Vidha OS: A New Dawn - Page 2

Originally posted by: tahera57

thank you rose beautiful OS, loved it . was waiting for days for you to post something here.

Originally posted by: kashish_777

Rose, there's only tthing I'll tell you...

I'm having a lump in my throat and there's tears in my eyes.oh i didn't intend to make anybody cry..

Girl you left me craving for more...

It was a heavenly piece of work.thank you so very much.🤗.

Do write d next part...

Sooon...warna main violent ho jaungi.ha ha..

God!!! I just want to read more...ri8 now...

Originally posted by: tarun1234567

it was superb yaar..Good work!!!😳

OS.. New dawn

Again a lovely beginning.. clandestine, silent, apprehensively positive. Rosie, it reminded me of a garden moonlit meeting scene from Romeo and Juliet.. where he waits in her garden looks up to her window expects her to appear. Aah yes the difficulty of the lover to express his feeling before his beloved; the fear of rejection. But then where would the lover be without hope in his beloved? It's this sweet waiting of hoping for the best..which keeps the light of love burning between both.. I loved the assumption and importance he gives her about informing her of his explained absence. Beautifully described emotional reactions of both Viplav and Dhani. She is typically composed and he is usually animate! self-expresses himself the best way he can. He snaps her up to date memory to take with him and for her he once again leaves the symbol of his love a ROSE.. a consolation for her in his absence.. Well described, emotions of expectancy, passive yet keen searching for him and the attempt of disciplining her heart. The gap between them grows but her longing to see and hear from him begins to grow in her as well. oooh so sad to hear and see the rose wilts.. love hurts but also gives the strength to acknowledge to herself yes she loves him. But absence also churns up doubts still, hurtful love hopes.. The pain discomfort and distance ushers in what he wished for.. her love and her waiting and then the embrace, which gives them both get their answers. What a lovely end ..rose very moving OS.. covers a range of heartfelt sentiments of love.. and much love from me to you Rosie.. thanks for continuing to give your readers so much joy.. a rose for you.. much love hammie.. 31.10.15

Originally posted by: awida

Wonderful story Rose.

Very touching and romantic.

I just loved it.🤗

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

thanks tahera. Glad you found it beautiful. I hope the wait was worth it.