Arylie FF: Second Chances - IMPORTANT NOTE - Page 34

Updated Chapter 51. Link below. Enjoy!! -- M

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/31321

YOU SWEETHEART 🥺😭🤗

WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN ?

Thank you for the sweetest marks of appreciation Chanchluuu ♥️ Makes my heart happpy, I just write to express what I feel but y'all are so nice about it 🥺

M ka toh tumhare jaise shiddat waalein readers se hi dil bhar jaata hoga, who consistently take out time to tell her about how they feel about the chapter(s) and the efforts she puts in 🤍

Lotsaaa love cutie 😘

Lisa

Originally posted by: CaffeineMuggle

YOU SWEETHEART 🥺😭🤗

WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN ?

Thank you for the sweetest marks of appreciation Chanchluuu ♥️ Makes my heart happpy, I just write to express what I feel but y'all are so nice about it 🥺

M ka toh tumhare jaise shiddat waalein readers se hi dil bhar jaata hoga, who consistently take out time to tell her about how they feel about the chapter(s) and the efforts she puts in 🤍

Lotsaaa love cutie 😘

Lisa

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M, KHUSHALI !!!!!😭❤️❤️

Sucha Beautifull Name. Aghhhh!

Reminds me of someone from the forum who writes the sweetest comments.😉😉😉😉

Updated the final chapter, Chapter 52. Enjoy! --- M

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/31341

The most perfect ending to the most perfect story

This will be missed 💞

Wohoooo! This is over? It means I can now find some time to binge. 🤭 I have a list of AryLie to-dos for late July, early August. 😆

P.S: I'm sad we missed each other when you were here. 😒

Thanks a lot dear. It worked when I opened it again. Also a big thanks for the Efforts you made on this story. It's really special for me and will always be.🤗🤗🥰🥰

I read all the last 3 chapters in one go!! And baby i was so emotional throughout all of them!!

The labour and delivery, everything was explained with such clarity!! Kudos!!

The way the way they have become each other's pillars of strength has me crying!!🥺

Why are they SO SO FCKING GOOD!!!???

The name!!! khushali baby i want to meet you!!!😭😭

I CAN'T BELIEVE SECOND CHANCES HAS ENDED..

I still remember the initial days when this fanfiction used to be the first and the last thing I used to think about in the day!! I was so goddamn excited for every update.😭😭😭

And my arru and imlie!!!🥺

My babies have come a long way!!! God bless!!🧿

I'm getting so emotional!! Ik SC is your baby but lemme clear its everyone's baby!!!😭😭😭

I may have stopped making my comments but i will never forget SECOND CHANCES!! And the best thing out of this experience has to be you!!!

Okay the epilogue was so overwhelming!!

*Not me calculating their age*

Aryan would be in his post DILF ERA!! There...I said it!!!😌

And hopefully my imlu in her MILF era!!👀

All the jokes apart, seems like they all are a tight knit clan!! Hope they celebrate the festives very well!!!

And HOLLISTER & MANJEERA??

Gonna pretend i didn't see this coming!!

Okay so 2 out of the 3 have powers? Why didn't my poor Anurag get it!!???

Aah can't even begin to imagine how hot their children are!!!😩🥵

I mean!!! Aryan’s sharp looks & interlligence and imlie's grace and charm...

Kya patakha honge teeno!!😩🤌🏻

I still can't believe i just read the last chapter!! I mean it's over? Sachme?

Someone pinch me please bcz this whole bumpy ride was no less than a beautiful dream!!

I'm going to miss leaving my comments on this and and maybe interacting with you about SC!!

I enjoyed this alot M!! Loads of love to you baby for blessing all of us with this impeccable piece of ART!!

With love,

Diya💕

A mix of my ramblings, feelings and fangirling on Chapter 51 :

A lot from my side is due isn't it M ? But not the baby it seems 🥺 You won't believe how many drafts of me trying to express just how viscerally I felt while reading this chapter, were discarded. I just couldn't do it justice, probably still won't be able to do it.

First things first, much appreciation to the poet who gave that beautiful piece on how the little life chose her own mother 🤍 Such a precious perspective. My heart had started melting from that moment onwards, what a wonderful decision to add the poem M.

Combined with the song and the scene of Aryan preparing to meet his daughter, the anticipation was so real. My heart was in my throat even though I know everything was going to be perfectly alright. Something so tangible about waiting for the arrival of a precious life and the myriad of feelings the would be parents are experiencing. You did that part so incredibly well M, I have said it again and will repeat it a 100 times ; The way you just make me [/us] feel the way you want to is something else. It's a power you hold above us and it's magic to me. M for Magician, makes sense doesn't it ?

Onto the next part I really want to appreciate is Dr. Verma, the way our doc has been such a consistent support for Imlie and the baby. The way she has always been there and tried to ease Imlie into medical procedures and many of the things Imlie wasn't comfortable with but had to do due to the surrogacy, it's been heartwarming to witness such a humane doctor as herself among the lines of your story. I have personally known some amazing doctors and while I am immensely grateful for them, I know I was also lucky to some extent. Because there have been some real horror stories as well, and as all institutions consists, it's a mixed fraternity. But how much an empathetic doctor changes things only a patient knows. It's with an absolute faith that a patient hands themselves over to their doctors and to build & maintain that connection with the patient so that they get through their journey (of recovery and more), it feels like a blessing. Because the patient gets hope, and feels like their shoulders are less burdened. Ouff, how much I love these dynamics both in the story and in real life. And to know that I am conveying this to you, a significant member who knows about such things all too well, I feel super grateful for this platform.

