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Chapter 7

Rishi Kumar Family jane ke bad

Indira apne papa ke taraf bahot gusse se dekhti hain. Inder Sharma samaj jate hain. Wo apni najre churane lagte hain.

Indira : Kya me jan sakti hu ki aapne aise ladke ko kyun bulaya mujhe dekhne ko?

Inder : Wo... Wo... Babli mujhe sach me nahi malum tha ki ye Rishi Kumar aisa hoga. Jab maine photo dekha tha usme to wo bahot handsome dikh raha tha.

Indira : Dad... What is this??? Me soch bhi nahi pa rahi hu ki aapne aise sample ko ...

Inder shanti se khada rehta hain. Indira apne gusse ko control karti hain.
Wo Inder ke pass aati hain.

Indira : Dad bat wo nahi hain ki ladka dikhne me kaisa tha. Shadi ke bad me uska appearance jarur badal deti. Lekin uski soch se mujhe jyada gussa aaya.

Inder : Matlab?

Indira : Dad jab maine usko career ke bare me sawal puchhe the na tab wo bola ki aap to ghar me hi baithnewali ho to aapko kya karna hain?
Ye bat sunkar hi mujhe bahot gussa aaya lekin me hi janti hu ki maine kaise control kiya, Uske bolne ka style , attitude bahot hi dominating tha.

Inder : Achha hua tumne usko sabak sikhaya. Pata hain tera yahi Hitlerwala attitude mujhe pasand hain. Mujhe naz hain tumpe beta.

At Dm

Sanjay ke jane ke bad thori der me Rishi ke pass Ramu aajata hain. Wo bahot ghabra hua lagta hain.

Rishi : Kya hua Kaka? Aap itne dare hue kyun ho?

Ramu : Bhaiyaji jaldi neeche chaliye. Dadiji ko kuch hua hain.

Rishi : (Ghabrakar) K...Kya hua dadi ko? Doctor ko call kiya kya?

Ramu : Aap jaldi niche chaliye na Bhaiya ji.

Rishi aur Ramu jaldi se neeche aate hain.

Dadi sofe pe leti rehti hain. Puri Df unke pass hoti hain.

Rishi : Dadi kya hua aapko? Aap aise kyun leti hui ho?

Dadi :(she starts groaning) Rishi beta lagta hain ab mujhe uparwala bula raha hain. Mere pass ab jyada samay nahi hain. Tumhare dadaji ab mujhe bula rahe hain. Me unke pass jaldi jane wali hun.

Rishi : (Dadi ke pass aata hain) Dadi ye kaisi bate kar rahi ho aap?
Rishi Shekhar ke pass aata hain. Dad aapne Doctor ko bulaya kya?

Shekhar : Hum log call karnehi wale the lekin ma ne mana kiya.

Rishi : Dad aap aise kaise kar sakte ho? Dadi ne mana kiya to aapne dr ko bulayahi nahi? Me abhi Dr. Uncle ko call karta hun. Wo turant dr ko call karta hain.

Dr. Tripathi jaldhi aajate hain. Wi dadi ko check up karte hain. Aur dadi se bat karte hain. Dr. Tripathi Shekhar ke bahot purane friend hain.

Dr. : Kya hua auntyji? Aapne kisi bat ka tension liya hain kya?

Dadi : Tension to ek hi bat ka he beta ki me ab apne chote pote ki biwi ko dekhna chahti hu. Lekin ye to man hi nahi raha hain.

Dr. : To aap issi bat ka tension kyun le rahe ho? Aap ki aisi halat dekh kar Rishi turanr man jayega? Kyun Rishi?
Dr. Rishi ki taraf dekhte hain.

Rishi 2 min ke liye chup ho jata hain. fir Ji.. ji hann me dadi ke liye kuch bhi karunga lekin aap inko theek kardo uncle.

Jab Rishi shadi ke liye taiyar ho ta hain tab sab relax hote hain. Dadi turant uthkar khadi hoti hain.

Dadi : Pakka tu shadi ke liye taiyar hain na? Promise???
Rishi iss bat pe shock ho jata hain. aur wo shock me hi haa bol deta hain.

Rishi : Dadi... Ye kya aap to ekdam theek hain. Phir abhi jo ye sab ... Achha achha ye sab aap natak kar rahi thi Dadi??? Aapne aisa kyun kiya???

