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Posted: 13 years ago
but y left sam i dnt knw when u left fr wht u lft?
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Posted: 13 years ago
sam y u left n when u left?
i didnt knew it yr
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: palakprincess60

sam y u left n when u left?
i didnt knew it yr


i left ip long back now dont ask y...first i left thn due to kanks i joined again but again i left coz after joining i didnt feel to cum back...ab toh iss baat ko hue kafi tym hogaya nd now dont discuss this all in this thread any query just pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you for your sweet comments
Edited by girl_rocks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Eagerly waiting for ur next update.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
i have divided this update into 2 parts

part- 16A

One year after

Rishi- arre bhai hato jaldi hato...abey oye tu kaha ghusa ja raha hai dikhta nahi kya mein jaldi me hu*shouted on a person*

Rishi was totally frustrated with traffic, the urge of going hospital was increasing per second. The more he wanted to reach hospital fast, worst the traffic was.he was totally panicking and shouting at people unnecessarily

Indira*shouting in pain*- rishi rishi jaldi karo na kya behas kare ja rahe ho yaha meri jaan atki hui hai...rishi ab mujhse se sehen nahi hota...rishiii...aaahhh!!!!

Indira was in pain tht pain which was relief sumwhere inside her...she groaned due to pain which nth but made rishi more panick after all it was the first experience for both of them

Rishi- indira calm down ...breath in breath out...and stop panicking it will nth but increase ur pain...mein dekhta hu iss traffic ko aaj hi itni buri traffic jam hona tha...

Indira- look who is talking...mujhe mana kar rahe hai khud toh mujhse bhi zyada panick ho rahe hai jaise mujhe nahi inhe pain horaha ho...rishi dekho aage rishi dekhkar...

Rishi- arre baba dikh raha hai...kyu itna chilla rahi ho...mene kaha na shant raho aur kyu nah u panick aakhir kar yeh mera first experience hai...i m damn...

Rishi in his happiness hugged indira he had no words to describe wat he was feeling tht moment..

Indira- bas bas...zyada khus na ho pehle iss traffic ka kuch karo...aur ha bolt oh aise rahe jaise mene iss me phD kar rakhi hai..

Indira giving cute angry look to her hubby...indira was smiling seeing panick rishi actually she have not seen him like this before he was totally different...he was too cute tht indira bent forward nd kissed on rishi's cheek

Rishi*surprised*- yeh kya tha...khullam khulla...arre baap re yeh meri indira hi hai na...

Indira- rishi kya aap bhi...acha chodo jaldi drive karo

Rishi- dikh nahi raha kitna traffic hai ab kya uda ke le chalu...

Indira*struggling with pain*-rishi jo karna hai jaldi karo plz bahut dard ho raha hai

Rishi- acha don't take stress mein kuch karta hu...u just take care mein thode der mein aata hu

Indira- come fast

Rishi came out from car and goes towards the direction where two people were fighting

Rishi- kya bhaisaab kya ho raha hai road kyu block kar rahe ho

Person- arre kuch nahi bhai ek truck wale ne car ko thokar mardi bas ussi pe behas baji chal rahi hai

Rishi*looking towards car wala*-arre bhai kyu fight kar rahe ho...aapas mein solve karlo kyu hume parehsan kar rahe ho

Car wala- kyuna karu, isne meri car thok di...mujhe mere car thik karne ke liye paise chahiye tabhi yeh fight shant hoga

Truck wala- arre ja sale mein tujhe ek kaudi bhi nahi dunga...ek halka sa dhakka laga hai aur kuch nahi..aur itni choti baat ka itna bada issue kyu bana rahe ho

As car nd truck walas were busy in fighting woth eachother...rishi got frustrated all he was remembering indira goin thru pain nd those idiots were not moving a inch...totally frustrated rishi was about to shout when he noticed a board.

Rishi*to car wala*-bhaisaab yaha se do minute mein khisaklo nahi toh aap hi ko ghata hoga

Car wala stares at rishi and pushes him ans says- kya kar lega be tu

Rishi- kuch nahi bas police ko bulaunga phir police aapko aur aapki so called car ko le jayegi upar se aapko jurmana bhi dena hoga

Car wala- kya matlab????

Rishi*pointing at the board*- woh dekh NO PARKING matlab yaha car ya koi bhi gadi park karna mana hai...sochle mene agar police ko buladiya toh kya hoga tera hi nuksan hoga...

After telling this car wala hesitated but atlast he agreed nd went from there...now the problem was solved but still one thing was left to clear the traffic...with increase in second rishi was getting tensed...

Rishi with the help of few people cleared the traffic by making the vehicle move one by one and soon the traffic was cleared...rishi rushed towardz his car he knew his betterhalf wud be in pain nd he have to reach there asap...while clearing traffic not even a single sec went wen he have not thought of indira. The painful face of indira and indira groaning in the pain was flashing infront of him.

Rishi- indira theek toh hona...koi takleef toh nahi hui

Indira- ha chalo nahi toh mein nahi jaanti kya hogayega...jaldi plzz chalo

Rishi- ha ha chalta hu bas tum patience rakho...

Indira- kab pahuchegen

Rishi – bas ab aahigaye

Rishi and indira reached hospital, rishi made indira sit on wheel chair and went inside, there inside doctor was ready eith everythings coz rishi had informed the doc before cuming to hospital. Soon doc took indira inside a room and said rishi to wait outside, as doc was abt to go rishi called her

Rishi-doc indira thik toh hojayegi na...aur...

