I liked the separation just bcoz we were stuck at on particular state..where there was no scope to move story farward...
But did u all agree with upcoming track of adopted child n all ...
Well to be honest I m not...
If I was the writer:
I wud have never introduce pregnancy track at all..then after separation I wud have never shown her back in PD .I wud have rather shown her in some other city .. working as a reporter, shown her brave, strong , n independent woman...
She is working for a firm in some other city n shown some career progress...She is having some good friends but overall she remains sad ...A police man is always after her due to her article writing basically against politicians, some well known business men,some dons...so she has many enemies against her..
She has made a partner too who is an old man ...n they both call each other names...A cute old naive man is shown as firm owner too ...who considers imlie as her daughter...
The owner one day calls imlie to help him ..bcoz she is senior reporter in his firm..He ask imlie to help him in order to save his firm as they are at frequent loss so a business man wants to buy his firm ...n he only has this business as his living ....
Imlie agrees to help her owner.. imlie somewhere feels that maybe it's Aryan the old man is talking about but ignores her gut feeling thinking what wud he be doing in this city ...He is known industrialist of Delhi..
The next morning imlie is called by the owner in his office..To her surprise as she enters the office She is shocked to see Aryan ..Aryan is happy to see imlie again but both don't react just keep on staring each other...
Imlie excuses herself n leave ...Aryan cracks a deal which is profitable to both n watches imlie from the office.. Imlie is disturb seeing Aryan back in her life again.... To be Continued
Drop in ur ideas ..what cud the story be...how it shud move on ..