ViDha scene (jungle track modified)

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As in yesterday's episode the CVs went in jet speed through the episode. Its like they skipped some parts, they rushed trough the episode and left us a bit disappointed.So here is a modification to the track.I imagined this in my head. So,how will you like it, If the scenes were like this...

DT runs his way out of the forest when Viplav comes across him" Dadaji are you fine?" DT nods his head " And where is Dhaani?" He searches for her worried.
" She is there, i guess" DT replies. "Fine, You go, I will be coming" He takes a step forward when DT stops him."No don't go there its not safe, these men behind you are enough to handle the cannibals.You don't need to go. She will be safe" Viplav looks at DT and frees his hand from DT's hold.

Dhaani looked back to see herself surrounded by the monks."How will I get out of here?"she thinks to herself.

"Dadaji you may go.I will come WITH HER.I can't waste my time here,when she needs me there." He runs.
DT shouts and orders the other men to go and bring his grandson back home safe.
He moves out of the forest.The men accepted the order and moved into the forest."Why did Viplav baba go into the forest to save the widow, doesn't he know about the cannibals?"
Another one of them replied" Arrey leave all these, Maha pandit ji asked us to bring him back, lets go."

The monks brought the juice bowl for Dhaani.Dhaani looked at the fire that was set.She closed her eyes crying for someone's help when her hands were held back by a monk.
They forced the juice down her throat, her head pained, she cried as a feeling of dizziness took over her.Her eyes were heavy.
"Dhaani" Viplav shouted from behind.Dhaani tried to look back with hope but she couldn't.The monks dragged her, when she tried to open her eyes.
Viplav rushed in between them and pushed one of the monk aside, freed Dhaani's hand from the clutches of the other monk and held her hand, continuously asking if she was fine.
But she didn't reply.The monk came back holding a trishul, they aren't going to leave their prey easily, Viplav realised. Viplav tried to protect the Dhaani when all the monks surrounded them.But the trishul hit him.

Dhaani blinked slowly and said" vakil babu, go...go away."
"No, I am not going"He replied holding her hand. He managed to get hold of one of the trishul pointed at them, and with all his might snatched it.He held Dhaani with one hand and pointed the trishul at the monks, Dhaani leaned on his shoulder getting unconscious, when Viplav glared at the monk. He slowly moved back to the tree, watching each step of the monks."Don't come near otherwise this trishul will go straight into your neck." he shouted at one of the monk who dared to get closer.

The slow and steady DT's men came and soon outnumbered the monks.
Viplav sat beside Dhaani keeping the trishul aside.

(I just want to put a lot of Vidha scenes in the jungle track because i and maybe even u expected it that way😆)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear...go ahead n mke it a Ss..short story...with parts n finish off the jungle track😆 with Vidha romance
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow loved it 👏
Keep writing😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Excellent Spreeti.
I loved the way you rewrote the scene. I too felt it was hurried..but I am not complaining , coz we've many ViDha scenes and hugs in the episode.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Couldn't catch yesterday's episode .Yet I loved and enjoyed your version of writing..!! Good work.! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jo shuru kiya usse khatam karo preeti!!!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yeah preeti, cvs should have extended jungle track for one more day at least win full of Vidha scenes. We always expecting more in jungle track bit cvs are not listening to us and ending unexpectedly.
Waiting for ur SS😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehraan

Hey dear...go ahead n mke it a Ss..short story...with parts n finish off the jungle track😆 with Vidha romance



Yea...this track had so much potential but CVs didn't use it.😕Will complete this in 3-4 parts, but even i don't know about what to write next.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pearl82

Nice one.keep writing😊🤗


Thanks, Will definitely try to bring something better in the next part.Keep reading.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Wow loved it 👏

Keep writing😳


Thanks. There is so much confusion in my head about what to write next.😆, will be uploading next part soon. Keep reading.😊

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