Ek Shaam Aapke Naam - Page 10

wow .. that was fast ... hey it's much much much better than what i would come up with in such a short time ..

👏

chalte ho to chaman ko chaliye,
sunte hain ke baharan hai
Paat hare hain phool khile hain,
kam kam baad-o baran hai


thanks to my best friend for making me memorize this one sher .. i might be wrong, but I guess this was by Mir Taqi Mir ..

mein likhnay baithoon toh pata nahin loag kahan kahan bhaag jaein gey ... i am very very very bad at it ... serisouly ...

yeah those are not mine ... mein nay likha hai na pichlay page mein kay mein copy paste kar rahi hoon kisi kay ... 😳

Hey swetha thanks ...all I wrote are mine as such :)

Chalo one more here
koi kahta hai hasna acchi baat nahi
hasne wala hoga mahamurkh koi
aapki hasi dekhkar kahenge sab yahi
Hasi se badhkar koi cheez nahi
😊

mein koi shayar nahi
par dil mein hai likhnay kay armaan kahi
mein koi shayar nahi
par aansoon mein hai dard wahi
mein koi shayar nahi
sach yehi hai kay meri hai yeh kahni


😳 ... my try ... 😆

Originally posted by: mans

Hey swetha thanks ...all I wrote are mine as such :)

Chalo one more here
koi kahta hai hasna acchi baat nahi
hasne wala hoga mahamurkh koi
aapki hasi dekhkar kahenge sab yahi
Hasi se badhkar koi cheez nahi
😊

wah wah wah .. 😃 ... really good ones mans ... i wish i had some command over at least one language to write such beautiful poems ...

mein nay kitna soch kar likha tha .. kisi nay comment bhi nahin kiya abhi tak .. !

Originally posted by: skasuba

mein koi shayar nahi
par dil mein hai likhnay kay armaan kahi
mein koi shayar nahi
par aansoon mein hai dard wahi
mein koi shayar nahi
sach yehi hai kay meri hai yeh kahni


😳 ... my try ... 😆

hey swetha ...I was just busy in other thread ...honestly its really good one👏 will give u answer on this soon so wait and watch 😛

Originally posted by: mans

hey swetha ...I was just busy in other thread ...honestly its really good one👏 will give u answer on this soon so wait and watch 😛

😳 .. thanks mans ... sure ... will wait 😃

Originally posted by: srk_lover

I HAVE ONE!!!!!

ok here goes...itz my own ok 😛 spent alot of time on it😳

suraj hua maddham
chand jalne laga
aasman yeh hai
kyon pighalne laga

mein tehri rahi zameen chalne lagi
dhadka yeh dil saans thamne lagi
kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyar hai
OH AMEYYYY kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyar hai ❤️

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ITZ THE POEM OK 😛 MY VERY OWN😉

😆

You win! Hands down!!!

OYE AMEY didn't gel with the mood a bit tho....😛