Fanfiction - Friend or Foe? Upd - pg 4.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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^ That's a really bad title, i'm sholly, will think of a better one!😛

I wrote an FF on HP a looonnggg time ago, but i dun like it so I thought might as well start another one.... hope you like it!😊

Story - Harry has left Hogwarts after being there for 2 months. He's got some information about the Horcruxes and leaves the school with Ron and Hermione..... On his way to a particular location, Harry finds that Ron and Hermione are missing. He doesn't know what to do, as he is extremely close to finding one of the Horcruxes.

"Ron? Hermione?" Harry called out.... where did they go all of a sudden? Standing in a dark forest and only able to hear the sound of some hooting owls, Harry stood rooted to the spot for a second and allowed himself sometime to think.

He was on his way to hopefully finding the Hufflepuff cup, one of Voldemort's Horcruxes.... looking back in his mind for clues, it all fit that the cup would be in this forest... it took him forever to solve the riddles and to get the information, but here he was, praying that the 5th Horcrux was here....

..... but Harry pushed that thought to his mind. "I can't go anywhere further without finding Ron or Hermione.... they were just with me 2 minutes ago -- ARRGHHHH!!"

Harry fell down and clutched his forehead, his scar was burning with such pain that he thought any minute his head might burst.... he rolled around in the grass, unable to take his hand off his forehead and yelled as loudly as he could..... Suddenly and abruptly, the pain stopped. Harry lay there in the grass for a minute, sweating and panting, as a new rush of thoughts came into his mind.

"Voldemort?"

But before he could say anything more, he felt an invisible hand dragging his collar and picking him up forcefully. "W- what? Who is this, let go of me!" Again, the hand made him stand up straight and pushed him against a tree, his forehead hitting the bark and once again Harry went into a burst of immense pain....

Finally, he heard a voice speak, yet it sounded like 5 voices at the same time... Harry tried to turn around in his frenzy of pain and slowly opened his eyes, to see a form hovering in the air, looking like a thestral.

"Harry Potter...... you have a choice. Either get back your friends....... or destroy the Horcrux...."

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There's the first chapter!😛 hope you all liked it, pls bear with me if there are any mistakes !

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nitin_dave thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 !Good job! 👏 👏 👏

Write quick yaar, cant wait to see what happens next!
-Aastha
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thankoo so much everyone 🤗 will try and update soon !!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr88 😃 it seems real promisin..bt u kno acc to the books harry is sch a sadhu he'll choose his frnds 😆 i wud hav 😃😆
neway jst one suggestion>>the way u sed "get clues","solve riddles","get info" n all tht made me really curious to kno wht all those clues n riddles r 😃
so it wud hv been better if u start frm the beginnin of hogwarts whr he looked fr clues n stuff n solve riddles n stuff 😳
i kno u mite b confused on hw to go abt tht,thts y u directly strted frm here 😛 bt if u jst try u will defnitly hv fun figurin out diffrent riddles n all 😳 n itll double the intrest fr ur readers 😉😃😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thankoo Niyu ji for all your comments..!! And yap, dun worry about the clues and the riddles, next few chapters are going to be a flashback of how he got to the forest.... so hopefully all ur questions will be answered 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayy!! now cant wait 😃
n omg y on erth m i niyu ji 😆 it dusnt fit plzz niyu only 🤣
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Posted: 18 years ago
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FLASHBACK.

Harry sat in the library, trying not to fall asleep in a book called Helga Hufflepuff's Honourable Habits. He was trying to find out where the fifth Horcrux was, the Hufflepuff cup... all he got was that it was in some kind of forest. But which forest?

"Harry! Wake up mate, it's 3 AM and you're still reading.." Ron shook Harry and he suddenly woke up, "huh - wha --?"

"Blimey, you could be Hermione right now.... you've been in the library since 7 in the evening!"

"Yah, I know, but this stupid..... Ron, I can't leave here until I find where the Horcrux is. It's just too important."

"Yeah I understand, but atleast take some rest, Harry. One day is not going to make the Horcrux go any further."

Harry couldn't resist; he himself probably wouldn't be able to stay awake. They left the library together and went into the Gryffindor Common Room, Ron having to practically drag Harry into his bed and Harry fell asleep immediately, not bothering to take off his shoes or change.

***

Harry and Ron met Hermione in the hall of the Common Room, and Harry filled them in on what information he got last night.

"I know the cup's in a forest, but I just don't know where. Ahh, I'm going crazy --" Hermione cut him off, suddenly looking excited as she took out a small piece of parchment from her pocket.

"Harry!" she squealed. "You won't believe what I found yesterday while I was in the library (Ron rolled his eyes) .... it's something I found in Hufflepuff, a History. Some kind of riddle..... written by Helga Hufflepuff herself. And I'm almost positive it's about the cup. Read it for yourself and see."

Harry took the parchment from her and opened it up, reading it softly so only the three of them could hear it.

"My most prized possession lies in a place
Where the only way you can get this gleaming beauty is through a terrible race
Small but gold, I love it so
But to get it, you must go to and fro
The place where it lies is dark and green
Fear overcomes those who have seen
Once found, be aware of the different enigmas
To acquire my token, you must undergo a dilemma."

Harry looked at Hermione, and Ron looked even more confused, scratching his chin.

"There it is, Harry. And I think I've already solved some of it."

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There it is, enjoy! 😃

and pls bear with me, that was not a good poem, i just made it up on the spot so sholly😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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1 word Ammuu..Simply wow..i mean..itz gud and very exciting..!
u've r too cretive. 😳 😳
keep sticking to this profession...never i have read such a nice fan-fic..yeah makin an honest confession..
keep pouring ur ideas..and sure u will rock 😃 😃
can't wait..continueee fast 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aaaaah u have one entire flashback ready 😳 n i sat n gave u bhashan on y u shud post riddles 😆 hey bhaggu im sch an idiot 🤣
neway its amazin yaar 😳
typical hermy she alredi solved some of it 😆 i jst luv her 😳
n ur poems fine dont wry 😉
now jaldi se post next part 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awww you all are sho shweet 🤗 thankoo Anu, pm4eva, and Niyu!! and yaar dun worry i'm glad u gave me bhaashaan 😆 😆

will post the next part soon when i finish my homework 😉

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