Glad that you added such realistic fragments of childbearing and labour, didn't feel like I was reading for one second. Could see all the going ons so vividly 🤎

Aryan holding on to his vision is all of us holding on to some semblance of hope for the future. We might not all be precogs like Aryan is and hence more unsure but we never hope anything but for the best in any given situation. Love the symbolism here M.

Oh HOW FAR HAS ARYAN COME, GOSH.

I was a overwhelmed mess, I tell you. Tried so hard to reign in the tears M, so damn hard. Because I couldn't cry then and you know why.

From a cold, calculating and a man who was unable to trust anyone or express his feelings properly, he's head over heels for his wife and his unborn daughter. And he is just so incredibly open about it. I LOVE IT.

Oh my baby Imlie, she is become a mother. My resilient, strong baby. She's been my favorite character (close runner ups are Cheeni, Dadi and Maahi) as you must have guessed by now, her inhibitions and her insecurities have always felt so personal to me in this story and now finally, she's conquered and got it all. It was a tough choice she to make in the beginning due to her family circumstances and I won't ever forget how she stuck through it. Stuck through her choices and the man she made her vows to. Couldn't be prouder of her really and what a strong character you have written; with all her strengths and struggles, just out there. Thank you for etching this character with all her sweetness and warmness. Baby Khushali couldn't get a better mother than Imlie, if I might say.

And ooh, we have got a spunky baby on our hands, wonder who she got it from.

*sighs in delight and looks at the baby's mother*.

HAHAAAAHAAAA, Omg Aryan's "wrong number darling" absolutely killed me M.

As usual your comic timing is impeccable.

Oh I love the visual of Imlie drowsily pulling the baby to her and feeding her. So pure and filling it is, I had such a tender feeling unfurl inside me while reading this.

I don't know how to describe the next part in words, the vision coming true. That deja vu Aryan felt, I am sure was felt by many readers. It was felt by me for sure coupled along with tons of nostalgia and a feeling of awe, felt like a prophecy or destiny however you would like to take it, was finally fulfilled. Nanhi kali has such a big significance in their lives and it's something I am sure to miss.

(On that note, must you end this story ?

*puppy eyes*

I mean a few happy snippets of our favourite Rathore Clan would hurt nobody 🥰 )

Yeah, now that my thespian side has completed her quota, back onto track.

I LOVE THE BOND BETWEEN ARYAN AND THE LITTLE BALL OF HAPPINESS ALREADY. Yes, they are yours Aryan.

Ouff, all mine is gonna be my favourite phrase for a while. How easily did Mr. Rathore just fit into the role of a father that too so doting and loving ? Marveling over her chubby fingers and the softness of her palms, I melted right there M. Literally was a flailing pool of "aww" and "so cute".

You play too much with my emotions I tell you 😭

So, we are at that part, are we ? I WAS SO EXCITED FOR THIS, I CAN'T TELL YOU.

Ah Arpita Di is the referee, is she? And my Imlie is perplexed, poor baby.

But ahhh, there heat is back. It probably never left but in front of Arpita Di ?

I guffawed at that part.

And after second guessing the name so much, it comes so naturally.

You absolutely killed that part M, killed it.

What a breathtaking sight you presented, my heart leapt to its throat when the baby smiled and Imlie spontaneously named the baby. So organic and heartwarming.

And the part following that were equally tender if not more. So much happiness and contentment, it was overflowing with love. And I had goosebumps all throughout the part where Aryan was overwhelmed, at Imlie's unshed tears to when Aryan cupped Imlie's face and when Imlie finished off by saying that "The little girl brought happiness to our lives".

As an reader, I was happy and just overwhelmed with all the feelings.

But at an individual level, all I feel is gratitude, euphoria and such ecstacy.

Unreasonably happy and there's a lump in my throat even as I type this.

What an honour and a privilege M, thank you. An ardent and hearty thank you bas ♥️

Of course Baby Khush is sound sleeper, so accommodating to give her parents some privacy as well. *blushes*

AND DAMNNN M ! Your ability to write smexy scene is beyond any writer I have ever encountered. You encompass it all. Everything. I love how you rekindled their fire and burned away all her pregnancy related insecurities with just one look from Aryan. Their heat is always indescribable.

Aryan is so verbal now, the progression bowls me over everytime. From Majnu Ka Tilla to Always. What a journey, what a man. And what a character you have brought into life and into our hearts.

My heart is heavy, now that I realize that there is just one more chapter to fully savour and I must bid them adieu. The sheer bliss in their lives, may it stay intact forever.

Yet again, I am in awe of you M. You decided to end it with "Chandaniya". It's my favorite lori. Can you believe it ? The countless time I have heard is unbelievable. I just adore it so much.

And this felt like such a precious gift to me 🤍 Gosh, I am emotional all over again.

Never thought Second Chances would mean so much to me but you never cease to surprise me.

Thank you M, my Magician. The wonderful writer and the warm soul you are, it's been a delight to follow through your writing ventures and taking that roll coaster of topsy turvy emotions. But you made me feel at every step M, and feel very deeply at that.

Thank you for taking out time and dedicating so much to Second Chances. Thank you for all your efforts and all the feelings you generously provided us with.

Always have a heart full of love for you and immense gratitude for finding you.

A fan through and through,

yours Khush.