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Posted: 10 years ago
haila aaj itne dino ke baad yahan pe aai mai...my inshi dont know kab mai complete karungi ye story
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nutan7

same here

I like that punch wala statement too
soory dear lete in reading. not able to operate IF from phone. aaj to comment on sumit article pc par net khola .

punch wala kaunsa statement di...yup atlast SV ka aaya article
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Posted: 9 years ago
hola guys...
So sorry that i was away from this forum...but from now on will try to update regularly though i know that this forum has become a veerana n mostly all the forum members r gayab from this place...but i just hope u will take out ur precious tym n read my updates n cmnt on dat too..love u all
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CHAPTER-27

He keep staring at the sky with a satisfied smile on his face with his arms wrapped around someone whom he love so much. Suddenly he hears someone calling his name aloud. He turns and found Zara standing there with her eyes on him and an irritated expressions on her face. He then notice at his arms which were wrapped around Indira but finds no one.
Ricky tries to figure out what's happening while Zara comes near him and taps on his shoulder and in her drunken voice says," mai itni der se appko awaaj laga rahi hoon aap kahan khoye hue ho".

Ricky looking at her confusingly asks," aap...aap yahan" and then again look at his arms and then at her. He then realize that whatever he was just now feeling was a dream and also remembers that he himself made Zara to sleep.
Ricky retreiving himself asks her," aap to so gai thi na to phir yahan kaise". Zara replies," mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi, aur mujhe aapse kuch baat bhi karni hai".
Ricky tries to tell her that it is too late now so they should go and sleep and will talk the next day but Zara doesn't listen to him, so finally he agrees to her.
As she is still not out of her hangover so she asks him in a childlike way," pehle mujhe dance karna hai aapke saath".

Ricky being confused at her such demand but with a sweet smile on his face agrees and forwards his hand. Zara at first glares at him with a bubbly smile and then places her hand in his. Ricky pulls her near her holding her waist. Both gets closer looking in eachother eyes intensely with their breath stops for a moment. As the night is passing and the temperature outside is dipping with the cool breeze flowing, the intensity between these two souls soaring the temperature inside. The breeze of air make her hair fall on her face. He with a soft touch of his fingers on her face slightly strikes the strand of hair behind her ear bringing the chills run through her spine. She then wrap her arms around his neck and both dance matching their steps with eachother still looking in eachother eyes.

She then puts her question in to him," Ricky do you love me?"
His eyes get wide open hearing this while she asks another question," Ricky kya sab kuch aise hi nahi reh sakta jaisa ab hai. Aap mai aur Ahana hum sab yunhi ek saath nahi reh sakte. Mai aapse aur Ahana se kabhi bhi dur nahi jaana chahti Ricky"
As she say these words she gets emotional while Ricky stares at her all puzzled.

She asks him," Ricky kya aap aisa nahi chahte ki mai, aap aur Ahana hum sab ek saath rahe". Ricky still keep on staring at her looking deeply into her eyes feeling the emotional turmoil which she is going through now and somewhere in his heart a hope is rising that no matter what Zara is feeling the attachment with them which is making him happy and emotional too from inside while she continues," mai jaanti hoon ki aisa hona mumkin nahi hai. Mai sirf yahan aapki ek business partner hoon aur ye sab jo bhi ho raha hai wo sirf Ahana ke liye ho raha hai lekin Ricky pata nahi phir bhi ye sab jaante hue bhi mai puri zindagi aapke saath, Ahana ke saath bitana chahti hoon".

Ricky holding her one hand swirls her around and then again both get back into eachothers arms with her hands on his chests and her eyes latched into his. As his hot breath falling on her face with the whole world comes to a stop.

She asks him, "kya aisa nahi ho sakta Ricky ki mujhe yahan se jana hi na pade. Kya hum sab aise saath nahi reh sakte Ricky. Please kuch aisa kijiye na ki mai aap sabko chhodke na ja saku.. please mujhe rok lijiye Ricky" he looks at her being surprised, "mai jaanti hoon ki mera aapse koi rishta nahi hai lekin phir bhi kyun mai aapse dur nahi jana chahti".

She cups his face with her palm and deeply looking in his eyes , "mai jab bhi aapki in aankhon mein dekhti hoon to aisa lagta hai jaise kuch hai jo mujhe har pal aapke kareeb le aata hai. Mai kaun hoon kuch yaad nahi hai mujhe, lekin pata nahi kyun aapse milne ke baad aisa laga jaise meri pehechaan mil gai ho. Aapke dil mein jo pyar hai aapki biwi ke liye..kahin na kahin aisa lagta hai jaise ki wo mere liye hai. Ahana ko jab bhi dekhti hoon to lagta hai jaise wo mera hi ansh hai. Kyun Ricky ye sab kyun mehesoos hota hai mujhe, mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai. Mai jab bhi yahan se jane ke baare mein sochti hoon to aisa lagta hai jaise kuch chhutt raha hai mujhse aur jab aapko dekhti hoon to lagta hai ki aap mujhse kuch chhipa rahe hain".

