Drabble: Barase Aasman Piya Milan ki (Raadha-Krishna)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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The sky shines a grim blue as the colossal cloud rushes from all ends to meet his love dazzling as a diamond. The pearls from her necklace slip down to soak the lovers below with the joy of affection.

Drenched in the shower they resemble their mentors above where the lightening lady enchants her billowy inamorato.

Holding hands they move closer to view the chilling amour of the ether. One strike of lightening and she falls into his arms, seeking protection.

He holds her tight pulling over his heavy blanket over to hide them from the curious glances of the impatient, fidgety woods.

He blinks away a drop of water from his eyelashes and wipes her face with the edge of his shining garment. She coyly hides her face in his palms.

Alongside the youthful nature their eyes sing the unwonted song of love to the rhythm of the smooth coursed raindrops.

The exquisite lovers bumble into the vast field that glitters emerald headed by the vast sky where the deep clouds form tetchy waves of a greyish shade of blue.

They stand on the delicate grass and look vacantly as the fading drops of water sliding down the vault of heaven rest on the turf, glistening as the sun peeps through the clouds to smile at them.

Edited by Radhikerani - 9 years ago

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Maverick_me thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely post.. such wonderful emotions
👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! This is so BEAUTIFULL! The words flow like water! Just love it, i have no more words at the moment.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I didn't know you were so poetic! I mean, wow.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maverick_me

Lovely post.. such wonderful emotions

👍🏼



Thank you so much Di! Glad you liked it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramya06

Wow! This is so BEAUTIFULL! The words flow like water! Just love it, i have no more words at the moment.



Aww! Thanks Ramyadi! I'm so happy you liked it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Surya_krsnbhakt

I didn't know you were so poetic! I mean, wow.



That's a huge compliment when it comes from you, Bhaiya!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is just awesome,Proteeti.
It creates a visual in front of the eyes when anyone reads it. The delicacy of emotions portrayed is just beautiful. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWESOME DRABBLE😳
IT FELT SO DIVINE! N
PURE!PROTEETI
SIS KEEP WRITING
MORE!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mesmerising poem ...
Every words were touching

Good job
Keep writing ...
Beautiful ...👏
And thanks for PM 😃

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