Pangs of absence: poem dedicated to mishal

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Posted: 8 years ago
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" Love reckons hours for months,and days for years,and every little absence is an age" so said Dryden the famous English poet.
It has been so long since we last saw mishal on tv.We miss him,there is mishal sized gap in our hearts, his ardent fans... please come back mishal.here is a piece of poetry I want to share regarding this, I didn't write it.it was written on 31 March 2011, when mishal disappeared.now we r in d same situation.see how it fits even now.a small attempt to appreciate d writer but mostly to increase forum activity.I saw u guys sharing other people's work so I thought of sharing this piece of poetry dedicated to our Mishal.


Mishal, the heart beats though broken
the cerebral perplexed
the spirit restless
the eyes searchingly tearful
the whole being imbalanced
parting I refuse to accept
what is the truth? that will set me free
Acting, ur sublime love
pushed now into oblivion
was it transient? untrue?
make beliefpiece of celluloid!
a memory in art made permanent
oh memory of our love come soothe
imagination, tease the times
the way they were!
Eternal hope that sublime love
yet once again be
the way they are...
Hamlet53
31.03.2011
Edited by Taz(only replaced two word šŸ˜†) ,plz no chappal hammie, no hockey stick please.u know how much I want u to start writing again,come out of ur shell writer mam.n for now say cheers to d forum activity.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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my dear, I love your post and the manner in which cried to trigger all. Thank you for this poem. really wonderful.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That's a lovely poem, suits the situation well. very well written Hammie. Thanks for sharing Joya.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks Dear Joy for sharing...
Such a beautifully worded poem & perfect timing to share this.
I am so glad you shared it, otherwise would have missed reading it.
Hammie as always at her best in penning her thoughts .


Joy, would you care to share which words you have replaced from the original...?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks Joya for sharing this beautiful poem 😃 hi hammie what a beautiful poem u had penned šŸ‘.
waiting eagerly for your writing and mishal'a re entry
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tell me those 2 words which u edited .. šŸ˜† wanna praise them.. bt yaar ths poem absolutely brilliantly written by ham..ham fflavour is there... the pain of his absence is wat left now.. he's all mute now tweeting fortnightly or monthly n doesn't gve a shit about anything now.. thats y I wanna treasure his presence till it last...dun wanna go deep in wat happened by the end of his comebac show...it's of no use now... already made lot of enemies caz of my bakwas so will now zip it n will wait fr his comebac which won't happen in ths lifetime probably. .
Thnx fr sharing ths masterpiece to us.. luv u n love hammie fr getting into pulse of Mishalians in March 2011.. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks simple for sharing this gem!
Hammie AWESOME poem!
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Thank you for sharing, Simple! šŸ¤—
Hammie, your poem is beautiful! ā¤ļø I could relate to each verse as I feel we're all in the same place - missing him beyond words and anxiously awaiting his comeback. šŸ¤—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: zajedno

my dear, I love your post and the manner in which cried to trigger all. Thank you for this poem. really wonderful.



Thanks zad for reading and appreciating.here is when hammie started writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: simple2joy



Thanks zad for reading and appreciating.here is when hammie started writing

Wish I could Hamlet was here on the forum active. then everybody came back. I think it would be very interesting to see all those familiar and unfamiliar people back here. but it was her decision, and I hope it will only appear a little more active role in commenting.

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