~SiraFF This is true Love~updated pg 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guyz! Im writing my 1st sira ff ever. Pheli br hai k mein kuch lik rai o so plz guyz jo b ghalati o muje maf kr dena.

Character sketch:

Raghav obroi:The cool handsome dude who is interested in Sally.

Sia dillon:The fighter girl us k parents bachpan mein e guzar gaye te ab wo apne grand parents or apni badi behen k saat rehti hai.

Arjun:cute boy, Raghav best buddy and he iz also sia's cousin.

Kv:He iz strict teacher and also Raghav's uncle.

Sally:She iz rich,beautiful girls and sia's best friend lekin us mein ek kami hai she doesnt like defected thing.she iz also interested in Raghav.

Vishal:He iz rich spoiled boy and he iz interested in sally.

Sen dillon:Sia's elder sis.Wadda nikka bro,Samaa, pooja gurmeet, tanya.

Ye story start o ti hai college se yahan ye sub ek saat phadte hain nd its exam time.

Raghav apna paper katam kr k idar udar dekh raha o ta hai jb usey pechey se wadda ki awaz aati hai.

Wadda: Raghav bro plz muje 5th Question ka answer bataho?

Raghav:Dude s ka...

S k aage wo kuch bol e nai pata Qk sir kv usey dekh lete hain.

Raghav to himself:Oh freak!Raghav obroi aj to tu gaya.

Raghav ki ye barbarahat pechey bete sia b sun leti hain nd he looked Raghav nd pass a smile.

Sir Kv:Raghav ye tum kya kr rahe te?

Raghav:uncle sorry i meant sir mein to kuch nai kr raha ta.

kv:ye Ambar tum se kya poch raha ta?

Raghav:wo muj se poch raha ta japan ka capital kya hai?

Kv:what? Or tm ne kya kaha?

Raghav:mein ne kaha dude aj toka hai bar bar mt tokyo.

kv:ok sit down.Wadda ye answer sun leta hai.

Wadda:thanx bro.

Raghav:you are always wellcome.

Arjun:Raghav dude agr sir ko ye bat samaj aati hai k tm ne bato baton mein usey answer bata diya tm to aj clas se bahar o te.

Raghav:dnt worry junno!Raghav jo krta hai style se karta hai.

Sia peche se ye sub sun leti hai usey b s Question ka answer pata nai ta.

Sia:Raghav.

Raghav:han pushpa

sia:muje b wo answer nai aa raha ta thank u soo much.

Raghav:mention not pushpa nd he winked.

Thts 4 nw.

Guyz f u wil like it thn i wil continue next part. Plz leave ur comments.

index

Chapter1 = pg 1

Chapter2 = pg 2

Chapter3 = pg 4

Chapter4 = pg 6

Chapter5 = pg 9

Chapter6 = pg 12


Chapter7 = pg 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Noor for dis FF 🤗

The concept sounds good and the CS is very interesting ! 😊

Wud love to read more... Plz Continue Soon ! 😳
Edited by jane_krittzz... - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nory Congrats For Your First Ever FF On SiRa.

Wow Thats A Great Start. Its Reminding Me The Elite Days Though Character Relation Is Different

I Really Liked It. Please Please Do Continue Soon.

I'm Waiting For Your Interesting Next Part.

Thanks A Lot For Opening This Lovely Series.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on ur 1st ff.. m realy glad dat il b able 2 read 1 mre ff on sira.. nw coming bck 2 d update..Awesum start noor.. elite ka yaad aa gaya.. i lovd d relations.. arjun is sia's cousin nd kv is raghav's uncle..😆 nice thinking.. plz continue soon nd plz do pm me..😊
Edited by Jerryberry - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thaaankss samaaa for wrtng itt!!!!!!!!! they r big grpp,dats gr88!!!!!!!! andd raghav ka uncle kv,ha ha ha!!!!!!!! raghav ka wo style ka answer denaa wass suprbbb!!!!!!!!!!! raghav is truly uniquee!!!!!!!! and his wnnkkk,waooo!!!!!!!!!! yaa ofcrsee plzz do cntinueee soon andd pm me dear!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u sooo much every1. I ll try 2 continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Noor!!🤗
So glad that you are writing this FF!!😃
And I am so sorry for commenting so late!!😔
It was a superb start!👍🏼
The way Raghav helped Wadda was really creative and funny!😆
Loved it!!😉
continue soon!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sakura_bb

