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Posted: 8 years ago
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Indraprasth welcomed their Rajkumar Arjun with his new bride Subhadra just the previous day. The citizens are excited to have their Rajkumar Arjun among them finally. All these twelve years they waited for him,who burnt the Khandava forest and established the great Empire ,the envy of Aryavarth. Icing on the cake is the living God Krishna Vaasudeva's arrival along with his brother and wives.


A great Puja is held by Kunti for the newly wed couple,that is attended by distinguished guests. Arjun is sitting at the altar along with Subhadra who is smiling coyly at her loving husband who actually is much agitated regarding his first wife The Fire Born Draupadi


. She welcomed him politely did Arti to them and moved away to attend her busy work schedule. As of now she is with Bheem looking after the arrangements for the grand Feast that will follow the Puja . Krishna looked at Arjun's face,that looked calm at the exterior. He knew his inherent guilt,his pain for upsetting his loving wife who waited for him twelve long yeas ,burning with love and love sickness .


He can not forget her expression when he stood with Subhadra by his side.The look she gave him started haunting him every minute and every second. Dhaumya addressed Kunti '. Maharani,the muhurat to tie Raksha Sutr to Rajkumar Arjun approached. After ten minutes the wife should tie it on his left hand. Where is Queen Panchali? "


Kunti wanted Dhaumya to make Arjun wear Raksha Sutr as she thought that her third son should lead happy married life without moving away from Indraprasth. She attributed his Twelve year Exile to Buri Nazar and wanted Dhaumya to let him wear Rakshasutr after chanting Drishti Nivaran mantras.She told him' Rishi Dhaumya Let Subhadra tie the Rakssha Sutr. Panchali is busy with kitchen work."
Kunti knew her bahu's obsessive love for her son ,she doesn't want Subhadra to know that and her other sons also should not feel bad.But...


Krishna stood up and instructed Dhaumya .' Rishivar,I will bring Draupadi within ten minutes. But Raksha Sutr should be tied by her only.She is Parth's first wife.She should do it. Bhadra,wait for me." Subhadra looked dazed seeing her dear brother's concern for her husband's Queen.



Krishna almost ran to the Kitchen which is a little bit away from the Worship chamber. He caught Draupadi by the shoulder and started without saying a word. Panchali was shocked to see him behave wierd making the onlookers wonder what must be going on between the God incarnate and the queen of Indraprasth


.Panchali tried to question him but before she could she was made to stand beside Arjun at the altar. Every one looked in wonder while Satya appreciated her husband with a loving glance.
Dhaumya is in his element seeing the queen beside Arjun and started chanting mantras.Panchali looked at Krishna with questioning eyes but it was Satya who cleared her doubt.' Don't get bewildered Panchali.My husband and your husband enjoy giving shocks . They would like to do things differently.Relax now. You have to tie the Raksha Sutr on Arjun's hand.Enjoy the privilege of being his first wife."



Before Draupadi could react Dhaumya gave her the Raksha Dhaga and asked Arjun to hold her hand along with Raksha Sutr.Arjun held her hand,tender and warm with beautiful fingers that had red colour on the nails. Panchali shivered at his touch the touch she experienced long before when her father placed her hand in his after the swayamvar, and when he did Panigrahan during their marriage.


The touch sent electric waves in her body and ignited her suppressed passion for the man she loved the most . She had sweat on her forehead and looked at Krishna who smiled mischevously at her.
Dhaumya asked her to tie it up on his left hand ,the mighty hand that can shoot arrows with as much precision and accuracy just like with his right hand.Panchali bent her head so that her feelings won't be seen by anybody especially Arjun.


On his part Arjun did not blink his eyes even for a minute seeing his beautiful wife so nearer to him,. He saw her thick black curls,the lotus eyes hiding her emotion ,The red lower lip bitten by her pearl like white tooth,the swan like neck ..


.Dhaumya addressed them. ' it was done. At the perfect muhurat. And by the queen as per the norms. Maharani Kunti,Your wish got fulfilled. No Burinazar will happen to Rajkumar Arjun."
Kunti sighed in relief but observed Panchali 's feelings. She has to tell her about the evening function and she followed her.


Panchali slipped off before Krishna could do something else to bring her to Arjun. Surely she won't entertain anything as she is too disappointed to see Subhadra beside him. But the glaring truth that nails her is the way she reacted when he touched her hand. It was thrilling, exhilarating and it made her feel like a new bride who reacts sensuously to her husband's first touch.