Dadi : To aur kya karti me? Jab maine Simmi se tumhare shadi ke bare me pucha to usne mujhe sab bata diya ki tu shadi nahi karna chahta aur kaise tune puri 20 ladkiyonko reject kiya hain. Phir mujhe ye idea aaya aur maine usse turant aajmaya bhi. Aur natija tumne khud shadi ke liye taiyar hogaye.

Rishi : (Dadi ko gale lagata hain) Dadi aap bhi na... Bahot jugadu ho.

Dadi : Are jugadu pote ki dadi hu bhai to jugaduhi hogi na. Aur bhul mat tumhe ye jugadupan mujhse hi mila hain.

Rishi : Lekin Dr. Uncle???

Sameer : (Wo apna hath Rishi ke kandhe pe rakta hain) Are mere pyarese Lil brother, Tumhe kya laga Dr. Uncle yaha sach me check up karne aaye hain. Are ye bhi to humare planka hi ek hissa tha.

Rishi : Matlab bhai aap sab log iss plan me the? This is not fair yar...(Making a face)

Simmi : Chal ab nautanki band kar. Aur ye bata ki tu shadi kyun nahi karna chahta?

Rishi : Maa ye shadi bahot badi responsibility hoti hain. Pehle pehle achhi lagti hain lekin bad me pachtana bhi to padta hain. Aur mujhe US me bhi to job ke liye jana hain fir???

Priya : Rishi aisa kaise bol sakta hain tu? Mana shadi ek bahot badi responsibility hain lekin humesha wo musibat hi nahi ban sakti na? Aur rahi bat US ki to tu teri biwi ko kya US nahi le ja sakta kya?

Rishi : Bat wo nahi hain bhabhi. Par...

Dadi : Bas ab bahot ho gaya. Rishi mujhe nahi malum kuch tum kal sham ko apne ma aur Dad ke sath ladki ko dekhne jane wala hain.

Rishi : Dadi kal?? Kal to me office join kar raha hun na phir kal hi kaise??

Dadi : To achha hain na kal hi tu ye bhi kam kar lena.

Rishi Dadi ke samne kuch bol nahi pata hain aur wo waha se apne kamre me jata hain.

Shekhar : Maa ab humne usko to ldki dekhne ko to manva liya lekin kya wo iss ladki ko haa kahega ya fir firse wahi reject karna??

Dadi : Shekhar tum dekhna mujhe ye bahot jor se feeling ho rahi hain ki ye jo ladki hain jo tum log dekhne jane wale ho uski aur Rishi ki jarur jamegi. Waise nam kya bataya tune Uska?

Shekhar : Ms. Indira Sharma
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Iam thinking ke agar yaha bhi Rishi ka naam suna to Indira pata nehi kya bakhera khara karegi
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very nice update...waiting for wats gonna happen next 😃
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Nice update dear. Waiting for next update.
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nice update ketki...lkn isbaar pm kyu nahi kiya...vry bad
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Chapter 8

AT SN
Indira kuch der me shant ho jati hain. Radhika ghar jane ke liye nikalti hain lekin Indira usko rukne ko bolti hain lekin Radhika politly use reject karti hain. Inder Indira ko Radhika ko auto tak chodne ko bolta hain. Indira Radhika ke sath jati hain.

Tabhi waha pe Mr. Gupta aate hain. Inder unka welcome karta hain.

Inder : Are Guptaji aap? Achanak se yaha kaise?

Gupta : Are Sharma ji shayad aap bhul gaye ho ki aapne Indira ke liye rishta dundhne ke liye bola tha mujhe.

Inder : Oh I m so sorry Guptaji. Me to sach me bhul gaya tha.

Gupta : Kya Sharmaji aap bhi na? Aisi important bat koi bhulta hain bhala? Khair chodiye wo sab. Aaj me usike silsile me aapse bat karne aaya hu. Wo actually Indira ke liye ek bahot achha rishta le aaya hun.

Inder : Achha? Kaun hain wo?

Gupta : Are bahot bade log hain wo.

Inder : Achha. Nam to batayi ye unka.

Gupta : Aapne Diwan Builders ka nam to suna hoga na. Uske jo chairman hain na Mr. Shekhar Diwan unka chota Beta usika Rishta me Indira ke liye le aaya hun.

Inder : Kya Diwan Builders?? Lekin wo to bahot bade log hain na.

Gupta : Are bade logonko kya achhi bahu nahi chahiye kya? Aur humari Indira bhi to bahot achhi hain. Aur maine ladke ko bhi bachpan se dekha hain. Mujhe to lagta hain ki Indira aur uska rishta jarur hoga. Actually maine unse issi bare me bat bhi kar li hain. Unhone turant haa kar di hain. Aur Infact wo kal hi aanewale hain Indira ko dekhne ke liye.

