What do you think the story should be

mshuja thumbnail
Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail 2nd Anniversary Thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#1

I liked the separation just bcoz we were stuck at on particular state..where there was no scope to move story farward...

But did u all agree with upcoming track of adopted child n all ...

Well to be honest I m not...

If I was the writer:

I wud have never introduce pregnancy track at all..then after separation I wud have never shown her back in PD .I wud have rather shown her in some other city .. working as a reporter, shown her brave, strong , n independent woman...

She is working for a firm in some other city n shown some career progress...She is having some good friends but overall she remains sad ...A police man is always after her due to her article writing basically against politicians, some well known business men,some dons...so she has many enemies against her..

She has made a partner too who is an old man ...n they both call each other names...A cute old naive man is shown as firm owner too ...who considers imlie as her daughter...

The owner one day calls imlie to help him ..bcoz she is senior reporter in his firm..He ask imlie to help him in order to save his firm as they are at frequent loss so a business man wants to buy his firm ...n he only has this business as his living ....

Imlie agrees to help her owner.. imlie somewhere feels that maybe it's Aryan the old man is talking about but ignores her gut feeling thinking what wud he be doing in this city ...He is known industrialist of Delhi..

The next morning imlie is called by the owner in his office..To her surprise as she enters the office She is shocked to see Aryan ..Aryan is happy to see imlie again but both don't react just keep on staring each other...

Imlie excuses herself n leave ...Aryan cracks a deal which is profitable to both n watches imlie from the office.. Imlie is disturb seeing Aryan back in her life again.... To be Continued


Drop in ur ideas ..what cud the story be...how it shud move on ..

Created

Last reply

Replies

5

Views

601

Users

5

Likes

21

Frequent Posters

Dimagkidahi thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 3 years ago
#2

Mra itna dimg

Nai chal raha hai… apun ko direct sr chaye🤣

BlueJayFire thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 3 years ago
#3

Good storyline, ideally you expect this type of growth. But no, what is there in PD to keep reporting things? She can hold a post in their local Panchayat and continue to work against atrocities in the name of tradition.


I really don't know why they introduced her to become a reporter or someone with big dreams. What message they are giving is, anyone with big dreams in village cant survive and get trapped into issues because of their kindness aka self-imposed rules of right and combined with arrogance. This time around her dialogues to Malini or to Aryan made zero sense to me. Because we all know she will lose and they are all empty

Sumaiya27 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 3 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: blackfaree

Mra itna dimg

Nai chal raha hai… apun ko direct sr chaye🤣


Same here..bas iss baar koi cheeku/keechu nahi chahiye 🤣

Edited by Sumaiya27 - 3 years ago
mango.falooda thumbnail
Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail 7th Anniversary Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 3 years ago
#5

I feel very strongly against the upcoming track of adopted child because there are so many legal issues that it drives me nuts. 😡🤢👎🏼 imlie can be seen as kidnapper in one way -- you are not supposed to just raise an abandoned child under our current laws. you are supposed to report to the police station. they will turn the case to child services who will then give to a couple who is waiting for adoption.

also, there have been cases when adopted parents who illegally took in a child were charged with kidnapping and the charges are for 7-8 years if they get prosecuted. so this is not a joke.

considering that the number of couples wanting to adopt outweighs the number of children available (that is the current adoption climate in our country), it is in some ways stealing the happiness of a couple for your own benefit. 🥺 I wish the CVs had done some actual legal research -- not that hard, just watch the news!


what would I have liked to see?

if it was impossible to get around this child track, then please have them follow the law! have the temple authorities hand the child to an orphanage. imlie starts volunteering at that very place. because the baby has heart disease, no one wants to adopt her. so she ends up staying at the orphange. over the years, imlie gets attached as she pops in whenever she can during her work.

or even better turn the the child over the tripathis who are the natural relatives.

Edited by mango.falooda - 3 years ago
mshuja thumbnail
Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail 2nd Anniversary Thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: mango.falooda

I feel very strongly against the upcoming track of adopted child because there are so many legal issues that it drives me nuts. 😡🤢👎🏼 imlie can be seen as kidnapper in one way -- you are not supposed to just raise an abandoned child under our current laws. you are supposed to report to the police station. they will turn the case to child services who will then give to a couple who is waiting for adoption.

also, there have been cases when adopted parents who illegally took in a child were charged with kidnapping and the charges are for 7-8 years if they get prosecuted. so this is not a joke.

considering that the number of couples wanting to adopt outweighs the number of children available (that is the current adoption climate in our country), it is in some ways stealing the happiness of a couple for your own benefit. 🥺 I wish the CVs had done some actual legal research -- not that hard, just watch the news!


what would I have liked to see?

if it was impossible to get around this child track, then please have them follow the law! have the temple authorities hand the child to an orphanage. imlie starts volunteering at that very place. because the baby has heart disease, no one wants to adopt her. so she ends up staying at the orphange. over the years, imlie gets attached as she pops in whenever she can during her work.

or even better turn the the child over the tripathis who are the natural relatives.

Seriously we as an audience r not accepting this fact that she will be raising guriya as her own child...how lame is that...well CVs will make biryani out of this leap track as well...hmm let see what twist makers r to show us ....

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".