INSHI and SaRa

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Hey all i wrote this OS on INSHI and SaRa for Sur birthday...

It is sad that the thread got closed 😭... Radha and Sur might have felt very bad more than us...

So on my friends request I am posting the INSHI OS and SaRa OS in this thread...

Hope you people donot mind for posting it double time...😳

Edited by preethimadhavg - 13 years ago

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INSHI version

Indira is getting into the local train; remember how Rishi forgot to wish on her birthday.
Indira thinks 'can you believe Rishi has forgotten my birthday. When he came as tenant atleast he wished me birthday but today he totally forgot about the day, shaadi hogi tho birthday be boolgai, javoo mein baat nahin karthi vusaa aaj'

Indira never cared about her happiness and birthday is just a day for her, nothing special. But Rishi is the first person to wish on her birthday after Inder and Vidith. Indira stopped celebrating or you can say forget about her birthday when her father left the house. She still remembers how Rishi the stranger dared to wish her. It touched a core in her heart but she masked it very well on that day, but now she donot need to mask her feelings from any one because Rishi ne vussa kulkar jeena sekhaya hain. Rutna, manana, pyaar karna Rishi ne vussa sekhaya hain. So she is angry on him today, she decided not to talk with him and to throw him tonight from their bedroom to take revenge of not wishing her.

Indira reached Sharma Nivas, went to their room to freshen-up. Came out in her night suit rubbing her hair thinking 'where is Rishi? I did not see him, may be went out with Radhe for some case. Lawyer jyo hain' suddenly Indira hears a loud sound makes her jumps under her skin, throws the towel on the chair and runs towards the kitchen from where the sound is coming. Indira cannot believe what she is witnessing. Kitchen is a MESS. The flour, sugar is drooling on the floor. Cleaning vessels are kept like a heap. The stove is looking like someone has cooked food for 100 people. Then her eyes fell on two people standing at a corner like they are going to be executed soon with a fear in their eyes and fake smile on their faces which is clearly showing how intimated they are to see Indira standing there in her Hitler style glaring at them.

Rishi and Ishaan, standing with a fake smile but inside they are panicking to see Indira infront of them. They checked the mess they created in the kitchen from corner of their eyes.
Rishi "beta aaj tho tum hara band bajayege Indira ka hothooo. Kitchen ka kya haal bana diya hain tum nee" Indira "what is happening here" in her hitler andaaj shouted on them.
Ishaan "buvvaa oh oh hum-"
Indira's eyes travels from Ishaan to Rishi as if waiting for the answer. Rishi slowly turns and takes some bowl in his hand says "Happy Birthday Indira, we are preparing gulabjam to surprise you on your birthday and so this Mess"

Indira stands there with an open mouth, no words came out. Till now no one cared to do something for her, Rishi always made her special with his needs. The gulabjams looking out of shape but she can see the love and care in them. She slowly enter the kitchen, Ishaan kneels down and pulls Rishi to join him. Rishi join Ishaan and both catches their ears saying "sorry"
Indira slowly kneels down; there are little tears in her eyes. She hugs both Ishaan and Rishi at a time saying "thanks you"

Rishi makes Indira sit between Ishaan and himself take the gulabjaam in a spoon and feeds Indira wishing her once again. Though gulabjaam are not in shape but they are the sweetest dish Indira ever had, they are made with Suger of Love.

[Message to Sur: so, here is the Gulabjaam from my side made with Suger of Love]

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SaRa Version:

Indira is waiting for Sameer. Today is her birthday, first birthday after their marriage. She remembers how life changed after she met Sameer ' the kanjoo, kadoos business man. A smile formed on her lips remembering how they fallen in love and married. Today she is standing in Diwan mansion garden waiting for Sameer. Morning Sameer wished Indira and promised to take her out once he returns from his office. Actually Sameer is not keen to attend the office, he want to be with her the whole day and want to romance with her. But Indira pushed him out of their room warning him not to come home until he completes his meetings which are very important for their new venture. Reluctantly Sameer went to office, the whole day Sameer did not called or picked her calls, she knows he is so stubborn and might be angry on her for throwing him out disturbing his romantic plans.
Indira is waiting for Sameer dressed herself in his favourite saree looking beautiful and ravishing. Rain just stopped and it is drizzling now, the weather is pleasant but very chilled. She wrapped her hands around her warming herself. She turned her head when he heard the car horn indicating Sameer is home. She runs towards him but stops on track looking at Sameer. Sameer is looking like a mess. He is drenched from head to toe. He did not look like he is coming from office but returning from some ruby match. His suit, on which he never allowed a small dust to sit, is wrinkled and is completely out of shape. His shoes, morning he shouted on the servant for not polishing properly is covers in mud. There are little patches of mud on his pants and shirt. Sameer avoids going to Project sites when it rains to avoid mud. But today donot know why he is looking like mud mess. Her eyes travelled to his face, water drops are still falls from his hair. The messy hair drenched in rain is making him look even sexier. He is standing with one hand at his back gives Indira his charming smile pulling the hair back, this act skipped a beat of Indira slowly blush started creeping into the cheeks.

