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Posted: 15 years ago
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You're doing karaoke, na? Doesn't it bother you? Anyways I have only heard Chaha Hai Tujhko...and I love your voice. You sing so well without any training 👏 and I'm sure you'll do even more well when you start taking up some singing classes. Keep it up and all the best 👍🏼.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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First of all thanks for sharing your videos and your songs
honestly, it is kind of weired to judge you, as opposed to the game we are playing in the forum, but since you asked for it here I go
Here is my 2 cents
U sure do have a Very sweet voice, loved it😊
you are able to reach the high notes comfortably, and some of the lines you sang had so much expression
the reason you go off scale, and kind of hurry through some notes and have transition issues, is cause you dont hit the right notes, this will definitley come if you take lessons and riyaaz
Good luck in all your future endeavors
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Rachna--

You're doing karaoke, na? Doesn't it bother you? Anyways I have only heard Chaha Hai Tujhko...and I love your voice. You sing so well without any training 👏 and I'm sure you'll do even more well when you start taking up some singing classes. Keep it up and all the best 👍🏼.



Why would karaoke bother me? I love it! Thank you for the warm words of encouragement! ='
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: simi_1

First of all thanks for sharing your videos and your songs

honestly, it is kind of weired to judge you, as opposed to the game we are playing in the forum, but since you asked for it here I go
Here is my 2 cents
U sure do have a Very sweet voice, loved it😊
you are able to reach the high notes comfortably, and some of the lines you sang had so much expression
the reason you go off scale, and kind of hurry through some notes and have transition issues, is cause you dont hit the right notes, this will definitley come if you take lessons and riyaaz
Good luck in all your future endeavors



what i really meant by judging me was just giving input! haha. thank you for your comments and i will surely improve upon what you have suggested. thank you for words of encouragement and support!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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So I just got word that the selection into SRGMP has been made. And only one candidate from the USA has been selected. And unfort that isn't me. 😒 But I'm not giving up. There's always next year!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cutiepie Rani



Why would karaoke bother me? I love it! Thank you for the warm words of encouragement! ='


Nah I just thought it would be a bit of a disturbance but never mind me...😆

And you're welcome dear 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi rani,
Your voice quality is very good. I heard two songs, first I will give my opinion on pardesi - Raja hinustani.
You picked up at correct note but while singing SATHAI - first line second time, you broke your breath at pardesi.
You sang par....desi, you need to take breath only when word has been sung.
I think you already know that you must write the song and mark places where singer is taking breath on original track.
Your high notes are excellent, but when you come down from high to low notes you lose the grip. I mean apkee neche ke sur nahe lagte. Please practice that.
To over-come or address this issue you need to learn sa, re ga, ma, pa, dha, ni , on harmonium. You can do that by joining 8 to 10 weeks classes at any temple. We have this facility in Canada but I'm not sure about usa.
Then you need to practice Sa ......... only on harmonium for 30 minutes in the mander- saptak(lower notes) and then in tar - saptak(higher notes)
Beside that you need to learn common taals e.g. Talwara (4 beats), Kaherwa(8 beats), taal rupak(7 beats), aek taal(10beats) and teen taal (16 beats)
Its not a big deal and within 13 weeks you should become good in music and will notice dramatic change in your singing. I can tell you that because my wife is a classical singer and I play tabla with her plus I can sing also.
Tx and good luck.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I don't consider myself well-versed in music, but from the very little knowledge I have, I would advice you to work more on your lower notes and also on your pitch.

You definitely have potential to become a good singer. Wish you all the best for your prosperous future! and Thanks for sharing your videos.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyy you are a good singer and way to go. keep practising....and like someone999 said earlier, work on lower notes ...
thank you so much for sharing with us...wish you all the best for your future..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: JaspalToronto

Hi rani,

Your voice quality is very good. I heard two songs, first I will give my opinion on pardesi - Raja hinustani.
You picked up at correct note but while singing SATHAI - first line second time, you broke your breath at pardesi.
You sang par....desi, you need to take breath only when word has been sung.
I think you already know that you must write the song and mark places where singer is taking breath on original track.
Your high notes are excellent, but when you come down from high to low notes you lose the grip. I mean apkee neche ke sur nahe lagte. Please practice that.
To over-come or address this issue you need to learn sa, re ga, ma, pa, dha, ni , on harmonium. You can do that by joining 8 to 10 weeks classes at any temple. We have this facility in Canada but I'm not sure about usa.
Then you need to practice Sa ......... only on harmonium for 30 minutes in the mander- saptak(lower notes) and then in tar - saptak(higher notes)
Beside that you need to learn common taals e.g. Talwara (4 beats), Kaherwa(8 beats), taal rupak(7 beats), aek taal(10beats) and teen taal (16 beats)
Its not a big deal and within 13 weeks you should become good in music and will notice dramatic change in your singing. I can tell you that because my wife is a classical singer and I play tabla with her plus I can sing also.
Tx and good luck.



Hello. Thank you for all the comments on what I need to improve on. I will surely start working on them. About the song "Pardesi", I just want to clarify that I was so much out of breath because I was taking on the role of both male and female parts. And there were some parts where the female sang directly after the male with barely any breaths or vice versa the male sung directly after the female. So that's why it was very hard controlling my voice. I seldom have breath problems, but when I have to sing both male and female parts it becomes very hard sometimes. I'm sure you know what I mean. I actually I have problems with my high notes, but it seems like most of you think otherwise. I will surely work on all that you have suggested. Thank you so much for giving me all these suggestions! This will really help me in the future!

Orginial song:
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FkdO55CVZ3I[/YOUTUBE]

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