Saaz SS- Humdard-Updtd~CHP4^PG11 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Harshad4ever505

loved it more than the epi...please continue

Originally posted by: docmonica

Wow!! Simply awesome! You all are so talented :-) Jee Kush Kar Diya 😉

I am back 😃 This is the one scene which i badly want so i thought why risk it with 4billi i wrote it myself as i wasnt sure if they would do something like this. Hope you enjoy reading this as much as i enjoyed writing this 😉 Your comments and feedback encourage me to write better and sooner. So please do comment and let me know how i am doing :)

CHAPTER 2

"Aarzoo nausheen khan mai tumse pyaar karta hun. Tum meri humsafar ho. "

His words echoed in his ears.

"Shayad mere lafzo ne hi tumhari kismet pe daag laga diya aarzoo" he said guiltily as he looked at his petite fragile wife who lay unconscious in his lap. They were in his car headed towards niyamat house which would now be her home forever.

"Tum meri adhuri aarzoo thi. Tumhei mangke maine tumhe apne dard ka humsafar bana diya. Is dard se mai tumhe kaise bachunga aarzoo. Kya karunga mai?" He slowly stroked her head as tears raced down his cheek to meet his jawline.

Unable to resist anymore he lifted her upto his heart and held her close giving in to his love.

"I'll not let anything happen to you aarzoo. Dard ko tumhare vajood ka hissa nahi banne dunga mai jaise wo mere vajood ka hissa ban chuka hai"

He hugged her tighter afraid of losing her to his pain and problems if he let go wondering if there would ever be a time when this pain would leave him.

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"As-salam-alaikum maulvi sahib."

"Walekum As-salam aarzoo beta. Ab kaise tabiyat hai aapki?"

"Hum ab behtar hai. Wo humne aapka shukria kehne ke liye phone kiya tha. Aapne sahir se humare kehne pe baat ki aur humare liye itna sab kuch kiya sari tayyari ki humari itni madat ki, Aapka bohot bohot shukria."

Aarzoo whispered in a hush tone into her phone being careful so that sahir who was in the washroom didn't hear her.

"Madat to upar wala karta hai beta. Hum to bas ek nek kaam mei zariya bane the bas."

"Ji maulvi sahib phirbhi aap agar zariya na bante to hum kabhi kamiyaab nahi hote. Aur bas ek choti si guzarish hai aapse. Is plan ke bare mei sahir ko pata nahi chalna chaiye"

"Aap befikar raho beta hum kisiko kuch nahi batayenge. Lekin aap apna dhyaan rakhna. Maine aapko kaha bhi tha ke asli jalte hue angaro par mat chalna."

"Maulvi sahib jab hum kisi apne ko had se zyada dard de dete haina. To us galti ko sahi karne ka ek hi raasta bachta hai ke hum khudko wahi dard de jinse wo guzre the."

The maulvi understood it was pointless arguing with her. After a long time he had seen someone so concerned and loving towards sahir. Aarzoo's love warmed his heart and made him very happy. He just couldn't say no to her when she asked for his help.

Maulvi sahib had been sahir's religious teacher since childhood. He had seen sahir grow up before his eyes. The sahir who would laugh, live and love and then seen his transformation into someone alien, a dead sahir walking around with no emotions or feelings. It frustrated maulvi sahib that no one in his family could see sahirs pain or came to his aid.

"Maybe...Just maybe this girl can become his salvation." He thought with a smile. Blessing her with success before saying khuda hafiz and ending the call.

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The phone got disconected giving aarzoo a chance to take in her surroundings. She was in his room which was now their room. She had been here countless times before but the feeling which she was getting right now to be sitting in this room as aarzoo sahir azeem choudhary was something else. She adjusted herself to take better support of his bed...correction their bed.. to avoid the pain and discomfort a bit. She smiled to herself thinking how crazy love had made her.

She dropped a message to zaki saying "Phase two begins ;)" after which she quickly put her phone away.

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It had been a task in itself making everyone understand what had happened at the dargah and answering all the guests. Sahir had silently just scooped up his bride and taken her to his room without clarifying anything to anyone on the pretense that aarzoo needed rest.

Zaki was left to do all the dirty work and console his brothers fainting sasuma..her hysterical sisters and his own crazy khandaan who had a million questions all accusing aarzoo and blaming sahir.

By the time he had convinced everyone that sahir and aarzoo loved each other and it was a mutual decision they took. And convincing his family out of hysteria and calming everyone down it was almost midnight.

Zaki resigned himself to his bed at last with a triumphant feel. Things were finally falling in place.

"All this is only for you bhai." He said smiling as he sent a flying kiss into the air.

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Sahir stepped out of the washroom in his white kurta looking like an angel bought down to earth.

As her eyes spotted him aarzoo put her foot to the ground intentionally causing herself pain to bring his attention towards her. It worked like a charm as sahir rushed to her side within a matter of seconds.

