Aryan-Imlie/Arylie SS - Thoda Thoda Pyar

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello Peeps.. It's me once again with another piece of writing.. No it is not a sequel of my previous OSs.. It is just a random plot that I typed while I was in office... Heck even I don't know what I am going to write after this or how the story will unfold further 😆.. It was just a random thought that I penned down and thought to share with all...


Now Few Things to Remember:


  1. I am still not sure about the story🤔 so I am just sharing the Prologue (the one I wrote) As I couldn't control myself from not posting.😉
  2. Since I am still not sure how the story will unfold so don't any update from me on this story for a while😛. I will update once something comes to my mind.😳
  3. The story is completely different from show and so are the characters. Of course, there may be some resemblance here and there.
  4. Lastly, keep showering your love on me and my work 🤗 and keep praying that I should be able to thing what I have to write further 😆


So putting a pause on my rantings presenting the Prologue of my story... Hope you all going to like it 😳



PROLOGUE


Then There She was sitting in the same café on the same table with her same favorite cup of Black Coffee with her book in her hand, when he saw her. Like always she was engrossed in her book and like always he found it cute when she adjusted her glasses back and it falls down on her nose or when she stuck back the loose strand of her hair coming out from her ponytail to the back side of her ear. Why the hell does she keeps on thinking that she is not beautiful, he wondered as he keeps on looking at her from his usual seat like any other day.


If someone asks him then he would say that she is the most beautiful girl in the whole world he had ever seen. She is beautiful, but not like those girls in the magazines. She is beautiful for the way she thought. She is beautiful for the sparkle in her eyes when she talked about something she loved. She is beautiful for her ability to make other people smile even if she was sad. No, she was not beautiful for something as temporary as her looks. She was beautiful, deep down to her soul. If only she herself understands the same and stop looking at herself from this world’s point of view for whom only outer beauty matters. If only she sees herself the way he is seeing her then probably she too will find herself the most beautiful girl of this world. If Only……Everything is dependent on these two words “If Only”, he sighed as he continues his task of admiring her from far like every other day.


Everything is same like the other days; the place, the ambience, the people, the scenario and his same routine of admiring her from far. Everything is same, except for one thing. Today instead of being engrossed in her book and being oblivious of his presence around her, She noticed HIM!!!!!




So this is it... Now leaving up to all your judgement... I will try to be back on this story when I will think of something.. Till then enjoy 🤗


Comments/Criticism always welcome


Luv Aakriti ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It’s short and sweet loved it can’t wait to find out what happens next

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Posted: 3 years ago
#3

Definitely different but amazing! Super start!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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bitten by the writers bug 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SundariP

bitten by the writers bug 😆


All thanks to you.. 😆


Ye pehli baar hoga ki mujhe khud nahi pata ki mujhe actual me kya likhna hai 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Seems like a romcom in store.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful start. Plzz do continue it's sounds interesting😘😘😘

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Posted: 3 years ago
#8

Nice start.....update soon......😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tu isse continue kar rahi hei na?


Starting seems interesting...is it gonna be an AU story? Or will follow the og storyline?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahiaana

Tu isse continue kar rahi hei na?


Starting seems interesting...is it gonna be an AU story? Or will follow the og storyline?


ummeed to yahi hai 😆… Baaki pehle ye to samajh me aaye ki story shuru kaise karni hai🤣..


It’s going to be AU… there may be some resemblance here and there but not following the og storyline…

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