Inder : (Jor se chillata hain) Kya ???? Kal???

Gupta : Kya hua Sharmaji? Aap itne pareshan kyun hogaye?

Inder : Kuch nahi. Waise Ladke ka nam kya bataya aapne?

Gupta : Abhi tak to nahi bataya lekin Ladke ka nam Rishi Diwan hain.

Inder : (Rishi nam sunte hi aur shock ho jata hain). Rishi???

Gupta : Haan. Lekin hua kya hain Sharmaji? Aap aise kyun react kar rahe ho?

Inder : Gupta ko sari bat bata deta hain. Wo Gupta se request karta hain. Please Gupta ji aap kaise bhi karke un logon ko parso aane ke liye boliye na taki hum Indira ko shanti se bata sake. Waise bhi jaha tak me apni beti ko janta hu uss Rishi Kumar ko milne ke bad wo kisi aur Rishi ko kya uski parchai ko bhi samne khada nahi dekhegi.

Gupta : Yeh bahot namumkin hain Sharmaji. Kyunki Rishi ka bhi shadi ke bare me attitude kuch aisahi hain. Wo bhi shadi jaise cheezo pe bharvasa nahi karta hain. Lekin uske family walone bahot mushkil se usko razi kiya hain ladki ko dekhne ke liye. Phir bhi me ek bar try karke dekhta hun.

Gupta ji turant Shekhar Diwan ko call karte hain aur Ladki ko dekhne ka programme postpone karne ko bolte hain. Shekhar Gupata ko sari bate batata hain aur Rishi ko razi karne ke liya kya kya karna pada wo bhi batata hain.

Gupta ji Inder ko sari bate bata deta hain aur phone usse deta hain. Inder Shekhar se bat karta hain. Aur bat hone ke bat dono agle din ki hi meeting confirm karte hain.

Gupta : Aap Indira ko bata denge na?

Inder : Me to try karunga hi lekin mere bete ko bhi bolunga. Aur wo turant Vidhit ko call karta hain. Wo Vidhit ko sari bate bata deta hain.

Vidhit Rishi ka nam sunte hi khush ho jata hain. Lekin wo Inder ko batata nahi hain ki Rishi uska Room mate tha US me. Wo Inder ko Indira se bat karne ka promise karta hain.

At DM

Simmi & Shekhar's Room

Simmi bahot udas hoti hain. Wo balcony me aake khadi rehti hain aur upar asman me dekhti hain. Tabhi waha pe Shekhar aata hain.

Shekhar : Kya hua Simmi? Tum bahot upset lag rahi ho? Aaj to bahot khushi ka din hain na. Aaj to Rishi ne shadi ke liye bhi haa kardi hain. Aur kalse to wo office me bhi aanewala hain. To kya bat hain?

Simmi : Rishi ki shadi hone ke bad hume usse sab sach batana hoga na?

Shekhar turant Simmi ki bat samaj jata hain. Haan Simmi batana to padega hi na. Lekin tum chinta mat karo kuch bura nahi hoga.

Simmi : Aap kehate ho waisehi hona chahiye. Lekin Rishi ka Nature dekh kar bahot dar lagta hain. Agar usse sachhai pata chali to wo humse kaise react karega malum nahi.

Tabhi waha pe Deepak Deepika aate hain.

Deepak : Dadaji Dadiji kya hum andar aaye?

Simmi : Are mere bachho aao na. Ye bhi koi puchne ki bat hain kya?

Deepika : Dadi aap dono ko niche dinner ke liye bulane aaye the.

Shekhar : Haan bachho chalo. Aaj dadaji jam kar khana khanewale hain. Aaj unko koi restrictions nahi denewale hain.

Simmi : Aisi koi bat nahi hain samjhe na aap. Aapko meetha thoda hi milnewala hain. Samjhe na aap?

Shekhar : Jaise aapki ichha. Aur waise bhi itne salose aapki hi to chalti aayi hain to aaj kya alag hain jo meri chalegi.

Aur sab neeche jata hain.

AT SN

Indira apne laptop pe kam karti hain.
Inder indira se bat karne ki koshish karta hain tabhi ghar ka phone bajta hain.
Indira : Rukiye papa, Me dekhti hun. Wo phone uthati hain. Phone Vidhit ka hota hain.

Vidhit : Hello sister. Kaisi hain tu?

