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Posted: 7 years ago
22~Mission Maya

I watched as Deep and Maya went and danced together.

Aankhon ko teri aadat hai
Tu dikhay na to inhay shikayat hai
Aankhon ko teri aadat hai
Tu dikhay na to inhay shikayat hai
Bin chuay chhu liye hain
Tu ne mujhko diye hain
Pyaar ke yeh taranay jaaniya
Ye jo ab horaha hai kuchh ajab horaha hai
Kya yahi pyaar ka hai ehsaas
Sau aasmano ko or do jahano ko
Chhor k ayi tere pas
Sau aasmano ko or do jahano ko
Chhor k ayi tere pas
Sau aasmano ko or do jahano ko
Chhor k ayi tere pas
Maya sung trying to flirt with my husband and danced with him and my jerk husband was also smiling at her.

Jaane kya honay laga
Mujhko nahi hai khabar
Kiun neend se door ye
Jaane lagi hai nazar
He left Maya's hand and came to dance with me and held my hand and I could see Maya's eyes getting red from anger while I smiled as he twirled me and I fell in his arms and he slowly straightened me with a cute eyelock.

Chhoro yeh saari baatein
Ab mili hain jo raatein
Inhay jaanay na dena jaaniya
I sang dancing with Deep and got teary eyed when Maya took him away making us leave hands.

Yeh jo ab horaha hai
Kuchh ajab horaha hai
Kya yahi pyaar ka hai ehsaas
Sau aasmano ko or do jahano ko
Chhor k ayi tere pas
Sau aasmano ko or do jahano ko
Chhor k ayi tere pas
Maya sung turning his face to him but his eyes were still on me and tears were falling down my cheeks. He came to me leaving her and he sang.

Aankhon ko teri aadat hai
Tu dikhay na to inhay shikayat hai


Bin chhuay chhu liye hain
Tu ne mujhko diye hain
Pyaar ke ye taranay jaaniya
Ye jo ab horaha hai
Kuchh ajab horaha hai
Kya yahi pyaar ka hai ehsaas
He sung and wiped my tears.

Sau aasmano ko or do jahano ko
Chhor k ayi tere pas
Sau aasmano ko or do jahano ko
Chhor k ayi tere pas
I sung and the song ended and I had a cute eyelock and suddenly I felt him leave my hand with a jerk pushing me on the floor and I got embarrassed as the crowd was hooting as I fell, I looked back at Deep cryingly.

He seemed to be sorry and came to make me stand but I jerked his hand away and stood up and ran to my room closing the door as I reached and slid down the door pressing my back hard against it. I was crying bitterly. He haven't ever done this to me. What is this Maya doing to him that I have no value in his eyes? Something is wrong with Maya, she's not normal, I saw that the glass went in her hands but no blood came out, how is this possible? I am scared.

There was a knock on the door but I ignored it knowing it was him. The knocking was constant and I couldn't tolerate it so I closed my ears. 'Deep please go from here,' I said in tears but the knocking on the door wasn't stopping. 'Deep please, please go from here,' I said almost in a whisper but the knocking wasn't stopping. I stood up angrily and opened the door. 'Deep please go from here,' I said suddenly opening the door but to my shock it was Maya. 'Why have you come here? How dare you to come here?'

She held my shoulders, her hands were normal like us. 'Relax relax, sorry for whatever happened to you downstairs, I am sorry, I was coming to Deep so you got pushed, really sorry,' she said and I saw that the glass was still in her hands. I moved that hand from my shoulder holding it in my hand. 'Maya, this glass is still inside you, I will take it out, you sit,' I said faking concern towards her and she sat on our bed, I took out first piece from her hand but still no blood was there, but how?

I looked up at Maya and she was faking to be pained. 'Maya please tell if it's paining a lot, I will try to be as gentle as possible,' I said faking to be concerned. 'No its not paining, when glass goes inside the skin, we should get it out just like the unwanted people in our life,' she said and I gasped as she was talking about me but then I smiled faking as if not affected. I saw Deep on the door. 'Yeah you're right Maya, when two people are happy together, you should leave them alone, just like me and Deep.'

She smiled. 'You two make a good couple and especially this kid, she's so cute,' she said looking at sleeping Deepika smilingly as Tara used to look at her. I stared at her for a while and I could see Tara in her. 'Right, she is, how won't she look cute? She's a daughter of a beautiful mother and that's me, a child of a beautiful mother has to be beautiful, no?' I asked and she looked back at me and smiled and I continued taking out the glass from her hand. The secret will have to come out.

'Sorry Aarohi,' he said and I smiled at him. 'I fell because of her and not you,' I said trying to hurt Maya but she just smiled and stood up. 'OK sorry again and bye, see you soon,' she said and stood up giving her charming smile to us and went with her heels ticking every now and then. I looked at the glass that went in her hand. Deep came and kissed my forehead and hugged me. 'Sorry Aarohi, I love you,' he said. 'I love you too Deep,' I said and felt someone looking at us. I broke the hug and looked at the entrance but no one was there, maybe mind is playing tricks on me, but I will have to find out the mystery of Maya. Now I am on Mission Maya.

Writer's POV:
Little did Aarohi know that it was Maya who was looking at them from the entrance to hear out the point of view on her. She didn't collide with Deep during the dance but she made her fall by far by some trick. Little did they know they had some connection with her and it was a very old connection. Maya wasn't normal.


