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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey guys koi os request hain? Something different...and no revenge track please.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: raveena0605

Hey guys koi os request hain? Something different...and no revenge track please.

I really feel vihaan track was not utilized much.

Vihaan aur Riddhu pe koi os mil sakta hai Kya plz?

Anything which is extreamly Romantic.


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya.M

I really feel vihaan track was not utilized much.

Vihaan aur Riddhu pe koi os mil sakta hai Kya plz?

Anything which is extreamly Romantic.


Any particular scene in mind?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Please aap rrahel ki kuch likh sakta hai kya delulu chipper hai isliye pucha🙈🙈

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: raveena0605

Hey guys koi os request hain? Something different...and no revenge track please.

Ek suggestion dimag mein aaya hai

Jab ridhima ragini ko kabir ko handover kar dete hai and jab ghar laut te hai and when vansh confront her and takes her to backyard and jab sachai bta deta hai and jab usse chot lagte hai and when he wakes up and the same conversation and he takes her to the piano side and tell her ke ye mere maa ke ashtien hai and tells her ke aaj raat mujhe tumhare zarurat hai pls mujhe chod ke mat jaana and I want he immediately hugs her and both went to their room and ridhima makes him sleep and when he closes his eyes, she tries to leave his hand and try to go then immediately vansh holds her hand and say I told you not to leave me.

I want to you, he say everyone in this world leave him, his mom, his dad and even his family also don't care but tumhe dekh kar lagta hai ke tum hamesha mere pass rahoge. And he immediately pulls her and kiss her.. Both reciprocate the kiss. Ridhima slightly start crying and she start telling about truth and the blunder that she has done and she say she wants to rectify her mistake and will bring ragini by hook or crook by tomorrow.

Vansh was little angry but he also understand that It was also his mistake that he did not share his pain and truth with you.. Bothering were crying but both of them were whipping each other tears and then he say okay but he will also go with her to bring ragini back but tonight I need you and I want you to stay with me and I want you to become mine and then their unison 🙈🙈

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: raveena0605

Any particular scene in mind?

Replied to your PM ❤️🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Athira44

Please aap rrahel ki kuch likh sakta hai kya delulu chipper hai isliye pucha🙈🙈


Hey i think forum mein Rrahel ki stories are not allowed, but i have written a few in wattpad.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Akkusharma77

Ek suggestion dimag mein aaya hai

Jab ridhima ragini ko kabir ko handover kar dete hai and jab ghar laut te hai and when vansh confront her and takes her to backyard and jab sachai bta deta hai and jab usse chot lagte hai and when he wakes up and the same conversation and he takes her to the piano side and tell her ke ye mere maa ke ashtien hai and tells her ke aaj raat mujhe tumhare zarurat hai pls mujhe chod ke mat jaana and I want he immediately hugs her and both went to their room and ridhima makes him sleep and when he closes his eyes, she tries to leave his hand and try to go then immediately vansh holds her hand and say I told you not to leave me.

I want to you, he say everyone in this world leave him, his mom, his dad and even his family also don't care but tumhe dekh kar lagta hai ke tum hamesha mere pass rahoge. And he immediately pulls her and kiss her.. Both reciprocate the kiss. Ridhima slightly start crying and she start telling about truth and the blunder that she has done and she say she wants to rectify her mistake and will bring ragini by hook or crook by tomorrow.

Vansh was little angry but he also understand that It was also his mistake that he did not share his pain and truth with you.. Bothering were crying but both of them were whipping each other tears and then he say okay but he will also go with her to bring ragini back but tonight I need you and I want you to stay with me and I want you to become mine and then their unison 🙈🙈


Sure will try, but i think i have written on this as well. Here is the link,


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishq-mein-marjawan-2/5237716/riansh-os-sweet-love


If you still want me to write the os do pm me.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey guys koi request hain? This time ott version ka request do..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: raveena0605

Hey guys koi request hain? This time ott version ka request do..

Yes yes

The scene where ridhima takes cakes for vansh but vansh throws it and and said that he don't celebrate his bday.

I want twist in the story..

Then vansh takes her to room and in washroom He starts crying and hugging her saying that on his B-Day his father went in coma and right now he has alzemiers and he is safeguarding him from his enemy who thinks his father is no more.

On that day he was going for the deal but his father insists that he will go on that day somebody shoots him. Then ridhima asked who has done this?

He says he don't know, he wants to find the truth and punish that person as soon as possible to make his father suffer. Pehle mom and now dad, main tumhe aur hamare bache ko kuch nahi hone de sakta, I love u ridhima and then ridhima makes him sleep on bed and then she was going through corridor she came across dadi room where vyom was also there and saying ke tum toh itne gayi guzari aurat ho, apne bete ko hi marwa diya, vansh ko pata chalega toh tumhare saath kya karega. In the mean time ridhima recorded the conversation and in the next morning, ridhima vansh ko recording sunate hai and vansh dadi ko confront karta hai but in mean time vyom kills dadi and vansh kills vyom. Dadi says sorry and all that drama.

Then leap Ajay is now recovered and uma is also alive and living with them and both grand father and mother playing with their grand children

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