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custodian75

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Is the kiss finally going to happen? Loved the plot till now and I am sure the upcoming update will be wonderful.

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nusrat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Okk now ur testing our patience... 😆 .. wen s the update wese?? Ab tou it's getting even more difficult to wait..😛 aaj dede na update..😛

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mehraan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: NusiSg
Okk now ur testing our patience... 😆 .. wen s the update wese?? Ab tou it's getting even more difficult to wait..😛 aaj dede na update..😛

Pata nahi... I didnt write anything...bas dimag nei ideas chal rahe hai...kasam se...I had an idea going in my head n posted as spoiler...Ther jao...VIPU SE ZYADA TUMHE BECHAINI LAG RAHI HAI...😆😆

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mehraan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: custodian75
Is the kiss finally going to happen? Loved the plot till now and I am sure the upcoming update will be wonderful.

Dunno hoga ya nahi... but yes I promise to make it worthwhile for u all lovely readers...thanxs for ur comments...

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~DaZZ|ing~

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

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~DaZZ|ing~

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: mehraan
Spoiler alert

His eyes closed in to block off such thoughts of immense pleasure of pain ,his body reacting wildy as he tried to calm himself down,turning away from the enticing vision she was ,she stood numb.and clueless...he moved back maintaining a distance...He needed to get away from her lest it makes it even more difficult for him ...

Can't wait to read part 5, Mehr! The pain's that unbearable that the poor guy feels the need to step away from her. This too emphasizes his deep-rooted anguish. Yet, you've highlighted the sexual tension quite well. Well done! :)

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Wanderlust

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: mehraan
Spoiler alert

His eyes closed in to block off such thoughts of immense pleasure of pain ,his body reacting wildy as he tried to calm himself down,turning away from the enticing vision she was ,she stood numb.and clueless...he moved back maintaining a distance...He needed to get away from her lest it makes it even more difficult for him ...

yeh apka spoiler hai??☺️..immense pleasure of pain☺️

yeh dhani keheti samajh mein ata..but vip ko bhi pain??😲 aisa kya?

nahin mujhe maloom nahin hai itna kuch details mein😆😆..ok ok let me stop thinking about all these but ur spoiler is very hot😳😳

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mehraan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

@ Dazzler...Thanku so much for appreciating...I ur comments means a lot...Thanku for understanding the reason behind this chapter...His narrative was important for me to proceed further as to what was going in his mind...!!well said n explained about Vipu...thanku so much

The spoiler is just to tempt u people...joking🤣..

I will try to make it as entertaining for u all,sticking to the plot...I myself m just thinking right now with so many ideas pouring in...pretty confused...but hopefully I will update soon..

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mehraan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629
yeh apka spoiler hai??☺️..immense pleasure of pain☺️
yeh dhani keheti samajh mein ata..but vip ko bhi pain??😲 aisa kya?
nahin mujhe maloom nahin hai itna kuch details mein😆😆..ok ok let me stop thinking about all these but ur spoiler is very hot😳😳

Wo pain ki detailing ki next update mei miljayegi...phikar mat karo😆😆

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 9 years ago

#160

hi mehru thanks for your spoiler alert on pg.20... humm sounds pretty tempting ..looking forward to getting a bigger helping of the scene you paint..on a a wider canvas..
happy holi.. love hammie

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