Tha jhoot ka dil pe bhaar bahut

Awesome poetry of the day after truth revelation:

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[Focus on Adi]

Tha jhoot ka dil pe bhaar bahut, ab sab usko de denge, jisne khoye hain adhikar bahut

[Focus on Imlie]

Adhikar to rishte dete hain, jab rishta nhi adhikar nhi, us daal pe chidiya kyun baithe, jis daal pe ugta pyar nh, Khol diya vo bandhan usne jo sapno ki dor ka hai,

[Focus on malini]

Khwab ude sab tinke banke toofan itni jor ka hai, jisko hum apna samjhe the ab jana kisi aur ka hai

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At last jhooth ka bojh hata adi ke dil se....but still a long way to go for adilie before uniting..

Abhi to sk ki pitai baaki hai...

Abhi to Ts ko face krna baaki hai...

Abhi to AC ki kadwi baatein sunna baaki hai...

Abhi to meethi ko jawab dena baaki hai...

Abhi to Imlie ko vapas lane ke liye uske peeche jana baaki hai...

We are with you Adi in this journey....today Adi must be feeling so relaxed ke chalo jisko hurt krne ka sabse jyada dar tha usko sach bta diya...👏👏👏👏

What would malini think now that's altogether different angle bcz she flipped so frequently in her thoughts and actions....dil se buri nhi hai but external factors(AC) and situation use bura bna deti hai...

So guys how's the poetry...so calm and true....right?

I don't know why but I liked this poem....someone said it's vague but I think this poem is concluding current thoughts going on ad-imlie-malini mind... future ka to pta nhi abut abhi ke liye this poem I liked.🥰

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You know poetry was good 👍🏼but I didn't know but I felt the impact it wanted to create,it wasn't that🤓

Arth tha, connection tha 👍🏼par impact utna nahi laga mujhe😊

No offense to creatives and writers. completely my take as apan khud koi writer nahi h but there was something that didn't click.

You know there was a show on Zee where at the end of each episode a couplet or four line poem was recited and it used to be so impactful and summarised entire epi👍🏼

But I don't know this doesn't clicked .

Just an opinion😊

Originally posted by: FlowerHater

You know poetry was good 👍🏼but I didn't know but I felt the impact it wanted to create,it wasn't that🤓

Arth tha, connection tha 👍🏼par impact utna nahi laga mujhe😊

No offense to creatives and writers. completely my take as apan khud koi writer nahi h but there was something that didn't click.

You know there was a show on Zee where at the end of each episode a couplet or four line poem was recited and it used to be so impactful and summarised entire epi👍🏼

But I don't know this doesn't clicked .

Just an opinion😊

Agreed ....one of the reason is that we wanted adi to be more convincing and elaborative when he told his truth to malini... he just said "hum badal gye" ... as I was reading in other topic with this title...most of us wanted adi to explain this to malini in more convincing way...

Another reason of not feeling impact of this poem is sound of the person who is reciting it...not so impactful voice in my pov...others may disagree.. but I liked the lyrics of the poem...

Third is now we know how each character would behave in near future after today's truth revelation part...especially malini... that's why feeling the impact of this poem doesn't had its deep roots.. that's just my pov.😇

Originally posted by: FreshBreeze

Agreed ....one of the reason is that we wanted adi to be more convincing and elaborative when he told his truth to malini... he just said "hum badal gye" ... as I was reading in other topic with this title...most of us wanted adi to explain this to malini in more convincing way...

Another reason of not feeling impact of this poem is sound of the person who is reciting it...not so impactful voice in my pov...others may disagree.. but I liked the lyrics of the poem...

Third is now we know how each character would behave in near future after today's truth revelation part...especially malini... that's why feeling the impact of this poem doesn't had its deep roots.. that's just my pov.😇

@bold I think knowing behaviour pattern of any character by this time in any story is predictable👍🏼 we have had good 153 epis and by this time be it this or any other story we must have known how the character will act or react😆and I think it isn't affected by us knowing how they will😆

I would rather say that I agree more to the 2nd point and also that may be this poem,it's placement was haphazard👍🏼

It wasn't smooth👍🏼it seemed that it was put for the sake of being put 😆

Originally posted by: FlowerHater

@bold I think knowing behaviour pattern of any character by this time in any story is predictable👍🏼 we have had good 153 epis and by this time be it this or any other story we must have known how the character will act or react😆and I think it isn't affected by us knowing how they will😆

I would rather say that I agree more to the 2nd point and also that may be this poem,it's placement was haphazard👍🏼

It wasn't smooth👍🏼it seemed that it was put for the sake of being put 😆

yeah....writers might be rushing into things due to lockdown effect 🤣

Good for you.. it felt way way way too pretentious And forcefully thrown in and honestly by the time it came it was too much of a word kichadi in my head.. there is only sonmuch one can take thrown together.. it was too jumbled up and felt out of place.. if they really wanted to throw that in maybe tehraav laate. Also the narrator had a bad bad VO.. shayari karna sabke bas ki baat nahi hoti ...

Originally posted by: naadanmasakalli

Good for you.. it felt way way way too pretentious And forcefully thrown in and honestly by the time it came it was too much of a word kichadi in my head.. there is only sonmuch one can take thrown together.. it was too jumbled up and felt out of place.. if they really wanted to throw that in maybe tehraav laate. Also the narrator had a bad bad VO.. shayari karna sabke bas ki baat nahi hoti ...

yeah....may be it will feel good to read it again sometime later when someone use it in adilie vm ....... right now I just wanted to appreciate the lyrics...surely it was out of place today... 🤞🏻🤞🏻

Poem is great but yeah voice is not much impactful..

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