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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please be lenient.

Love, Ana.

The Idiot

She was shivering. Yeah, he thought smugly. This is what you get for not taking the jacket he so generously offered. Gods, he thought. She was like a flame, sent to burn him. He knew he wasn't supposed to feel this way, she looked up to him as her savior, and here he was. Having lecherous thoughts. But, heaven's! What was he supposed to do! She made it to hard not to ignore her, with her feistiness and that annoying way of saying no to his every idea (granted, they were stupid ideas, but still).

Something felt different today. Maybe it was the peace of mind he was experiencing as they were stranded alone in the middle of nowhere.

"It's all your fault."

So much for the peace of mind.

"You just had to insist on taking this long route and giving me a lift when I didn't even want to. Now I'll be late because of you. Tum, bade log toh hamesha apni manmani hi karte ho-"

He kissed her. Damn it, he thought. If I'm going to hell for his, I better make it worthwhile. She was like a pure flame, that felt like was burning him to the core.

She, apparently, had other ideas.

Thump. Slappp!

That's it for now. Send love if you wanna read what happens next.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start please continue.😊 . also welcome to the forum.
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First of all,welcome to this forum dear😊😊
U will have a great time here 😊
And awesome Os,just loved it a lot dear👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

First of all,welcome to this forum dear😊😊

U will have a great time here 😊
And awesome Os,just loved it a lot dear👏



thanx for the warm welcome, my love.
i'l continue, but i need LOVVEEE... HEHE.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to the forum..!
This is amazing, keep on updating us..!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chocobrownies

Welcome to the forum..!

This is amazing, keep on updating us..!




thanx love, and yes i will.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh God.. yes plz do continue. . Dhani is no different here but ohh Vips.. I want vips to behave exactly like ur OS.. 😆 Hope he'll.. soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NusiSg

Oh God.. yes plz do continue. . Dhani is no different here but ohh Vips.. I want vips to behave exactly like ur OS.. 😆 Hope he'll.. soon...


Oh, yes! I do love a brooding, intense guy who takes action instead of the dialouge stuff. I'll keep updating. And thanx, love.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

Thump.

And he fell off the bed.

As his eyes settled on the sun, he groaned and laid down on the floor.

Just a dream, then.

Wait WHATTT?????

A dream about kissing that she devil? Was his mind out of its mind? How did it even come up with such absurd stuff? He didn't even think about her that way.

Oh, wait. Those dumb friends of his. He remembered last night, when his friends were poking fun at him for helping the abla nari", when they suggested that he did it coz he had a thing for her. HER. Dhani the she devil.

But if it was just a dream, why did it feel so real? Dreams were supposed to be forgotten once you wake up, then why did it feel like every memory of her lips had now been permanently etched into his memory?

He'd kissed girls before. Heck, he'd done more than kiss with some. And he was a reader. He'd done his fair share of reading romance and poetry. He knew he was supposed to compare her to the first ray of sunshine or call her lips strawberry flavored. But all he could think at this moment was - Why didn't I do it before?

A fire was coursing through his veins, pumping his heart at a rate he didn't know was possible. He couldn't even remember what he was thinking about.

All he could think of was her name. dhani, dhani, dhani...

Stay tuned for updates, but only if I get some love.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was too short yar.. :p

Plzz continue soon
ur Viplav is total casenova yar.. me no likes him.. :p

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