Indira : Me thik hu bhai. Aap kaise ho?

Vidhit : Me mast hu. Thori der pehle papane phone kiya tha tab tu kahi bahar gayi thi. Isiliye maine socha ki tujhse bat karlu.

Indira : Haa papa bole the mujhse. Kya bat hain bhai? Anything serious?

Vidhit : Nahi re. Kuch % serious hain aur % nahi.

Indira : Matlab?

Vidhit : Wo chod pehle ye bata ki tu kaisi hain? Mere honewale jiju kaise hain?

Indira : Kya?? Honewale Jiju?? Ye aap kya bol rahe ho bhai?

Vidhit : Are aaj tuze dekhne ke liye ladkewale aanewale the na?

Indira : Oh to bat aapko bhi pata thi.(wo Inder ki taraf dekhti hain) Aur wo sab bata deti hain.

Vidhit : Khudko hasne se control nahi kar pata.

Indira : Aap has rahe ho bhai?? Aur pata hain aaj ka din hi kharab hain mere liye.

Vidhit : Kyun aur kya hua aaj?

Indira Indira aur Rishi ke jhagde ki bat bata deti hain. Aur wo dekhti hain ki Inder bhi apne muh pe hath rakh kar has raha tha.

Vidhit : Oh god Indira sach me aaj kadin tere liye thik nahi tha. Waise aaj bhi mere sath kuch ajeebsa hua.

Indira : Kya??

Vidhit : Are wo idhar mere sath na ek aur Vidhit Sharma nam ka aadmi abhi abhi join hua hain. Uski galti se bade sir ke sath jhagra hua. Lekin sir ne mujhe hi samaj kar data.

Indira : Aise kaise kar sakte hain aap ke sir? Datne se pehle thori to puchtach karni chahiye thi na unhone. Kya sare ek nam ke aadmi ek jaise hi thori hote hain?

Vidhit : Sahi kaha. Maine bhi unko yahi bola.

Indira : Fir. Ek nam kitne kogonka hota hain. Aapke sir ko ye bat sochni chahiye thi.

Vidhit : Agar Indira tere samne agar phirse koi Rishi aaya to tu kya karegi??

Indira : (Rishi ka nam sunte hi hyper ho jati hain.) Agar aisa koi ladka mere samne aaya na to me to usko...

Vidhit : Are kyun? Abhi to tumne kaha na ki ek nam ke log ek jaise thori hote hain. Kyun? Aisehi na?

Indira : Haa... Wo... to... hain. Lekin aap kyun puch rahe ho?

Vidhit : Wo kya hain na behena... uff.. wo kal tumhe dekhne ke liye ek ladka aane wala hain.

Indira : Kya??? Kal... ladka... phirse...???

Vidhit : Haan.

Indira : Ek minute.. Aapne phone isiliye to nahi kiya... Aur aapko ye sab karne ke liye kahi...aur wo Inder ke taraf dekhti hain.

Inder turant muh pher leta hain.

Inder : Nam kya hain uss ladke ka?

Lekin tabhi phone disconnect ho jata hain.

Indira phone try karti hain lekin phone nahi lagta. Tabhi vidhit ka mail aata hain Indira ke laptop pe.

Indira Inder ke taraf jati hain. Aur ladke ka nam puchti hain. Inder Rishi ka nam bata deta hain.

Indira : Rishi Diwan... Matlab kal phir ek aur Rishi se mulakat hogi.. Kyun??

Inder : Haa. Lekin maine abhi photo dekha hain aur ladke ke bare me aur family ke bare me bhi sab jankari li hain.

Indira : Thik hain dad. Lekin ab ye aakhri ladka hoga jisse me milne wali hu,

Inder : Pakka. (Wo man me hi bat karta hain.) Dekhna iss ladke ke sath tera rishta jarur teh hoga.

Aur wo dono sone jate hain.

At 6 pm

At DM
Rishi aur Shekhar office se aa jate hain. Lekin Sameer office me hi rukta hain.
Dadi : Kaisa raha aaj ka din Rishi?

Rishi : Mast tha dadi. Aur wo apna experience batata hain.
Dadi : Good. Matlab ek kam achha hua. Ab chalo jaldi taiyar ho ja. Yad hai na aaj ;adki ko dekhne ke liye jana hain.

Rishi : Haan... yad hain...

Thori der me Rishi taiyar hokar neeche aata hain. Shekhar , Simmi , Rishi Chandani Chowk ki taraf jane ke liye nikalte hain.
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