She,Draupadi,the mother of four sons forgot herself shamelessly and reacted like a besotted young maiden. She should exercise control over her body and mind...The grand feast. Went on with the guests praising the dishes and special flavours that are served in wide range. As per the custom Panchali served the guests from Dwaraka, the milk Sweets prepared specially for them.


Arjun and Subhadra sat between Krishna and Satya enjoying the food.Panchali served the Sweet to Krishna who called her for a second time.When she turned her back,Krishna called her again and said.' Ktishnaa,Serve the sweets to Parth also. He likes them you know,Don't pay attention to his tantrums. Just serve him


." Panchali felt irked as she wanted to move away from him. Helplessly she went to Arjun and despite his protests started serving. Arjun held her wrist tightly to prevent her. Panchali's face turned red and she blushed profusely.


Satya laughed and teased Panchali.' Wah,Panchali,you look like a new bride. Even Subhadra won't blush that much.You look awesome." Panchali took back her hand from him and moved away. She went inside the private chamber adjacent to the kitchen and placed her hand under water flow .


Again the touch.She felt rivettingly electrified when he held her hand . The touch that is making her realise his ownership over her body and mind.The touch that is exposing herself before him. The touch that is asking her to taste the moments of love that she is waiting for,he is waiting for. ...Krishna laughed with delight . ' you will inhale the fragrance of your love for Parth,Kalyani. It is inevitable. The Touch will bring you to your love,to your Arjun. Very soon



Kunti could sense how her Bahu felt ...like a new bride experiencing her husband's first touch. But she ignored it. Years passed but still her Bahu retained the first flush of love unsullied and ever fragrant.

Edited by ltelidevara - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Amazing update
The way kunti treated panchali in past is very bad
Simply intolerable
One thing I don't understand
One side kunti loves arjun so much that she falls ill in his absence and on the other side she don't value his happiness and don't even tried to understand him. She just want a slave to obey her any orders and wishes without his own thoughts

Why was she so obsessed to make her elder son king
The one who don't even deserve to be a king
Why just because he's first born

What he did by himself to become a king
Nothing

And she wanted her son karn to forgive arjun
Why why he need forgiveness
He didn't do anything wrong
In her eyes killing her eldest son is paap or adhram
And what about the words her eldest son used for her bahu

Don't she wants her bahu to forgive her eldest son
Arjun don't even knew that karn was his brother
But karn knows that and still wanted to kill his brother
Wasn't that wrong I'm her eyes

Arjun wanted to avenge his wife insult
But what was karna reason nothing it was his zidd

But still in her eyes arjun is wrong

God I hate this lady

Realisation happening
But what
What's going to happen next
Nothing

Draupadi life's already ruined
Realisation or no realisation it doesn't mayter
Edited by CuteStrawberry - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
sorry I totally forgot that I have res it her
BTW my comment is on page 12
Edited by bubulswt - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Di... Before saying anything...
👏👏👏... U r just..i donno how to describe ur excellence..

Now about the update...
Its good kunti's realising but of what use??? The decisions that she took crushed the life of her own son n her bahu...an innocent princess who like any other women must have had thought about a loving n wonderful life with her beloved husband...who won the swayambar...

Now for the sake of pandavas unity she divided a woman... Physically n emotionally( to a great extent) among five brothers

N as per the epic yudhishthir had already left the swayamvar before arjun did n that means he must have had reached to kutir...than why did he not tell about arjun's great feast to their mother... That was a moment of celebration afterall

N kunti saw d longings in d eyes of other pandavas for draupadi n for their happiness she took her so called brilliant decision?? Wow... Like really??

N what that resulted into... Arjun's exile, the dyut game, draupadi on stake n her insult... Is she not answerable for these events... Infact she's more answerable than dury n others...

I m not intended to insult any character but the extent of pain these two have endured is enough to evoke anger n frustation...

As far as ur updates r concerned... I have already said... No proper words...

N that touch... Omg omg... I m kinda in love with that piece of os... Stupendous phenomenal magical n what not... Great work di..😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Lakshmi,
I found this forum while searching for various interesting stories/incidents related to Mahabharat.

Let me congratulate you on writing such a marvelous piece and in particular writing it from Draupadi's point of view. I have been hooked to this story from last few weeks, since I found this forum. You have great writing skills and capacity to unravel emotions and induct nice subtleties and humor at various junctures, which makes it highly pleasurable to read.