As she was saying all this a tear rolled down her left eye while Ricky stands still not uttering a single word. They both keep standing there. She looks on at him for the answers she wants from him and he looks at her with dillema thinking what answer should he give her. She looking at him with teary eyes hold his arms and ask him to tell what he is hiding but he keeps himself strong and chooses to be quiet. She cries hard beating his chest," please Ricky kuch to boliye. In 5 saalo mein maine aajtak kabhi bhi aisa apnapan kisi aur ke liye mehesoos nahi kiya jaisa aapke liye kiya... yahantak ki apne aapi-jiju ke liye bhi nahi. To kuch to hai na jo mujhe yahan khinchke laya..bataiye na Ricky aisa kya hai jo chhut raha h mujhse please Ricky kuch to boliye" and she crying hard sits in his feet.

Seeing her like that he no longer hold his emotions and breaks down. His eyes fill with tears. He bends and holding her arms makes her stand. He wipes her tears while she notice his tears rolled down his cheeks and wipes them pouting her lips feeling sad for him. He stops her and with his hand on hers, cups his face and with a painful voice says," aaj shayad aapko pata nahi hai ki mujhe kitni khushi ho rahi hai..kitna intezaar kiya hai maine ye sunne ke liye. ye sab jo bhi aap mehesoos kar rahi hain wo sirf isiliye hai kyonki aap Zara nahi Indira hain...Mrs. Indira Rishi Kumar hai, meri wife hain". She looks at him with disbelief while he has a soft smile with his eyes getting moist.
He continues," Meri aankhon mein jo pyar hai jo dard hai wo aapke liye hain. Ahana aur koi nahi aaphi ki beti hai, humari beti hai. Aur mai...mai Rishi hoon, wohi Rishi jise aap apne sapno mein itne saalo se dekhti aa rahi hai. Dekhiye na aapki yaadash chali gai lekin apne dimaag se aap Rishi ki yaadon ko nahi mita saki. Ye humara pyar hi to hai jisne hume phirse mila dia".
She removes her hand from his grip and continues to stare him with shock and utters," Rishi...aap Rishi hain par aap to Ricky hain na aur mai Zara. Aap jhhut bol rahe hain na".
Ricky couldn't decide what to say while she continues getting away from him," Agar mai Indira hoti to mere aapi-jiju mujhe Zara samajhke apne saath na rakhte aur wo mujhe sach batate".
Ricky tries to explain her," wo isiliye kyonki wo khud nahi jaante ye sach. Zara aur Indira ki shakal hoo-b-hoo ek jaisi hai".
She tell him that whatever he is saying can't be true.

[From the past 5 years she was living the life of Zara and now suddenly she is told by Ricky about her true identity of being Indira and not Zara which she couldn't hold anymore.]

She puts her hand on her head as his words echo in her ears. Ricky holds her, her head starts spinning and she faints. Ricky tries to wake her up and gets worried cursing himself for whatever just happened.
Ricky weeps looking at her condition and lifting her in his arms make her lie on the bed and covering her with the blanket sits beside her. His eyes dim with tears as he rubs her forehead and keep on staring her for long thinking in his mind "would she remember about all this, would she accept me and Ahana, would she ever get her memory back? Thinking about all these he dozed off soon sitting there.

NXT CHAPTER-28...PG-121
Edited by designersaini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
seemu 🤗 after long time 🤗
nice update dear 👏

ya all r gayab from forum 🤔
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Posted: 9 years ago
nyc update... waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cute_Divu

seemu 🤗 after long time 🤗

nice update dear 👏

ya all r gayab from forum 🤔

divya🤗🤗
kaisi h..yup after long time on this forum
thanks...readers bhaag gae saare...hope so iss baar i just complete it soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ketaki19

nyc update... waiting for next

thanks dhum ketu...isme ahana nahi h
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER-28

NEXT DAY IN DIWAN MANSION

She gets up with her heavyhead and cries in pain," uff ye sardard kyun ho raha hai mujhe". At then Ricky in his brown capries and black vest with his hair casually styled up in spikes, enters the room with a glass of lemon water, glaring at her with anger, knocks at the door and replies ," hangover ka asar hai ye sab".

Zara hearing his voice turns her head in his direction and keep on looking at his well toned body till he comes and stand beside her forgetting that he is in angry mood. He forwards the glass to her to which she asks in a strange manner," ye kya hai".

