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Well written both updates...
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Fascinating Chapter
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26: Maya's Tragic Death

I cupped her cheeks getting teary eyed and kissed her cheeks and forehead and nodded in negative at her and hugged her. 'No baby no, you won't die, who said you will die? You will live, mumma won't ever let any evil shadow fall on you,' I said calming her down. She broke the hug and ran away. 'Maya aunty is also bad,' she said to me. 'I know she is bad, but I don't think that grandma told you all this, so who told you all this? You know very well there is no such presence in our house.'



'But mumma, if I tell you, promise me you won't tell anyone,' she said. 'That doesn't matters, whoever scared you like this won't ever be spared by me, my hands are no less, they weigh of one kilo, tell me who told you all this?' I asked her. 'Maya aunty, she told me in the morning to tell you this poem, so that you get scared,' she told me and I chuckled. 'Aww, so stupid of her, who told you mumma will get scared? Joke of the century, stupid lady I say, I just got scared seeing my baby scared.'


'But you got teary eyed,' she said wiping the tear from my cheek and showed me. 'So did you,' I told her and wiped the tear from her cheek and showed her. She smiled and blew on my tear which was on her finger. I smiled and did the same. I kissed her and pulled her closer hugging her tightly. I got a message and I broke the hug and made her sit on bed. I opened the message and saw that there was an address written inside. 'Deepika, you be with grandma OK, I will just come and go, bye.'

I said and went from there outside my house and sat in the car driving off to the address, I was wondering who would've sent it as it was an unknown number. As I arrived, I got down the car and rung the doorbell of the house, a man answered the door, I recognized him as Arjun Sharma. 'Hi, Aarohi Raichand?' he asked and I nodded. He moved back to let me in and I moved inside. He closed the door behind us. We sat on the couch. 'So what can I get you? Tea? Coffee?' He asked me.


'Nothing, just some answers to my questions, did you got the photos I sent you?' I asked. 'Yes, so you met my wife Maya?' he asked. 'Yes I did but why you wrote she is in heaven? I mean she is alive so why she would be in heaven?' I asked. 'I don't know how you met Maya because she is dead and I know she loved us a lot. She won't fake her death,' he said and sighed. 'I was on one bike, Maya on another, Saanjh was on other bike, their cousin brothers Ayaan on one and Shubh on one,' he told me.


'We planned to have a race that day, and that the one who will win will be the one who will be the most successful in their lives, I regret it, so we all started riding and Maya was going the fastest, we all were cheering on the bike, she was so busy in racing in the ride that we saw the danger sign and we even kept shouting for her to stop but she thought of it as some kind of prank. Then came the slope area, we saw her going there, she winked at us turning around and her bike went down the slope, I got down my bike and ran to her.'

'Then?' I asked as tears start to drip from his eyes. 'Then I caught hold of her hand, not able to bear the weight of her hand, I too fell with her and the slope was very deep, we kept rolling downwards while the others were shouting our names in agony, we ended up fallen in a jungle near a tree and I saw her wounded and her eyes were closed, I tried getting up but I too went unconscious.'


'What a tragic incident,' I said with a shivering voice. 'Next thing I remember is waking up in a hospital, doctors told me that I am lucky that I for saved even after falling from such a high place, but I asked about Maya, they told me Maya is nowhere, I asked Saanjh too, she got quiet, I asked Ayaan, he was also quiet, Shubh told me her body was nowhere to be seen, they only found blood,' he said wiping his tears. 'Her mother became mentally disturbed, father is in a hope that she will come back some day.'

He sighed. 'Saanjh lives in denial, she sees Maya everywhere, she talks to her, she has got tumor, it's right between her optic nerve and vocal cord and on operation, she can become mute or blind, she doesn't even remembers that incident, she's living in her past life. A part of her brain is damaged, Ayaan seems so lost after seeing Maya's body nowhere, Shubh just keeps saying to find Maya but what to do? He is a kid so we keep telling him that she is lost somewhere and will come soon, but now you said you see her, you even have a proof. Strange,' he said.

'You know what? The first time I saw her, she saw me and Deep dancing and she broke a glass on in hand but no blood came out, and on investigation I found that she is undead,' I told him. 'What? Maya is undead? What do you mean?' he asked totally confused. 'Only the body is of Maya and the soul is of someone else but don't know of who, Maya is living with someone else's soul,' I told him. 'That is why her body got lost, now that it is found, it is living dead.'
Edited by salley145 - 7 years ago
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27~Finally An Angel

You do not worry, I will free her body. I will find out who is doing all this,' I said and went from there to my house. The whole time, the story of Maya kept on repeating in my mind again and again, it was night and I went to sleep, I woke up and saw that it was 12 am and it was time to go to terrace and meet Virat. I went there with slow steps and a racing heart. I saw him standing with his back towards me. I called his name softly.

