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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: girl_rocks



thankyou so much
But buddy my story is finished no entry of rishi



i though u'll continue

sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely os...loved it...👏👏
feel like crying while reading...😭
i think you should continue it, by re- entering rishi... just a suggestion😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lo ji i m back...u all wanted me to continue this os so i thought kyu na continue karu...well here is da next part...well for those mera ss ka kya hua thn guys i will update tht soon
part 2

Going to work, listening the taunts, returning from work, stopping at tht cliff, writing letter to rishi and thn returning back to home...this was her daily routine...doing all dis one more year passed. Everyone was worried, her doctor too given up saying tht till she doesnot accept tht her husband is dead she cannot recover and if it goes like this she will be mentally ill

One evening when indira was putting sindoor on her forehead, vidit came nd stopped her

Indira: kya kar rahe ho bhaiya

Vidit: tum yeh sindoor nahi laga sakti

Indira:kyu nahi

Vidit: tum reason jaanti ho

Inidra: nahi mein nahi jaanti*frustrated*

Vidit: indira tum kyu aise behave kar rahi ho...tum kyu nahi samjhti ki rishi mar chukka hai woh waapas nahi aane wala...he will never come back

Smack!!!!

Indira for the first tym slapped her brother

Indira: aapki himat kaise hui yeh bolne ki

Vidit: tum mujhe jitna mar lo par yeh hi sach hai ki rishi mar Chuka hai aur yeh sach kabhi nahi badlega..tum widwa ho...u r a WIDOW! indira mein tumhare bhalai ke liye keh raha hu plzz iss sach ko accept karlo...mein bhi chahta hu ki rishi waapas aaye but mumkin nahi hai...plzz india khud ko taklif na do

Saying this vidit left from there...indiara was left numb...the whole past incident came running infront of her...how she bid rishi goodbye at airport not knowing tht she will be biding goodbye for the last tym and after returning she saw newz tht the palne crashed and no one was found alive. She had searched for rishi like mad but no positive result but still had hope in her heart tht he will return as they didn't find his body...it was thn she decided tht she will wait for rishi to come back till her last breathe...indira was standing in her room gazing to the door from where first rishi went nd thn her brother went claiming tht her life her heart beat is dead...she only knew it is not truth...she knew rishi is alive coz she was alive...

"tum widwa ho" this line was echoing in her ears...not letting her breathe...the more she avoided the more tunts of widow wud come crashing her ears

"NAHI! Mein widwa nahi hu...rishi nahi mare hai...woh zinda hai...woh mar hi nahi sakte kyuki mein zinda hu...agar rishi mar chuke hote toh mein bhi zinda nahi rehti koi bhi insaan apne dhadkano ke bina nahi reh sakta aur meri dhadkan mere rishi hai" she cried her heart out...kneel down grabbing their marriage pic were they smiling...for da first tym in 4 yrs she cried she cried her heart out...she cried for rishi...not becoz she lost hope but becoz she was alone and wanted him to support her wen everybody forcing her to leave hope...tht evening she let all her emotion out...anger frustration, love, agony...thru her hiccups she managed to speak to her life who smiling in the pic

"Rishi plzz wapas aajao ab mujhse sehan nahi hota...yeh log tumhari indira ko kamzor kar rahe hai...rishi tumhari makanmalkin ko tumhari zarurat hai...RISHI COME BACK SOON!"

"Promise karo u will never cry chahe job hi circumstances ho"

"promise"

"thts like my good girl"

Indira *wiped her tears*: srry rishi kuch der ke liye i was out of control but ab i promise i wont cry...it was ur promise only tht i didn't cry for this 4 yrs otherwise indira widout rishi mene kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti...aap zinda ho rishi yeh mein sab ko bata ke rahungi...aap wapas aaoge aur mein aap ko wapas laungi...nd this is a promise of a WIFE

Indira regained her courage, stood up and opened the drawer were she kept all the paper cuttings of the news related to tht accident...no one knew but indira collected all the news in this 4 yrs...althought she went thru tht newz many tyms she stil read this newz might be she get some hint...u may say its her fate or destiny had mercy on her she saw a newz article which enlightened the new rays of hope inside her

"SOME PEOPLE WERE BADLY INJURED WITH ONLY 0.1% CHANCE OF SURVING WERE IMMEDIATELY TAKEN TO TRAUMA HOSPITAL."

Indira folded tht piece of paper kept in her purse and called her boss

Indira: evening sir...sir sorry to disturb u but i want leave tomorrow...plz sir its very imp. Work...thank you sir...sir do you have any idea where is this trauma hospital...thank you sir

Indira closed her eyes nd made a note in her mind tht "tomorrow its gonna be tough day...kuch bhi hojaye mujhe khali haath nahi wapas aana...rishi i m coming"

Small ray of light touched indira skin...she woke up nd as usual with a sweet smile she wished rishi...with this new day new hopes were too developed...her believes went to second level...without wasting tym she got ready nd left her house in search for her heartbeat her rishi

She was standing infront of trauma hospital her heartbeat became fast...she took a deep breathe and went inside to reception

Edited by girl_rocks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
thanx 4 continuing.. its gr8 as always..👏 hope this negetive OS end at a +ve note..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Her lines if rishi is read then she will be dead that touched me loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
great os..
Thanks to u tht u decided to continue this..
😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Nice post please rishi ka come back karna please positive likhna.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for coming back sam. Was missing u. Nice update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhanya.r

Thanks for coming back sam. Was missing u. Nice update.



Me too.missing u all
thnk u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Welcome back 😊

very nice, positive touch at the end was so nice 😊

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