I would request you to continue this thread and continue to induct some more new stories/angles, reminiscent some past stories and interweave them, just to keep the thread going:) . As, this has been a wonderful thread to read.

I think this has a very good potential to be a very popular book, if published. So, may be you can think on those lines, sometime in future. This deserves to be read by wide audience to understand Mahabharat from Draupadi's point of view and beautiful relationship of Arjun and Draupadi.

I have always admired Arjun and has always been my hero. A great warrior, compassionate and kind human being. Above all, the favourite of the Lord himself. I bought several books on Arjun, like Sweety Shinde's "Arjun: Without Doubt", which I regard as one of the most outstanding books I read on Arjun. The only instances, where I find it difficult to understand and forgive my hero are, when he did not refuse the pathetic decision of "sharing" pronounced by Kunti/Yudhi, And, being silent during the shameful Dyut Sabha instance. I have read your thread on why Arjun had to be silent, because it was understood at that time, to be norm to oblige to elders and refusing them was considered sinful. Still, whatever it may be, only these two incidents make me hurt, when I think of my hero's failure to stand-up and deliver.

The thread gives beautiful perspective of Draupadi's feelings/trauma, and the immense pain she had to undergo due to the decision made by Kunti/Yudhi duo. I always felt this was really a cruel decision which sealed the fate of the innocent woman. Both, Kunti/Yudhi can never be pardoned for their shameful decision. Your thread has beautifully highlighted the trauma she had to undergo and how truly it is not possible to "Love equally all the husbands". I mean come on, polyandry itself was such a rare instance and ancient practice, wherein Yudhi had to go back so far in time, to rattle couple of examples and try to cover his lusty feelings for the most beautiful woman. And on top of that, Kunti saying "Love all my sons equally".

Also, coming to Kunti, never felt her to be pure like Gandhari. Destroyed the life of Karna and how cruel it was to throw your child off, to just save your honor. I always felt her to be very calculative and cold, otherwise who will propose to share a wife of one son to retain unity amongst brothers. I mean come on, her upbringing is such, that she didn't have confidence that her other sons will have "Buri Nazar" on the wife of another brother and will fight due to lust factor. I mean, if is this what she felt, then truly she failed in her upbringing and did not instill moral values in her sons. Coming to Yudhi, another character in Mahabharat for whom I have only disgust, such a powerless individual, who never had true royal quality of valor. Never led any battle from the front, never achieved anything out of his own valor. Always had to rely on his great warrior brothers Bheem/Arjun, for achieving victories on the battlefront. Like he was non-playing captain, if you talk of sports. Was addicted to gambling, and lusted for his brother's wife. What a pathetic individual...


Please post regular updates :)

Regards,
Indra
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: paartha

Hi Lakshmi,

I found this forum while searching for various interesting stories/incidents related to Mahabharat.

Let me congratulate you on writing such a marvelous piece and in particular writing it from Draupadi's point of view. I have been hooked to this story from last few weeks, since I found this forum. You have great writing skills and capacity to unravel emotions and induct nice subtleties and humor at various junctures, which makes it highly pleasurable to read.

I would request you to continue this thread and continue to induct some more new stories/angles, reminiscent some past stories and interweave them, just to keep the thread going:) . As, this has been a wonderful thread to read.

I think this has a very good potential to be a very popular book, if published. So, may be you can think on those lines, sometime in future. This deserves to be read by wide audience to understand Mahabharat from Draupadi's point of view and beautiful relationship of Arjun and Draupadi.

I have always admired Arjun and has always been my hero. A great warrior, compassionate and kind human being. Above all, the favourite of the Lord himself. I bought several books on Arjun, like Sweety Shinde's "Arjun: Without Doubt", which I regard as one of the most outstanding books I read on Arjun. The only instances, where I find it difficult to understand and forgive my hero are, when he did not refuse the pathetic decision of "sharing" pronounced by Kunti/Yudhi, And, being silent during the shameful Dyut Sabha instance. I have read your thread on why Arjun had to be silent, because it was understood at that time, to be norm to oblige to elders and refusing them was considered sinful. Still, whatever it may be, only these two incidents make me hurt, when I think of my hero's failure to stand-up and deliver.

