OS: Consequences (16+) PART 3 UPATED PG 14 (NOTE ADDED) - Page 15

Originally posted by: Manpreet23

OH MY GOD 😳

it's so beautifully written, especially Sahir's POV. The want and need... nicely described.

Next part NOW!!

Thank you. Sahir is the more experienced of the two-- so passion comes easily in his voice. I guess we need to give Arzoo some time.😉

As to the next part, I'll have to find the right combination of time, internet connection and laptop. Am traveling these two weeks.😆

Originally posted by: Suvika.

wow!! Read all three parts in one go. 👍🏼

Talk about passion!! My laptop had been in grave danger of catching fire. 😆

Seriously wonderful play of words.

Thanks Suvika, this is high praise, coming from you. Thank you for the kind words.

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.

Beautifully written! You should definitely pen some more OS's.

Nisha

Thanks, Nisha, will give it a shot as soon as I can😛

Haaye...main marr gayi...kya likthi hai yeh ladki...words fail me...

Originally posted by: Neemsundari

Thanks Suvika, this is high praise, coming from you. Thank you for the kind words.

neem...ye dil maange one more from sahir's pov...during and after that dance

Originally posted by: Neemsundari

Vandyji, I love you too, dammit.🤣

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Haaye...main marr gayi...kya likthi hai yeh ladki...words fail me...

I want more fiction from you NeemSundari⭐️

Thank you, for the dil-se praise. Hum writerbaaz toh the hi, ab lag raha hai diva-baaz ban jayenge! 😆

You shall have more-- I wish I had my laptop with me. Typing pages on the phone won't work, would it now ?😛

Originally posted by: Suvika.

you know me??😲 And here I was thinking as to how I should go about introducing myself. 😳

Yep, of course. I lurk on most forum threads on my phone, and have read about you, and your books!😉

Originally posted by: Neemsundari

Yep, of course. I lurk on most forum threads on my phone, and have read about you, and your books!😉