Indira controlling her blush puts her hands on her hips "what is all this?"
Sameer forwards his hand which he kept at his back saying "Happy Birthday Indira"

Indira looks at the packet in his hand with a question mark expression.
Sameer "oh, you like chandini chowk kulfi which you always eat with Vidith. So I thought to bring it for you."
He scratches his head continues "due to heavy rain, chandini chowk is totally blocked. So I left the car on main road and went to your regular shop on walk to bring the kulfi. So-" and looks his appearance.
Indira cannot stop her smile and comes near him to hug.
Sameer "stop, I looking like a mess. Tum be gandi hojagaye"
Indira laughs loud hearing his irritated voice pulls his nose and says "go and freshen-up first"
Sameer gives her a sheepy smile and gives the kulfi packet to Indira going into their bed room.

Indira arranges a candle light dinner in their room, puts the kulfi in a bowl making it highlight. Sameer come out rubbing his hair. Indira makes him sit on the chair taking the towel and starts rubbing his hair adoring him for taking care of her small to smallest happiness. He feeds her kulfi with love and Indira takes the bite of kultfi, it never tasted so good before. It is filled with Sameer's love and care.

[Message to Sur' Delhi ki Indira's fav kulfi for you from me which is filled with Love and Care]

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INSHI version

Indira is getting into the local train; remember how Rishi forgot to wish on her birthday.
Indira thinks 'can you believe Rishi has forgotten my birthday. When he came as tenant atleast he wished me birthday but today he totally forgot about the day, shaadi hogi tho birthday be boolgai, javoo mein baat nahin karthi vusaa aaj'

Indira never cared about her happiness and birthday is just a day for her, nothing special. But Rishi is the first person to wish on her birthday after Inder and Vidith. Indira stopped celebrating or you can say forget about her birthday when her father left the house. She still remembers how Rishi the stranger dared to wish her. It touched a core in her heart but she masked it very well on that day, but now she donot need to mask her feelings from any one because Rishi ne vussa kulkar jeena sekhaya hain. Rutna, manana, pyaar karna Rishi ne vussa sekhaya hain. So she is angry on him today, she decided not to talk with him and to throw him tonight from their bedroom to take revenge of not wishing her.

Indira reached Sharma Nivas, went to their room to freshen-up. Came out in her night suit rubbing her hair thinking 'where is Rishi? I did not see him, may be went out with Radhe for some case. Lawyer jyo hain' suddenly Indira hears a loud sound makes her jumps under her skin, throws the towel on the chair and runs towards the kitchen from where the sound is coming. Indira cannot believe what she is witnessing. Kitchen is a MESS. The flour, sugar is drooling on the floor. Cleaning vessels are kept like a heap. The stove is looking like someone has cooked food for 100 people. Then her eyes fell on two people standing at a corner like they are going to be executed soon with a fear in their eyes and fake smile on their faces which is clearly showing how intimated they are to see Indira standing there in her Hitler style glaring at them.

Rishi and Ishaan, standing with a fake smile but inside they are panicking to see Indira infront of them. They checked the mess they created in the kitchen from corner of their eyes.
Rishi "beta aaj tho tum hara band bajayege Indira ka hothooo. Kitchen ka kya haal bana diya hain tum nee" Indira "what is happening here" in her hitler andaaj shouted on them.
Ishaan "buvvaa oh oh hum-"
Indira's eyes travels from Ishaan to Rishi as if waiting for the answer. Rishi slowly turns and takes some bowl in his hand says "Happy Birthday Indira, we are preparing gulabjam to surprise you on your birthday and so this Mess"

Indira stands there with an open mouth, no words came out. Till now no one cared to do something for her, Rishi always made her special with his needs. The gulabjams looking out of shape but she can see the love and care in them. She slowly enter the kitchen, Ishaan kneels down and pulls Rishi to join him. Rishi join Ishaan and both catches their ears saying "sorry"
Indira slowly kneels down; there are little tears in her eyes. She hugs both Ishaan and Rishi at a time saying "thanks you"

Rishi makes Indira sit between Ishaan and himself take the gulabjaam in a spoon and feeds Indira wishing her once again. Though gulabjaam are not in shape but they are the sweetest dish Indira ever had, they are made with Suger of Love.

[Message to Sur: so, here is the Gulabjaam from my side made with Suger of Love]

[/QUOT@ bold dt wud be a verry gud scene 2 wch...wish v get scenes lyk dis n HD...nice os dear!!!!...

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