The thread gives beautiful perspective of Draupadi's feelings/trauma, and the immense pain she had to undergo due to the decision made by Kunti/Yudhi duo. I always felt this was really a cruel decision which sealed the fate of the innocent woman. Both, Kunti/Yudhi can never be pardoned for their shameful decision. Your thread has beautifully highlighted the trauma she had to undergo and how truly it is not possible to "Love equally all the husbands". I mean come on, polyandry itself was such a rare instance and ancient practice, wherein Yudhi had to go back so far in time, to rattle couple of examples and try to cover his lusty feelings for the most beautiful woman. And on top of that, Kunti saying "Love all my sons equally".

Also, coming to Kunti, never felt her to be pure like Gandhari. Destroyed the life of Karna and how cruel it was to throw your child off, to just save your honor. I always felt her to be very calculative and cold, otherwise who will propose to share a wife of one son to retain unity amongst brothers. I mean come on, her upbringing is such, that she didn't have confidence that her other sons will have "Buri Nazar" on the wife of another brother and will fight due to lust factor. I mean, if is this what she felt, then truly she failed in her upbringing and did not instill moral values in her sons. Coming to Yudhi, another character in Mahabharat for whom I have only disgust, such a powerless individual, who never had true royal quality of valor. Never led any battle from the front, never achieved anything out of his own valor. Always had to rely on his great warrior brothers Bheem/Arjun, for achieving victories on the battlefront. Like he was non-playing captain, if you talk of sports. Was addicted to gambling, and lusted for his brother's wife. What a pathetic individual...


Please post regular updates :)

Regards,
Indra

Another arjun draupadi admirer...😆.Welcome in this small family of the fateful evening n i couldnt help but quote u bcoz of ur excellence in pouring ur feeling n u r correct in every word... Cause we all feel the same...really powerful ur expressions were...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks Divu55 😊. Yes, reading this thread has opened up new perspective for me from Draupadi's point of view. Earlier, I was more of an Arjun/Krishna admirer but after reading this thread one more is added to the list: ). Collected various books related to Arjun, always felt, how one could be so humble despite of having everything, he always fascinated me.
But, this thread, has been a revelation for me and I more or less, feel like these must have been true feelings of Draupadi as well. Felt connected to the characters and the story telling was simply awesome.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: paartha

Thanks Divu55 😊. Yes, reading this thread has opened up new perspective for me from Draupadi's point of view. Earlier, I was more of an Arjun/Krishna admirer but after reading this thread one more is added to the list: ). Collected various books related to Arjun, always felt, how one could be so humble despite of having everything, he always fascinated me.

But, this thread, has been a revelation for me and I more or less, feel like these must have been true feelings of Draupadi as well. Felt connected to the characters and the story telling was simply awesome.

hehe... Same with me😛... I have always been an arjun krishna admirer but after reading this awesome piece of work i connected myself instantly with draupadi's pain n this help those who don't admire these two characters to understand their lifetime sufferings...
All credit goes to laxmi di for her dedication n hard work... N
BTY u can just call me Divu...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Indra/ Partha

Let me first express my delight to meet another Arjun admirer. Welcome to Arjun and Draupadi's land of love.
Thank you so much for liking the story. Such appreciation inspires and motivates to write better.


Yes I strongly believe no woman would like to get into polyandry. No previous birth story works for me. There are people who try to project Draupadi as the one interested in having five husbands. I wonder how is it possible.

We human beings have our preferences in everything. Like we won't like all the colours equally. We won't relish all types of food equally.

Ha mother's love can be taken as an exception but still there also sometimes we find partial love in special situations.

I refuse to believe Draupadi loved them equally. Why would she ? She has her husband,handsome,valourous and perfect in every way. Arjun is a complete package like Indrajeet Bandopadhyay once said and declared Draupadi need not look at anyone else as she has Arjun.

About Yudhi less said the better. I don't want to talk about him.

Kunti did the blunder being a woman. I could not even imagine Drau's situation...

My friend Sweety's Arjun Without Doubt is the best. I love it and keep it in my handbag. I can't even count how many times I read it.

Thanks for your kind words. I will try my best to be regular with my updates.

Do write often whenever you feel like.


With good Wishes

Lakshmi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Divu. Cutestrawberry, Sweetika

Thanks for showering so much love. It means a lot.


Cutestrawberry

Your every word I agree. Fact.


Divu

No justification can help Kunti for what she had done. You are right.




Lakshmi

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