<font color="#660099">Noor!!🤗</font>

<font color="#660099">So glad that you are writing this FF!!😃</font>

<font color="#660099">And I am so sorry for commenting so late!!😔</font>

<font color="#660099"></strong></font>

<font color="#660099">It was a superb start!👍🏼</font>

<font color="#660099">The way Raghav helped Wadda was really creative and funny!😆</font>

<font color="#660099">Loved it!!😉</font>

<font color="#660099"></font>

<font color="#660099"><strong>continue soon!😳</font>

thanx saku. I wil try 2 continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice update. waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER 2


Sab apna paper katam kr k bahar nikley and they took their cell phones from sir kv jo uno ne paper dene se phele le liye te take koi cheating na kare. Sab bahar nikal kar paper discuss karne lag gaye...

Gurmeet:ayo sami ji ap ka paper kaisa huwa? Hamara to buhut acha huwa hai.

Sama:it was good, sia tmara paper kaisa huwa?

Sia:buhut acha huwa...

Raghav or Arjun b ek dosrey se bat kr rahe te un se kuch dhoor kade te...

Raghav:Thanx God aaj last paper tha now i am free...

Arjun:yeah dude. Raghav ek week baad hamari farewell party hai na to sab force kr rahe te k tum or sia wai play karo saleem or Anarkali wala jo pechle saal tm logo ne kiya ta..

Raghav:No dude.

Arjun:plz yr man b jaho. Hum sub yai chah rahe hain...

Arjun ne apne sare gang ko bula liya or wo sub Raghav ko manane lag gaye...

sama:Rags ab s se ziyada hum tmari minat samajat nai kr sakte man jaho na Rags...

Raghav:ok ok guyz mein karon ga pushpa ko kon manahe ga?

Arjun:wo tum hum sab par chod do...

Wo sab sia ko manane chale gaye. Sia ne phele mana kiya bt pir man gai... Arjun Raghav ko batane chala gaya k sia play k liye man gai hai...

Arjun:Dude sia man gai hai...or tm mere saath ghar chal rahe o na?

Raghav:ok dude aunty k hath ka khana itne dino se nahi khaya bhook buhut lagi hai...

Arjun:oh shit muje grand pa ne kaha ta sia ko ghar tk drop kar don mein bhol gaya tm car k pas jaho mein wahin aata o usey le kr...

Raghav:oh pushpa b aye gi ok.

Arjun sia se baat karne chala jata hai...sia was talking with sally...

Arjun:sia

sia:acha huwa Arjun tum aa gaye mein tumara e wait kar rai ti...

Sia said Good bye to sally and they both went near the car where Raghav was standing...

Sia:A Bhagwan ye yahan kya kr raha hai Arjun?

Arjun:wo mere saat ghar aa raha hai...

sia:kya? Tumein pata hai Arjun wo muje kitna tang krta hai abi sare raaste mera sar khahe ga... A Bhagwan mein kahan phans gai...

Raghav sia ko dekh raha o ta hai wo bs us k face ko dekh raha o ta hai usey aj sia kuch alag si lagti hai...

Raghav to him self:ye muje aj kya o raha hai ye pushpa muje itni alag si Q lag rai hai?

Arjun ki awaz usey khayalo se bahar nikal deti hai...

Arjun:ye kahan kho gaye Raghav? Sia ki aadat adopt kr li hai kya?

Sia:Arjun!us ne gusse se kaha

Arjun:sorry sia mazaq kar raha tha...

Raghav:pushpa ka gussa to hamesha naak par rehta hai nd he touched her nose...

Sia was feeling something diffrent when Raghav touched her lekin us ne is khayal ko jatak diya...

Sia:Raghav tum se kitni bar kaha hai k muje pushpa mat kaho...

Raghav:ok pushpa..

Arjun:plz guyz ab yahan shoro mat o jana...

sia:Arjun jagra Raghav shoro karta hai mein nai...

Arjun:chalo guyz late o raha hai...

Raghav:guyz tum log chale jaho mera mood nai o raha...

Thats 4 nw guyz. Plz leave ur comments...
Edited by SamaaNoor - 13 years ago

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