Doctor-mein samajhti hu...tnsn nahi lijiye sab thik hoga...aap toh indira se bhi zyada tnsn le rahe hai...relax Mr. Rishi everything will be all right

After consoling rishi, doc went inside

Rishi was tensed...walking to and fro in the hospital corridor. And also he had full right to be tnsd after all he was for da first tym going to be afther of twins. Rishi saw a baby poster on hospital wall and a sweet smile appeared on his face...he remembered how they used to fight on babies' name


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Posted: 13 years ago
part- 16B

Flashback

Indira- nahi...plz...kaisa naam hai yeh, mein apne bacho ka yeh naam nahi rakhungi...antara mantara haye re isse ajeeb naam aapko nahi mila rakhne ko

Rishi- kya ajeeb...sahi toh hai...antara kitna acha naam hai aur uski judwa behen mantara...dekho kitna acha rhyme karta hai

Indira- mana ki antara acha naam hai but mantara...matlab rhyme karne ke liye kuch naam rakh doge...mujhe yeh naam pasand nahi

Rishi- dekho indira ab final ho chuka hai...jab doc ne hume bataya ki hamare judwa bache honge toh tabhi mene soch liya tha yeh naam

Indira- nahi...aur aapko kaise pata ki betiyan hi hogi...bete bhi toh ho sakte hai

Rishi- na meri gut feeling keh rahi ahi aur andar ki aatma chilla chilla ke keh rahi hai ki hamari betuyan hi hogi...

Indira- ufff aap aur aapka gut feeling...mein toh kehti hu ki hume bte hoge...mere do sher

Rishi- na betiyan hogi...meri do sherni

Indira- bete

Rishi- betiyan

While rishi and indira were busy in arguing their babies' name thn indira shouted in pain...indira started to have labour pain and rishi informed doctor nd took her headed towards hospital.

Flashback ended

Rishi came back to reality...indira was not there...she was still in labour room...rishi smiled while recalling the sweet memories...til thn rahul and sana too came in hospital

After anniversary rahul and sana settled down in delhi itself and sana had given birth to their son named rohit..

Sana- rishi tnsn na lo sab theek hoga

Rahul- ha rishi sabar kar...na kar panick

Rishi*looking at sana but pointing at rahul*- yeh dekho kon suggestion de raha hai...rahul yaad nahi sana k etym tu over panick hogaya tha jaise delivery sana ki nahi teri ho rahi ho

Hearing this sana laughed, rishi too joined her...rahul got annoyed but soon became normal. They spent some light moments and dekhte dekhte few hours were also passed...doc came outside, rishi rushed towards her

Rishi- doc indira kaise hai aur mere bache woh kaise hai...doc kuch boliye na...doc sab thik toh hai na...

Doctor- relax Mr. Rishi, indira bilkul thik hai aur appke bachhe bhi...Mr. Rishi aapko ek beta aur ek beti hui hai congratulation

Rishi-*giving the broadest smile*- kya!!! Sach!!! Thankyou thankyou so much...kya mein andar ja sakta hu

Doc- ha bilkul

Doc leaves fron there...rahul nad sana hug rishi

Sana &rahul- congrats rishi...hume double party chaiye

Rishi- thankyou...ha ha bilkul lekin pehle indira and bacho ko dekh leta hu

Rishi went inside the room...indira was lying on the bed...junior rishi nd indira were lying in separate cradle beside the bed...rishi hugged indira tightly

Rishi- i luv u...aaj tumne mujhe duniyan ki sabse adi khushi di hai...thankyou

Indira- i luv you too...*gives a sweet smile to rishi* rishi yaad hai humne apne bacho ke naam ko leke discussion kar rahe the...mujhe bte aur aapke betiyan na...dekho upar wale ne hum dono ki murad puri kardi

Rishi- ha indira...ab humare ghar mein ek sher aur ek sherni aagaye hai

Indira- leikn inka naam kya rakhen ke????*asked very innocently*

Rishi- ummm kyu na bte ka naam aayush rakh de

Indira*immediately widout think much*-aur beti ka naam aayushi...

Rishi and indira*in unison looking at each other*- perfect

Rishi went near cradle took the little aayush and handed to indira and took little aayushi and sat beside indira on bed...there busy admiring their sher and sherni. Sana and rahul with their little son rohit came in...sana and rahul hugged indira.

All were happy...rishi and indira got everything. The hitler indira or simply indira was now mom and the guy who changed hitler into indira was now dad...totally a new relation...a new start..

Rahul came infront and asked to look towards him...

Rahul- say cheese

*click*

Aayush and aayushi were lucky to have parents like indira and rishi who fought with their destiny...inspite of so many hurdles inshi were together. Inshi had fought with this world for their love and started a journey as husband and wife and now they will fight for their children and enter second phase of their journey as mom nd dad...undoubtedly aayush and aayushi were the luckiest kid.

THE END

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We meet...we separate...we reunite...its nothing but a game of destiny...no one has ever changed it and will not ever be changed...destiny does what it wants...this life is nth but a plan which destiny had decided for us...we just need to follow it...

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Posted: 13 years ago
WELL GUYS THIS IS THE END OF MY FF...I REALLY ENJOYED WRITNG IT...I WAS NOT EXPECTING SUCH A GOOD RESPONSE TO MY FF...THANKYOU SO MUCH GUYS

cyn, loveinshi, aisha.damor, ushali, mithsi_22, emymicheal, debo, earnshaw and every one(sorry i cudnot remember everyone) thankyou so much for reading my ff...thnks guys...nd if i have ever dissapointed u all thn m srry
well end of ff but promise i will be back with my new ss very soon

thankyou guys
sam
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow lovely ending👏👏😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice post happy ending great job.thank you so much itna accha dream dikhane ke liye.

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