He replies," neembu-pani...kal jo itna drink kiya tha uska hangover bhi to khatam karna hai. Ye lijiye pijiye ise". Zara takes the glass from him making a face, drinks silently while still staring at him.
After completing with her drink she asks him innocently," aap gussa hai kya mujhse".
Ricky replies with a little bit calming down himself ,"aap bataiye ki mujhe gussa nahi hona chahiye. Kal kya kiya hai aapne kuch pata bhi hai aapko". Zara trying to remember about the last night and asks him," kya kia tha kal maine..haan bas thoda sa drink hi to kia tha".
Ricky glares at her and replies," thoda sa...wo sab thoda sa tha" and gets to his wardrobe to take out his clothes for office.

Zara making a crybaby face says," achcha ab thik hai na kar liya tha kal drink...aage se nahi karungi ab...waise bhi aapne bhi to kiya hoga drink".
Ricky denies that he has long ago left his habit of drinking and will never ever drink in his life.
At this Zara gets impress and replies in trying to save herself further from his scolding," To thik hai na mera bhi first time tha ye, aaj ke baad mai bhi kabhi drink nahi karungi". Ricky sheepishly looking at her ," first time? Isse pehle bhi jab aapne drink kia tha to kya-kya nahi kiya tha aur tab bhi maine aapko samjhaya tha".
Zara gets a little confused and asks," pehle kab kia tha maine" to which Ricky gets a little conscious and asks her," kal jo bhi hua aapko kuch yaad nahi".

Hearing whatever he is saying she gets a little suspicious thinking what might have happened the last night and then look around and then at herself. Looking at herself she get the shock of her life and with a trembling voice asks him," kal kya hua tha humare beech".
He thinks that she is asking about their last night conversation but as he turns to speak further, he found her standing behind his back. He for a moment get scared. She with fiery glare asks him," mere kapde kisne change kiye...kahin aapne to".

Before she could completes her sentence he jumps in and assures her that whatever she is thinking is not true but infact she herself changed her dress. She close her eyes and take a sigh of relief.
She then look at him minutely to which Ricky feels a little awkward and shy too and then asks her," aise kya dekh rahi hain aap, abhi kuch baaki hai kal ke baad" and steps back.

She pointing at his lips asks him about the mark on his lips. He gets confused and goes to the mirror and look through it while she asks him with a confusing sound," aur ye kal ke baad ka kya matlab hai".
He notice the bite mark on his lips which Zara gave him and turning towards her asks if she really doesn't know about the last night which she denies. He gets sad from inside not showing it to her and then telling her that nothing happened last night only she drank too much and threw so much tantrums all around and it was really difficult for him to control her but still managed to make her sleep. Saying all this he leaves the room. She thinks in her mind," kya maine itna drink kar liya tha ki Ricky mujhe sambhal hi nahi paye... awww...bichare Ricky. Lekin mujhe aisa kyun laga ki Ricky kuch chhipa rahe hain mujhse. Aur wo mark Ricky ke lips par, kahin us ladki ne to Ricky ko kiss nahi kia". Thinking all this her eyes get wide open and she get a bit angry and jealous too at the same time of that girl not knowing why is she behaving like that.
Everyone gathers at the dining table for breakfast.

Ricky and Ahana as usual like any other day having their milk competition on who will drink the milk first. Both starts sipping their milk. Ricky slows down to make her daughter win while Ahana slows down to make her dad win this time. Seeing her dad getting so slow, she with an irritating voice says," papa jaldi jaldi finish karo na" and this time Ricky finishes first as Ahana let her dad win. But Ricky can't get away with his tactics so he exchanged her milk glass with his and says," aree wah meri cutipie to bohot fast ho gai hai aaj bhi papa ko hara dia" and pecks on her cheeks. But Ahana gets angry because she knows the truth and scolds her dad," Papa aapne cheating ki hai...aap jeet gae the lekin aapne mera glass apne se change kia" and they both start their cute little fight which Smmi-A.D. are enjoying. Zara too comes and join them for the breakfast but hearing the conversation between the father-daughter she tells Ahana," beta aapke papa ko aise glasses exchange karne ki bohot purani aadat hai" and she tells her the whole incident when Rishi exchange the shots with water while betting with Manoj Chaddha ( chandani chowk ka fountain wala scene when Rishi and Manoj betted on who will drink more shots. But Rishi exchanged his drink with water and served Manoj shots and thus Rishi won the bet).
Ricky gets dumbstruk and stands up in surprise. Simmi-A.D. as well as Zara turns their heads to him being confused. Zara asks him,"kya hua aap aise kyun khade ho gae".
He twisting his brows ask her," kaun Manoj aur ye Rishi kaun hai".
Ahana opens her mouth to speak up that his father is only Rishi but before she could complete Simmi take her inside to get her ready for school.
Ricky asks her but she herself gets confused that how this incident came to her mind. Ricky lowers his head in despair. A.D. place his hand on his shoulder telling him not to lose hope and be strong. They all have their breakfast silently.

NXT CHAP-29...PG-124
Edited by designersaini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG...am so happy that u r back ...feels amazing...

awww..lovely update dear...awesme..pls update soon...

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