My take on Gum Shum yeh dil:
Mei aur kya tareef karoon Mithsi tumare talent ke liye... Jo bhi kehna tha i think said it all in your last VM analysis and review. As a compliment I want to say this: Agar mei kiski channel ya video company mei tha, I would surely hire you as editor in chief... editing was awesome!!!! 3 cheers for that.
All I need to make out if that VM is well made or not, i just need to watch the initially 10 seconds or so to convince myself it would be a great VM and when I watched Gum shum.. within 5 seconds I knew i am watching a great work of someone.
Again, lyrics and scenes were quite in syn and with the kind of song it is being a soft melody, it was important to chose emotional scenes like you had done it.
Now, since you are unmatchable in making VMs, let me try to be a critique and point out on those things to work it to make it absoulte flawless from my point of view.
I liked the way you had used Indira scenes in it since it was a female version in it either Indu alone or Indu and Rishi together, there was one place where female voice is on while Rishi frames come before female voice is completed... otherwise using Rishi scenes in beats was perfect, I thought you used Rishi scenes during beats pretty well.
Other thing, you are an engineer you know jab bhi hum presentation dee the hai... we close it out with an end caption hai na ? you could have used something there like Milenge Inshi or Inshi forever, etc..
Mei iss baar thoda critique ke tarah I have summed up, don't mind, i know my sister will take this feedback positively and I truly, truly appreciate your hardwork!!! God bless you!