He turned around. 'What happen Virat? You are still on the earth when Tara has returned to you? Don't tell me her obsession with Deep is awakened all over again,' I said. 'Tara never came to me even after I warned her that day,' he said and I gasped. 'She never came to you? What do you mean? Why are you both after us? Leave us alone and stop playing these dirty games,' I said and turned to go but he held my arm and I turned and looked at my arm and then at him. 'What now?' I asked.

'No Alisha, I mean Aarohi, you are not understanding, I am not joking,' he said. 'No Virat, you are also with her in her dirty games, you bloody loved her so she is trapping you, she was born like this but why are you becoming like her? For God's sake Virat, I love Deep, I will not leave him, you know what? I thought that my brain cancer was God's sign of bringing Deep and Tara together, I made them marry each other to make her happy, I shouldn't have done that, I should have died in his arms happily.'

'It was not your fault, more than Deep, you of course loved Tara, for her you did that, after death I could meet her and be with her but again she left me, not lying Aarohi. Be careful, that sister in law of yours was telling you that whatever is hidden from you will be revealed to you, so I revealed it, and she also told you that whatever or whoever you have lost will return to you, the most important thing you lost was Tara right?' he asked and I nodded. 'She has returned, be careful Aarohi,' he said and vanished.

I went back to my room and sat on the bed cryingly. 'Tara, I really loved you, if I never had brain cancer, I wouldn't have made you marry Deep, nor let you be away from Virat,' I said cryingly and laid down to sleep. I woke up taped to the wall, the cello tapes completely covered my body excluding my neck, face, hands and feet, my mouth was also covered by it. I struggled to speak but only muffled voices came out. I looked at my surroundings and realized it as Maya's house, she appeared in front of me all of a sudden.


She came to me slowly and smilingly and untaped my mouth. 'Aarohi, aww, I feel sad to do all this to you, now that you know my truth, tata bye, you will have to go to the same place where I should've gone long ago, tera Mujhse Hai pehle Ka naata koi, yoon hi nahi dil lubhaata koi, jaane tu ya jaane Na, maane tu ya maane na,' she sung and placed the knife on my neck. 'Who are you? You aren't Maya, are you? Then who are you?' I asked with shivering voice. 'Who do you think?'

I was sweating a lot, I just hoped Deep will come and save me but he didn't come. 'I will show you,' she said and she closed her eyes and when she opened them they were blood red and suddenly they turned to pure white. I woke up with a jolt and screamed loudly. Deep woke up switching on the light and calmed me. 'What happen?' He asked and I got scared as he came close to me. 'Ugh, Maya,' I said in fear. 'Relax, she's not here, why are you scared of her by the way?' he asked laughing at my fear suddenly.

'Shut up! You're laughing at me? Oh sorry I forgot she is your new love interest and if I say anything about her then you will feel bad,' I said turning away my face. 'It is nothing like that,' he said. 'Yes it is, she was trying to kill me in my dream, her eyes, blood red and then pure white,' I said still shivering. 'She can never kill you,' he said. 'Why? Defending her? Oh yeah you don't believe me,' I said looked down. 'Do you have something else to tell me?' he asked me.

'Maya is one from the undead, that day when glass went inside her hands, no blood at all came out, she told a scary poem to Deepika to scare her, she told me she doesn't need you to call at her house as you live in her heart, I met Virat today, he said that Tara never returned to him, what if Tara has possessed Maya's body?' I said. 'And what if Virat and Tara are together in all this?' Deep asked. 'Why would Virat come to warn me then? I met Maya's husband Arjun also today only,' I said.

'Let's just sleep for now and then discuss all this tomorrow,' he said and we laid down to sleep again. Next day, I went to drop Deepika at school and I saw a lady come to me. 'Hi, I am Rashi, I know everything about your problem, I have come to help you, heaven sent me down, yoon samjho, light ne mujhe bheja hai tumhari life se darkness hatanay k liye,' she told me and smiled. I smiled back at her. 'Can you really help me?' I asked. 'Yes I can, let's go at your place and talk,' she said.


Edited by salley145 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome superb lovely fabulous updates dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh..so maya only taught the poem to deepika.what's her intention..arohi arjun meeting was nice.maya's death was so painful.saanjh's condition is also bad.sad.so maya's body is possessed by an evil spirit n that's why she is evil now.virat meeting arohi was a surprise.loved their conversation .I was shocked about Maya abducting arohi.surprisingly it was a nightmare.like ardeep think is Tara the one in maya's body ..hope like deep thinks virat is not involved.surprised to see rashi as the angel from heaven to help them.perfect pics
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing updates dear...👏
Both updates are so lovely...😳
Waiting for the next...😃
Update soon...😳
Thnks for the PM...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Very interesting double update
intense...
shocking and scary...
awesome update
nice pictures...
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Posted: 7 years ago

A Shocking Scary yet so Beautiful

I just totally enjoyed both chapters very much

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