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nusrat

@NusiSg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

ohhh god finally it come n believe me its worth waiting dear,, [:$]

beautifully written,,, every line is magical n captivating my heart,,

I'm in no hrry for THE KISS,, take ur sweet time n build up the tension,, m loving the pace[:P]..

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mehraan

@mehraan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Rajee1
Uff...very passionate episode..specially the last scene gave me goosebumps.. Oh.. I love vidha very much & hence ur ss too.
Grt job mehran!👏

Thanx Rajee!!!ur comments means a lot...I hope u will like the next one too...Vidha ate nagical n hence this Ss...they are inspiration for my writing...

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mehraan

@mehraan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629
Kya baat hai mehr di👏👏👏..bohut badiya..ok ok no need of doing any jhatpat which our CVs love to do..u take ur time and write for us..this part is awesome...very nice..lekin aap bhi na bade zalim ho..😡 eyelock pe ake rain started and then CONTINED😕..aur do tin line likh deti..i mean i cant wait to read their patch up..kya hoga ?? batao na..patch up hote hi kiss karenge dono?? arey kya hoga age? vip will beat those rubbish fellows nah, black and blue, who dared to pareshan his rajkumari?..ok let me wait for the fifth part..Thanks😊 and yeh lo hugs for writing a great story🤗

Hahahah...shall I complete ek hi chapter mei...

Nahi ...how will I tempt u then to read further😆😆

Aam khao,ghutliya mat gino..😆😆.kya hoga,kya nahi...dekhte jao...imean padte jao...

Thanx for commenting Jaan...

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Nandhini

@nandyy55

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: mehraan

Weekly update...Mushkil hai...😆

I will try to update soon...

Thanx for reading nandy

Dont say thnx Mehr!! We hav to Thnk u for Ur post SS.. Plz try to update Weekly twice!!😉 U can do it!! Just Think of us Naa plzzz

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mehraan

@mehraan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: NusiSg
ohhh god finally it come n believe me its worth waiting dear,, 😳

beautifully written,,, every line is magical n captivating my heart,,
I'm in no hrry for THE KISS,, take ur sweet time n build up the tension,, m loving the pace😛..

Thanku dear for ur kind words...Chalo achi baat hai...many are,waiting for that n I want to go slow😆😆...Hopefully we will reach there😆

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Meenakshi-rg

@Meenakshi-rg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Great update . and you rightly said its a mind battle. somehow you can show your protagonist fighting out such battles very efficiently in writing.

please keep going.

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sree

@vijayasri88

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Excellent mehru...loved loved it...nxt part jaldi update karo..im waitinggg

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custodian75

@custodian75

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Thanks for the update. Viplav tied to,stay away from her but once he saw her he could not control himself.

Dhani ran away from him but was back to him soon. Might not be of her own will but the fates had conspired to bring them together.

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mehraan

@mehraan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: custodian75
Thanks for the update. Viplav tied to,stay away from her but once he saw her he could not control himself.
Dhani ran away from him but was back to him soon. Might not be of her own will but the fates had conspired to bring them together.

Thanku custodian for reading the underlying message behind...My intention of this update was purely based on Vipus pull towards her...Though he was drawn again towards her ...but its her missing that makes him go mad...All cut loose ...when it comes to her!!

Edited by mehraan - 9 years ago