He lifted the ointment to apply to her wounded legs but was stopped mid action. She had moved her legs away covering them with her hands defensively.

"Aarzoo nausheen khan bohot manmaani karli tumne ab aur kya baki hai?" he asked frustrated with her antics.

"Its aarzoo sahir azeem choudhary mr.husband. Aur humei aapki madat ki koi zarurat nahi hai hum khud kar lenge. Aap hi se seekha hai humne kisiko apne dard ka humdard nahi banana."

Sahir sat by her bedside dumbstruck at her words as she reminded him of the incident when she had wanted to apply medicine to his wounds and he had said no. Did he do what he feared the most? First the self mutilation and now this had he turned her into another sahir azeem choudhary.?

"Aarzoo what am i going to do with you" he thought in frustration.

Aarzoo continued trying to put ointment onto her wounds but everytime she would take the ointment till the surface of her feet and would bring it back even before her fingers touched them wincing in anticipation of the pain which hadn't been caused to her yet.

Sahir finally not able to take it any longer grabbed the ointment from her hands. As he applied the ointment with a gentle touch he continued blowing softly onto her feet to minimise her pain. Every time she winced in pain his eyes filled up with new unshed tears and he made his touch even more gentle. By the time he was done his fingers were barely touching her feet fearing that he would give her more pain.

Finishing his job at hand sahir got up taking a comforter and a pillow from the bed and placed them on the pool chair beside the pool making himself comfortable and ready to sleep as aarzoo watched dumbstruck in silence.

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At 4 a.m in the morning when aarzoo suddenly awoke to a nightmare she was about to scream when her eyes fell on her newlywed husband who was sleeping beside her. All her panic and fear vanished into thin air.

He looked so peaceful and serene while sleeping. Aarzoo noted.

The second thing she noticed was that his pool chair which was to the other corner when she slept was now adjacent to the bed and his hand was in hers as if he had fallen asleep holding her hand. Aarzoo smiled at this observation wondering how much internal struggle he might have gone through to allow himself to be this close to her.

"Agar humse dur reh nahi sakte to koshish hi kyu karte hai aap sahir" she smiled softly as she stroked his hair adoring his every feature with her eyes. When she noticed tears streaming through closed eyes.

"Aarzooo" he whispered in pain.

She quickly wiped away his tears with her hands unable to see him suffer anymore.

"Hum sab kuch thik kar denge. Aapke chehre pe wo muskaan wapis le ayenge jo 7 saal pehle chin gayi thi aapse. Humara wada hai ye aur ye wada hum waise hi nibhayenge jaise sahir azeem choudhary apne wade nibhate hai. Ye wada zarur pura hoga ye mrs. sahir azeem choudhary ka wada hai" she kissed his cheek being careful not to wake him up as a lone tear escaped her eyes.

Sahirs lips unconsciously curved into a smile at this gesture of hers. Aarzoo happy that she had atleast subconsciously made him happy. She held his hand the way it was before she had woken up and went back to sleep satisfied with herself.

Originally posted by: Junoonian

So serene n peaceful... that is how this love story feels. It is progressing beautifully Ari.

Hopefully the TV version will also eventually reach this stage.

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Zaki was left to do all the dirty work and console his brothers fainting sasuma..her hysterical sisters and his own crazy khandaan who had a million questions all accusing aarzoo and blaming sahir.

🤣 Superb. Mazaa aagaya yeh padke. Love you for this Ari. Zaki is my "fav" bakra. 😉 ye to hona hi tha na 😆

Jokes apart. Like this Zaki a lot. His love for his brother..oh how I wish we get to see it at least once.

Same here... 😕 I am tired of the indifferent zaki...he needs to become more sensitive and useful. the triangle is such a buzz kill 🤢

Sahirs lips unconsciously curved into a smile at this gesture of hers. Aarzoo happy that she had atleast subconsciously made him happy. She held his hand the way it was before she had woken up and went back to sleep satisfied with herself.

Lovely. Sahir's need to take away her pain was tangible. So was her determination to heal him. Very well done. thank you so much 😃 They need to justify "humsafars" na...😉How i want something like this in the show 😭 They need to understand each others POV pronto.!! Waiting for the next chapter. I am sure its going to be very interesting. hope so 😛 A determined Arzoo..Allah knows how the hell is Sahir going to resist his wife now?? 😆 the main point is him not being able to resist 😉

Originally posted by: --Ari--

Lovely. Sahir's need to take away her pain was tangible. So was her determination to heal him. Very well done. thank you so much 😃 They need to justify "humsafars" na...😉How i want something like this in the show 😭 They need to understand each others POV pronto.!! Waiting for the next chapter. I am sure its going to be very interesting. hope so 😛 A determined Arzoo..Allah knows how the hell is Sahir going to resist his wife now?? 😆 the main point is him not being able to resist 😉

Originally posted by: Suvika.