to build up the confidence to walk into the bedroom, and in front of Kabir.

When she had come out and seen Kabirs dumb struck expression though, she knew it had been worth it. Unbeknown to Kabir, Zara had revelled in her new found power.

"Wesy to molvi saab baat baat pe argument kartay hain, lekin ab kesi bolti band huwi hai!" Zara grinned inwardly.

She had had a really hard time containing her giggles which had threatened to erupt forth any minute.

But then, when Zara had felt Kabirs trembling fingers, fumbling with the straps, on her back, the unintentional touches had evoked new sensations which became too unbearable. She had been unable to control her deep breaths, closing her eyes as Kabir looped and threaded the straps of the nightie at her request.

"Ya Allah humain kya ho raha hai!"

Zara had underestimated the chemistry between her and her husband and found that what she had started as a teasing match had quickly escalated into something which she didn't have any control over. The sword of desire seemed to be a double edged one. Effecting her as much as it was effecting Kabir.

"Lo ho gaya" Kabirs barely audible utterance, near her ear, sent shivers up Zaras spine. And her resolve to seduce him went out of the window. The turmoil of emotions had been too much for Zara. She suddenly lost her nerve and overcome by embarrassment decided to go quickly to bed instead. Suddenly she didn't feel so confident or competent enough to continue any kind of seduction.

Trying to regain her composure she had said-
"Humain neend aa rahi hai, hum sonay lagy hain!"

Before Kabir could process anything, Zara slid past him, jumped into her side of the bed and closed her eyes. Leaving her husband trying to figure out what had just happened between them.

However for Kabir the torture had not ended there.

Halfway through the night he had been awoken by someone calling out his name. After looking over he had seen Zara mumbling in her sleep. Trying to ignore her he tried to go back to sleep.

But then it had came again.

"Hmmm...Kabeeerrr...please"

Kabir had jolted up in bed and wondered what Zara was up to, but he found that she was sound asleep. He concluded she must be dreaming.

About him.

The moans however had grown louder and louder. So much so that all sleep was lost to molvi Saab who found himself annoyingly jealous of the "kabeeer" reigning over Zara's dreams. Although eventually she had stopped and gone into a deep sleep. Kabir on the other hand had been left awake most of the night trying hard to control the desire evoked by the hoarsely whispered version of his name and Zara's relentless writhing next to him on the bed.

And now she was wrapped around him again. As Kabir looked over Zara's face to check if she was awake, he was once again mesmerised by her beauty. Her silky hair scattered over the pillow. Her pink slightly parted lips were like rose petals trembling slightly as she slept. What would happen if he quickly touched them with his own, Kabir wondered. Would thy be as soft as they looked. Then suddenly Zara turned in her sleep, disentangled herself and moved to the other side of the bed.

Kabir breather a sigh of relief as he quietly slipped out of the bed and rushed to the bathroom before his hormones took over.

"Aaj to Allah ne bacha liya. Abhi to 5 raatain baki hain moulvi saab!"

With a deep sigh and a slight grin at his predicament, Kabir turned on and walked under the shower.




For those of you wondering what Zara was dreaming about...

"Kabir kya kar rahe ho?
"Kuch nahi bas badla le raha hoon
"Kya?
"Haan. Tum ne mujhay sari raat tang kiya to badley main kuch to dena paday ga
"Wo kya?
"Wo jo doosri boat ka swaar maang raha tha!

After a shocked pause and Kabirs raised eyebrows. Zara pushes him away shyly and says.

"Kabir...humain chodo
"Kyun? Humari biwi ho. itna to haq hai hamara.
"Hum ne vuzu kiya hai
"To?
"hamara wazu toot jaye ga
"To phir karlena, main to nahi chodhny wala!
"Kabir...Humain namaz padhni hai
"To? Bathroom main paani khatam to nahi huwa.
"Kabir...chodo na!
"In fact extra large tub ko check out karte hain
"Kya?? Kabir tum to maulvi ho!
"To Kya maulvi apni biwi ko kiss nahi karte?
"Kabir!
"Kyaa?
"Tumhay ni lagta tum bohat besharm ho gaye ho
"Abhi hum nay besharmi shuru kahan ki hai Zara begum...
Edited by arnavkidevani - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Wow incredible update ☺️
Absolutely hot and awesome..
You should write more
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Hahahaha 🤣
I enjoyed this fully..please write MORE!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
😆
superb
continue soon

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