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Posted: 18 years ago
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Here's the next chapter...and thanks to everyone who reviewed..

Chapter 2:

'Transfiguration was like a thousand times better than potions' Peter said. 'Honestly as the days pass by the lessons become so boring' James said. 'And tougher' Remus added. 'And the non-verbal spells are so tricky' Peter said. James, Sirius and Remus had mastered in their non-verbal spells, but Peter still had problems with them. Last class he had burnt his desk, instead of bringing down flakes. 'Hey you coming with us to the ground, we're planning to put up a major snow-fight, Gryffindor versus slytherin' Frank Longbottom, one of their friend said. 'We really need your help, to snuff those nuts'. 'Of course, not that you can do too much damage to them without us' Sirius said. 'Actually, we don't need to do much damage to them; they're already damaged beyond repair'. James joked.
'Yeah, it'll be fun'. Peter said. 'No guys we have too much of homework to do, and Pete you have to do a week worth astronomy homework…'Remus added. 'Come on man, we'll have a blast' Sirius added. Remus rolled his eyes.

But then Lily Evans came. James ran his hand through his hair, making it messier than it already was. Sirius snickered. Lily shot him a haughty look.
'Remus, have you forgotten, we have a prefects meeting now' Lily said. 'Hey, Evans do you want me to come?' James asked. 'No thanks potter, I don't think I can tolerate more dweebs, especially since the slytherins will also be there for the meeting'. Lily said.The slytherin prefects were a bunch of idiots and they always gave the other prefects a hard time. 'Hey Evans I am too good to be compared to them'. James said with a small smile. 'Anyways lily, Hogsmeade trip with me, next Saturday?' James asked her with a wink. 'As I said, the giant squid would be a better company' Lily shot back. James made a sad face at her; she just shrugged her shoulders and made a face at him. Sirius and Peter cracked up... 'Umm, Lily aren't we late for the meeting?' Remus reminded her. She nodded, and they both walked out through the portrait hole. 'You will never give up on her?' Peter asked. 'Over my dead body'. James said with a smile, staring at the portrait hole.

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Edited by zoya24 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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so here's the next part...I know it's a bit shorter but the next chapter is going to be good..it'll be about how the marauders make the marauder's map....criticism and suggestions are welcome 😊 , plz do reply...
Edited by sarah_23 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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heyy
i red both parts jst now
its amazing!!
full of fun,jst d way i lyk it 😉
cont soon both of u r doin a gr8 job 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx.. 😊 .we promise u'll the thirdchapter will be even more exciting....plzz read it. 😃 ..we'll upload itwithin an dy or 2.....n review
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Posted: 18 years ago
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as i told u before, its wunnerful..........can't waqit now 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 wow at last u guys cont i was waiting 4 it it was soo cooool!!!!!!!!! thanxx 4 cont i really liked it 😃
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Originally posted by: krepe

as i told u before, its wunnerful..........can't waqit now 😉

thnx....😊

Originally posted by: griffinmonster

👏 wow at last u guys cont i was waiting 4 it it was soo cooool!!!!!!!!! thanxx 4 cont i really liked it 😃

thnx a lot...we'll try to write the next chapter soon....😊

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Chapter 3:

James made a perfect snowball, and aimed it accurately at Lucius malfoy's head; he turned around, that time around other thirty Gryffindor aimed snow-balls at the slytherins. They started throwing back. Bellatrix stuffed chunks of ice into a Gryffindor's shirt; Sirius, James, Peter and Franks rolled a huge snow-ball towards them, it rolled over a few slytherins, they got up and aimed a snow-ball at James head, but it narrowly missed him and hit Professor McGonagall's head. She looked more furious than ever. Everyone froze. 'who aimed it?' McGonagall asked sternly looking at the slytherins; she knew that one of them aimed it at her. 'Slytherins, Professor' all the Gryffindor chanted at the same time when the slytherins said 'Gryffindors'. 'Enough, I know its one of the slytherins…….all right tell me or else, detention for everyone along with 50 points from your house' McGonagall demanded. No one spoke……few Gryffindors snickered.

'Honestly Moony you missed all the fun'. James said later, when Remus was back from his Prefect's meeting. 'Whatever' Remus replied. Sirius and James were playing wizard chess. 'Why so grumpy, Moony?' Sirius asked whose eyes were glued to the chess board. 'That slytherin prefect Patman!' Remus cursed. 'That guy whose nose is as long as drum-sticks?' Sirius asked. 'Yeah' Remus replied. 'That toad's name is Patman?' James asked. 'Yeah………dweeb' Remus said angrily. 'Ok, what did he do this time?' James asked. 'Checkmate' Sirius said proudly. 'Another match, Padfoot?' James challenged. 'He does not do all his prefect duties'. Remus said angrily. 'Chill moony, only idiots like you and Evans take this prefect thing so seriously'. Sirius said. 'Don't call lily an idiot'. James warned Sirius. Sirius just rolled his eyes. 'We have to take it seriously, we have to do their share of job' Remus said. 'Who told you to do?' Peter asked. Remus ignored Peter and continued 'He put twenty nine non-slytherins in detention and he dint get into any trouble'. 'Well moony, why are you such a gentleman? You put thirty-nine slytherins in detention' Sirius said. 'Yeah' Peter added simply. Remus shot him a look. James and Sirius were about to start a new game, when Remus said 'Guess what? Professor Slughorn asked Professor Dumbledore, if we can have a Yule ball, before our holidays begin…….' 'And Dumbledore being Dumbledore agreed' Sirius cut him. 'Excuse me'. James said getting up. 'Where are you going? We have a game unfinished' Sirius said. 'Later, I have to ask Lily out'. James said. 'You can't; she will be in her dormitory'. Remus said. 'How do you know?' James asked. 'I saw her' Remus said simply. 'Hey keep your eyes off my girl, and no more going to prefect meetings with her' James joked. 'Why you scared that she'll start liking me? Remus asked. 'No, I know she likes me, she can't possibly like anyone else, when James is still alive, not you anyways'. James told him. 'Oh yeah, she has a strange way of showing that she likes you' Remus shot back, but James had already rushed to the girl's dormitory, but a few seconds later, he came down skidding. Sirius, Remus and Peter laughed. 'Shut up'. James said, as he settled himself opposite to Sirius. 'I will have to look stupid again, wearing my old robes, it's all smutty, I wish I knew those spells, which would help me…… my frills have come out……' Peter wailed looking at James and Sirius. 'Ok, enough faking tears,we'll fix it for you'. James said. Peter smiled happily 'Honestly, you guys are the best'. 'Yeah we know' Remus said. 'Hey Pete you have frills in your robes?' Sirius joked.
Sirius and James played one more game of chess {James won this time}. Then along with Peter they sneaked into the kitchen, Remus said he had too much of homework to do, and wanted a Blueberry muffin with cranberry cream. 'I don't think even the founders of the school know all the ways of our school better than us' James said. 'Yeah' Peter agreed. 'We should make a map, showing all the routes of our school' Sirius said 'for the future pranksters'. 'Yeah we'll call it 'the marauders map' or somethin' James added.

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Edited by sarah_23 - 18 years ago
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Sooreee... 😭 ..we posted it late. Anyways we promise we'll post the next chapter soon. Plzzzzzzzzzzz reply...
Edited by sarah_23 - 18 years ago
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I know I said that the next chapter wud be about how they make 'the marauder's map' but then we got the idea of the yule ball...
Edited by sarah_23 - 18 years ago

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