AryLie OS ~ Jungli - Page 7

such a beautiful os

loved it

u described well the situation n AryLie bonding, equation even what Aditya felt

this story is more realistic

loved it

Do write more n Tag me also

Sarcy, I am in love with this OS. I have read it so many times and I am just so taken aback by how accurate it is. As the characters have further developed it show cases that your grasp on the characters was so true. Like right now when aryan is angry because Imlie is doubting her own value. Not trusting her own potential.

Is there a way to write a jungli part 2 from ADTs perspective again based on all that is happening right now. I would love to read your take on it.
😘😘😘 for your amazing writing. I keep coming back to this OS.

Originally posted by: nehaahmad

Sarcy, I am in love with this OS. I have read it so many times and I am just so taken aback by how accurate it is. As the characters have further developed it show cases that your grasp on the characters was so true. Like right now when aryan is angry because Imlie is doubting her own value. Not trusting her own potential.

Is there a way to write a jungli part 2 from ADTs perspective again based on all that is happening right now. I would love to read your take on it.
😘😘😘 for your amazing writing. I keep coming back to this OS.

Thank you so much, Neha. 🤗 I'm glad you enjoyed this one so much as to keep coming back to it!

I don't know about Jungli part 2 from AKT's perspective, but I do have an OS in the making where it's going to be a bit about everyone in the scene – all three of these people, and a bit of their thoughts on some of the things happening now in the show. But I will need to ban myself from the forum and the DT to get it completed. 🤣 Let me see if I can finish it by the weekend.

Originally posted by: Priti1610

Thank you for tagging me otherwise i would miss this wonderful peice... Wow you have written so well this day will surely come one day when aditya will get to realised calmly what he had loose and the journey from his jalli to someone jangli is bcoz of himself you haven't trust his own wife over others... O i loved it this is beautiful piece i would say and while watching them as a couple he might be regretting more.... Bcoz now with malini he doesn't feel same love which he used to get from imlie... This is amazing loved keep writing 😍😍

Thanks, Priti! Glad you liked it! The way it is going, I don't know if Aditya will ever realise his loss calmly. He's still too busy playing victim and painting Aryan (and Malini) as the villian of his life without giving much thought to his own actions!

Originally posted by: mltr16

LOVED it! Sarce, that is really the essence of the difference between Imlie's dynamics with Aditya vs ASR. For this girls it is all about faith and trust. ASR gives it to her unconditionally. Aditya could not and would not. He allowed himself over and over again to be blinded by Malini thereby losing Imlie's trust.

Sukoooooooon!! Seeing Aditya's angst and realization of what he had lost. Seeing Imlie and Aryan in each other's arms......

Thanks, M! Seeing how Aditya keeps on going, forever playing victim, I really wanted to do this. And Aditya actually needed to see that Imlie doesn't do anything to consciously irk Aditya, rather it's a level of comfort that she shares with Aryan on an emotional level that comes to play even subconsciously.

Originally posted by: aatiii

EHHHH OMGI LOOVE LOVE LOVE IT! THIS OS MADE MY MORNING ❤️

Hehe, that was some reaction. 😆

Awesome one shot

Loved it

Originally posted by: Baarish_Sim

So that was beautiful and poetic!

You captured the essence of AryLie with Aryan's excuses that his mom sent him or Arpi did while Imlie's cute gesture's warmed his heart. And the way Imlie embraces his touch as comfort, without even knowing it ❤️

I loved how you crafted Aditya - revived some of the integrity we saw in the initial episodes where he didn't hide from his conscience and insecurities so much. We see a vulnerability that's shrouded in cruelness on tv so it's nice to see that jhalak of old Adi.

Thank you so much, Sim! I'm glad you could relate to the AryLie here, especially because so much focus was on Aditya and how he saw AryLie. I wanted to keep the AryLie moments light as Aditya was to be a witness to them, and yet impactful at the same time as that would lead to some pondering and reflection which hasn't happened on the show version of Aditya.

I'm glad you loved my portrayal of Aditya here and that's a big compliment for me because I've never really watched the show before Aryan’s entry. My understanding of him is based on everything I've read about him from the discussions by the fandom and whatever I've seen of him post Aryan’s entry.

Originally posted by: komaliyaaa

This was f*cking amazing.

Girl, take a bow.

I love how you got into Aditya's head and showed it as if he was in a war with himself.

To portray a character well hated by a fandom is an amazing thing, and you did beautiful.

And Aryan & Imlie, felt so authentic and relatable. This is something I can definitely see happening.

Waiting for more from you.

Komaliyaaa! Thank you! I just realised I haven't responded to everyone on this thread. 🥱

I'm glad you liked it. And I hope to see you here back soon. You're being missed! 😆

Originally posted by: Pavilion_way

This was amazing! Hands down loved every single bit of this.

Excellent, brilliant, marvelous 👏👏👏

I was literally imagining their character throughout this whole piece.

Thank you for tagging me 🤗

Hope to read more of your work.

Thanks, Pavi! Haven't seen you around much. You still watching or gave up on the show? 😆