TS - Of Choices and Decisions - Page 2

Welcome to writer club.

Will catch up ❤️

Hi,

This is so so beautiful. I wish this happens in the show. Well done 👏

Whaddya mean..this isn't proofread??!! This is gold, dear! Goodness, where do I begin? With each word uttered, I was like Yes, Yes,Yes! He covered every single point.( Someone has been taking down notes in this forum..😆) Hallelujah for SK thinking about Imlie! The one in the show seems to have gone on a fishing trip! If the makers show even 1/4th of this, I am gonna be over the moon. For the past couple of days, I have been miffed at Aryan..and now I am just gonna imagine all of this happened in the show too..My rage is subsiding. Thank you Sia😆Much love dear..You got the gift. Keep writing!

Wow!

Why have u been silent all this while 😒

This was so good, aru explaining the people that really needs to know .

Aru is gem of a person❤️

Can't get enough of his Aru-ness be it onscreen or in the fiction all u beautiful people write .

Do write more

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Lurker Sia!! 😆

Hello, hello. Good to finally hear your voice. 🤗 Bookmarking this. Will be back, hopefully soon. Though I have a pile of stories on the forum to catch up on. 🙈

Indeed a lurker who must have bombarded you with many notifications, lol!

Thank you, please do let me know once you read.😳

Btw, my bail buddhi realised it very late that you were the author of one of my favorite stories in another forum as well. Love' em all ❤️

Originally posted by: happiness1

Such a detailed write up. All of Aryan's feelings put out and beautifully described.

Seeking permission from those that are truly the only well wishers in Imlie's life is not only important but also necessary. For them to hear this from Imlie and would have most likely resulted in them having a all together different impression of this marriage.

Aryan not being one to hide behind false narratives clearly has laid out his plan in simple terms so that they know he has no bad intentions.

Hopefully Imlie sees what a gem of a person Aryan is and gives her 100% to this relationship!

Beautiful TS!

Exactly, I feel that they downplay the roles of Meethi and Satyakam in the show. I so badly want them to be a bigger part in her life rather than look like cameos.

@bold: I really do hope so. He deserves all the love. ❤️

Thank you for your kind words 😳

Originally posted by: Priti1610

Siaa... You are just awesome dear do you know... What a beautiful conversation you have come upto... I just hope writters read this os and make some scenes related to Sattyakam meethi n imlie... They are imlie real family not tripathis... I just loved it... Keep writing you are amazing writer dear... 👍🏼

Thank you so much! Really glad you liked it.😳

Originally posted by: Fawn11

The conversation,how you penned down Aryan’s thought process is extremely good .

And I agree Arylie is a couple that I have liked after 10 years.Finally a perfect Jodi

Thank you 😳

Indeed,10 years later, I again fell for a couple from Gul's show despite restraining myself very badly initially😆

Originally posted by: nmurali

This is amazing, I want this to happen in the show. Dear creatives please have a scene where Meethi and SK meet with Aryan and understand his objectives.

Gold I tell you..

Thanks a lot! 😳

Fingers crossed!! I really do hope they are there for the marriage and have a different perspective on it.

I'm still desperately waiting for the ASR - Satyakam meet in the show.

Originally posted by: mltr16

Siaa!! Beautiful work. I am reading this at work ...oops! But just wanted to stop by and say THANK YOU for addressing Meethi and Satyakaam in your universe. They are so much an afterthought in the actual show that it borders on appalling for me. So much importance is instead given to the adoptive family

This was beautifully written and I am going to read it again tonight when I have some quiet time. 👍🏼

Ah, thank you so much for the kind words 😳

My thoughts on the adoptive family is downright offensive, I will not venture much into that, lol!

I do think that not all definitions are bound by blood but then when someone is called as family, that person must be deserving of it. That sort of bond doesn't come with conditions, it is supposed to be unrestrained, unconditional and this adoptive family is the dead opposite of it. Nevertheless, our Imliya doesn't think so😵

I would love to see more dynamics of Imlie and her family, their bond with Aryan and his family, the jutapoxes, too many things that the writers can explore. Albeit, I'm trying very hard to keep my expectations low 😆

Thank you again, would love to further know your feedback!