Edited by salley145 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome superb nice fabulous update dear
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Good that deep danced with arohi leaving Maya.oh the fall made arohi angry with deep too.loved deep apologizing to arohi.maya saying that the glass has to be removed like some unwanted people in life and arohi saying that when 2 people like them are happy together maya shouldleave them alone was nice. What'smaya's intention andwhat connection they have with Maya?hope she is not tara innew form
Nice pics
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update!!
Thanx for d pm:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lofty update dear...😳
Glad that Deep left Maya and danced with Arohi...😃
ArDeep dance...❤️
Oh Arohi fell down...😲
Deep saying sorry...
What is their connection with Maya???😲
Is Maya a ghost???😲
Waiting zealously for the next update...😳
Update soon...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
23~Sister In Law

I was laying in the darkness waiting for Deepika and Deep to be asleep. As soon as I was sure they are asleep, I sat up and took my laptop. I opened Facebook and searched for Maya Mehrotra, I saw there was no such person. I searched only for Maya and after searching a lot, I found her as there was her profile picture. She had named herself as Maya Sharma. Strange! I clicked on it and scrolled down her wall. I saw her photo with a man which I easily guessed that it is her father, the person who posted this picture was named as Ashwin Mehrotra, it had a caption, 'Miss you bubbly.' Why miss you? I was in deep thoughts and sighed heavily.




I scrolled down more and saw a post of Janvi Mehrotra, she might be her mother, it had Maya's childhood pic with her which also had a caption, 'Miss you my little girl.' Why the hell is everyone just saying miss you? The most strange thing was there wasn't a single comment of hers on the posts. Maybe she was inactive. I scrolled down more and there was a picture posted by Saanjh Mehrotra in which she was there with a girl and it also had a caption, 'sisters forever.'

I scrolled a little more and saw Arjun Sharma's post. It said, 'You are my first friend in heaven, rest in peace.' I gasped reading the post. No.. No.. No.. What does this mean? I should message all of them to know the matter. Firstly I messaged Arjun, I wrote, 'hey, its something regarding Maya, m her friend, call me ASAP.' And I wrote my number. I closed my laptop. The posts weren't of today, they were of two three days before. I sighed.

Wait, is Maya really dead? Then how she came to us? Did she fake her own death? If yes, why no blood came out when the glass pierced her skin? I laid myself to sleep in distress. I was getting strange dreams. Sometimes I would be running after Deep in distress as he ran away from me and suddenly I would fall as he ran away. Sometimes, I might be running with Deepika after him but then my hand leaves her hand and many cars come on my way and she would trespass them leaving me behind. It was strange.

Sometimes I would be thrown in the sea and would struggle to swim but then I would drown sinking in the depth of the sea hitting the surface letting my eyes drool as my hair rose up blocking my vision. I woke up from the series of dreams I was having. I drank water to calm myself and convinced myself to sleep again. But just when I laid to sleep, I sunk into sleep paralysis. The more I struggled, the more I sunk into it, I was pushed into the mattress. I focused on my breathing. I was in panic.

I tried to shout but just my lips moved and no voice came out. I couldn't move. I had a weight on my whole body. Tears rolled down my cheeks, I've never felt so helpless in my whole life. I suddenly remembered that if in sleep paralysis, you make such a face as if you've smelled something bad, you get out of it easily. I did the same and suddenly I sat up. I wiped my tears and sweat. I drank plenty of water before sleeping again. Next morning, we all sat to have breakfast, I was scared by last night.

I saw Deep was smiling like a fool as Maya had also come. I will kill this bitch one day losing my control. When we were finished with breakfast, they retired to our rooms but Deep and Maya were talking as if they know each other since a long time. I took my phone and hid behind a pole taking their pics. My phone automatically wrote the day and time the picture was taken. When Maya stood up to leave, I kept my phone on the ear pretending to talk to someone. 'Hallo, Arjun Sharma there? Maya is here.'

I spoke loudly to make her hear but she didn't even listen and went. I was really angry and went to Deep. 'Hello Deep, Aarohi here,' I said smiling at him. 'I know you are Aarohi,' he said. 'Why are you so much into this girl?' I asked and he went from there. Just then, Suchita aunty, my MIL came to me. 'Beta, Sanaya is coming today to stay with us for few days, keep the spare room ready for her,' she said and I planned on not unlocking my previous bedroom but some other locked room. 'OK aunty,' I said, she stopped me.

'Promise me you will call me mom from today?' she asked and I smiled. 'OK mom,' I said and hugged her. 'I know what has been bothering you so that is why I called Sanaya as she can solve your problem, this goddess of darkness Maya is trying to fill your life with darkness but don't worry, if you both love each other, Maya will only be a third person or other girl forever,' she said and I smiled. 'Mom thank you. Love you,' I said and hugged her again. I cleaned up the spare room neatly for Sanaya.

Sanaya is Deep's little sister by the way, sweetest sister in law, helpful, joyful, chirpy and full of life, she always has a smile on her face. When she came and was done with chit chat, we sat to talk about my problem. 'Look Sanaya, these are the glass pieces which went inside her skin but no blood nor any DNA, and the posts on her wall on Facebook are giving me disturbing thoughts,' I told her and she kept on looking at the glass piece and gasped, she looked at me worriedly scaring the hell out of me.

Edited by salley145 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome superb lovely update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow ashwin janvi are maya's parents n saanjh is her sis.they all miss Maya. It means Maya is really dead.is arjun only a friend for Maya or her husband too?is that why she is named as Maya sharma ?Why Maya is after deep ?arohi should really contact arjun or maya's own family.why is sanaya scared?is it only because Maya is a ghost?Nice pics
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hmmm very interesting update yr...
U choose Maya's family from behad...😃
They are missing Maya...so thats a guarantee she is dead...😲
OMG she is a ghost...😲
What she wants from Deep???
Waiting anxiously for next update...
And thanks for the PM...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update!!
Continue soon.
Thanx for d pm:)

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