Chor Police-Shikham(os) - Page 2

Originally posted by: -Asmi-

naa i do ve a time but vry little,.kal i ve a xm,...xm k baad aake sab se pehele i ll read dis OS!

Take ur time asmi bas padhna zaroor dats wat i want

padhai karo 12th mein TOP karna hai tumhe😆

Originally posted by: -Asmi-

top pata nahi bt pass karna hein,..😛

Paas toh hojaogi tum asmi smarty

i know dat

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Lovely OS...quite different 😆...not like the ones that we usually get to read..It was fun !!😃

Liked it 😃 ..You should write more often..would love to read them.😃

Hey namratha🤗

thnk u sooo much for likin it

Yeah i know it was kind of mad 😆

but m glad u liked rather dan hatin it 😳

Yeah wil surely Write infact m writer only

thnx once again

Bipin

Originally posted by: TimelessBeauty

So very true. It is from the factory of madness. I can understand why, because parts of it is from a first person point of view. But I liked it. Some dialogues here and there were quite funny.

I'm glad this forum got it's first OS. Do write more. Would be happy to read them. 😉 😊

Hey ruby

thx for likin d os 😃

yeah its frm d factory of madness my mad brain writes aythin😆

Yeah u understood it correctly its a narrative os d person ws narrating it.

Yeah iam a filmy b dats y used some one liners😉

Even m glad i gor commentors like u

thnk u once again for likin d os

wil surely post some more 😃

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Areh...It was a nice OS..why would I hate it 😆...It was kinda cute!!

Ohh..wow...will be waiting for the next OS..

So u r a writer ,that's great...would love to read your other one-shots...would you mind providing me the link of your other one shots??

Thnx yaar

jas din liked d os d way its written so i thot u guys will also not like d os😳

for u guys i will surely post another os of mine soon dis tym it wont b mad it wil b madness along wd luv 😆

Yeah i wil PM u d links of all my os's

Thnk u so much u really great 😃

u boosted my confidence