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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: lifesucks28

If only the makers had shown something like this....bt NO....unki story mai dono leads mai se koi bhi Mastermind nai tha.....baki sab apna khel khelte rhe...aur ye dono rote rhe 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 WOW

Bt seriously I absolutely love this version of yours....❤️❤️❤️ Eagerly waiting for this bold Rids to punish all fam members....😈😈😈😈😈

I agree. Even though Vansh calls himself mastermind in the show, he has been stupid in so many places that just infuriates people. And Riddhima also becomes the damsel in distress waiting for monsters to turn into prince charming and save her.

Thank you! I am glad you love it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ayushi-

Man I loved Riddhima here😎


Amazing one

Me too. I love both Riddhima and Vansh in here. I couldn't find a story like this so decided to write it and read it. 😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: scintillaxx

wow...

"words baby " wala part...it just cracked me like anything🤣

I know right! I was laughing when I was writing it. I could just visualize it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: scintillaxx

I liked ur concept to show her equal to him👍🏼...role reversal hahaha

looking ahead for more..

Thank you! Them being equal to each other makes the concept even more interesting and amazing.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anusinghraj

Awesome. Eagerly waiting for next Chapter

Thank you! Will try to update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you! 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: alshasubhash

Oh God!!!! I loved it ....loved it... super loved it..

Amazing.. just superb...

you gave the rightful definition to the role of Mrs. VR.

Superb

Thank you, Darling!

I am glad you think so. Two Powerhouses.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hello everyone! I am back with another part. I hope you all are liking the story so far.

Part 4


Kabir didn’t know what to think anymore. All these years, he planned and plotted many things, just to put Vansh down, to defeat him in a battle Vansh didn’t even know he was part of. He wanted to make him suffer, for all the years he had to stay away from his mother, for the poverty he had to go through, for the love, attention, luxury didn’t have but Vansh did. When nothing was working and he was on the verge of losing his mind, that’s when he came across Riddhima.


An epitome of beauty, innocence, and a fighter. She was not the one to give up and that’s what he needed. Right from the moment, he met her, he could see his days of miseries and Vansh’s days of winning coming to an end. Never ever thought that Vansh let all this happen. He used him to get back what’s his, Riddhima.


Now he is feeling like what he felt during his childhood, a loser. He thought he left that tag a long time ago but now that he thinks about it, he was always the loser and Vansh was always the winner.


“Now that this is taken care of, let’s handle the other matter in our hands.” He heard Riddhima’s voice and looked up to see a dangerous smirk playing on her face. He couldn't believe his eyes. She reminded him so much of Vansh. Cold, lethal, and dangerous. He looked at his mom who was looking back at him with panic all over her face.


Vansh looked at the mother-son duo who was standing before him with nowhere else to go. Oh, how he is going to make them pay so much, especially that Kabir. Bloody bas**rd. He took predatory steps towards him thinking of everything he did.


Riddhima was about to lose her life because of him. Punch. I had to stay away from her for years because of him. Punch. He dared to use Riddhima for his dirty plans. Punch.


Vansh kept punching him thinking about all the time Kabir went close to Riddhima, touched her. “Vansh!” came out a loud screeching voice from Anupriya. “How dare you? Leave my son”, Anupriya was about to move towards them when Riddhima grabbed her by her throat and almost swung her back.


“Don’t even dare!” Riddhima said, squeezing her throat. Anuprya was flailing her hands while struggling to breathe and tried to push her back. Riddhima pinned her to the pillar still holding her in the same way.


“You have a long night ahead of you, Mummy Ji. You took away my Vansh’s mother from him. You took away mother’s love from him. You planned to destroy him. You tried to kill him.” Riddhima was seething with anger. Anupriya screamed even louder when Riddhima grabbed her hair with the other hand.


“Don’t worry, I am not going to kill you. Death is too easy. I am going to torture you so much that you will beg for your death” said Riddhima in a menacing low voice but everyone was able to hear her considering the whole mansion was in silence except for Kabirs’ whimpers.


Pushing Anupriya on the floor, Riddhima told Angre to bring coals and glass pieces. “Angre, bring a lot of coals and glass pieces, just like the video you all watched." She smirked looking at Ishani then Anupriya. “Time to recreate some old memories.”


Ishani and Anupryia looked at Riddhima in horror as she ordered Anupriya to walk on the burning coal. “Now Mummy Ji, we are going to go by order. First, you will walk on the coal, and then you will walk on the broken glasses. Are we clear?” Riddhima glared at the woman in front of her. “And Ishani, watch her. Very carefully. Imagine it’s you walking. And feel the pain.” Ishani was shocked to hear that from her.


“I am not going to do no such thing” screamed Anupriya. “Oh you will!” said Vansh, taking out a taser and shocking Kabir with it. “Aahhh!” screamed Kabir who was bleeding from the punches Vansh threw at him. “Kabir!” “Leave my son.” Anupriya tried to go to Kabir but Riddhima tripped her and she fell on her face.


She crouched down and said, “If you want Vansh to stop, then walk as I said. You love him, no? Do what I say, otherwise, you will hear a lot more screams from him.” Anupriya nodded with tears flowing from her eyes. “Good! Now go and rock that ramp walk of yours.” Riddhima pulled her up by her arms and pushed her in front of the coals.


With each step Anupriya took, Ishani got more scared and anxious about what would happen to her. Everyone got shivers run through their bodies as they saw Anupriya almost finish her walk. They know she did bad but seeing her like this, burnt and bloodied feet, looking almost dead raised their heartbeats to a point that they couldn’t breathe properly. Yet they know that this is not done. They know that this is just the start of the punishment.


I hope you all like this part. Let me know if you like the punishment they are getting and if you have any suggestions for Ishani, Aryan Chachi's punishment. I will try my best to put it in the next part.


See you soon!

Stay Safe. Stay Well.



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Posted: 4 years ago
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OMG🥳👏 I am absolutely loving this Riddhima....ab lag rahe hai dono Mr. and Mrs. VR......made for each other

Chachi ke liye sabse precious uske gold jewelry hai so why not destroy it completely..... 😉

Ishani.... get out of the house.... live with ur hubby...bahut krli bhai ke paiso pe aish... and she is ur Bhabhi better call her that only....else 😈

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: lifesucks28

OMG🥳👏 I am absolutely loving this Riddhima....ab lag rahe hai dono Mr. and Mrs. VR......made for each other

Chachi ke liye sabse precious uske gold jewelry hai so why not destroy it completely..... 😉

Ishani.... get out of the house.... live with ur hubby...bahut krli bhai ke paiso pe aish... and she is ur Bhabhi better call her that only....else 😈

Thank you!

They will get deserving punishment too.

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