A LOVE STORY BEYOND D REALM OF RIGHT N WRONG!(Final chapter updated)

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Hey all
So, this time i thought of writing something about Haasil and mainly about AanVir and this time i ended up writing quite a lot so i guess i will have to divide it in chapters so this story is not going to be an OS but a multi chapter story

SCENARIO - Ranvir and Aanchal both have married each other with a purpose...both want to seek revenge from the other but both are feeling a strong pull from each other...both have started getting affected by each other's presence and absence but both are not sure why they are feeling the way they are.

Things take a turn when a tragedy takes place and Ranvi'r life gets in danger...Will this incident push these two to acknowledge what they have started feeling for each other.

Will their's be a love story which is beyond the realm of right and wrong...can the two sworn enemies fall in love or the tragic event will separate them forever

Let's find out ! 😃
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Ranvir is leaving from his house in a hurry when Sarika stops him from behind

Ranvir It's 10pm , itni raat ko kaha ja rahe ho ?'

Mom ek zaroori kaam hai, jaldi vapis aa jaunga', he places a kiss on his mom's forehead and is about to leave again when he notices Aanchal standing near the stairs

Ranvir's eyes meet Aaanchal's and in that moment Ranvir couldn't understand what he wanted, did he want them to keep looking at each other like this or he wanted Aanchal to say something or maybe just give him a smile...Ranvir couldn't understand why this girl whom he had married only for a purpose, a girl who tarnished his image had the ability to pull his heart strings..why was he so affected by her...her presence affected her and so did her absence...his heart becomes restless whenever his eyes couldn't trace him...even when he knows that she has gone for somw work and will be back soon still her eyes keep searching for her in the empty mansion and when he finally sees her there is a relief as if he has found his safe haven...Ranvir for the first time felt as if he was losing control , he was feeling emotions that he didn't want...Emotions were for the weak and Ranvir Raichand is not weak...he has the control on himself and his emotions...no matter how much he tried to convince himself but deep down he knew that Aanchal did have an impact on him.

Khade jyu ho , jaldi jao aur jaldi vapis ao' Sarika uttered and Ranvir was brought back from his deep thoughts and realized that he kept looking at Aanchal all this time..He put aside all these thoughts , gave a smile to his mom and left but not before giving a one last glance to Aaanchal.

AANCHAL'S POV

Aanchal who was standing at the stairs was also in a deep thought...She could't help shake this uneasy feeling which she had when she saw Ranvir leaving...She had become so habitual of Ranvir , his presence and absence affected her...her heart beats faster when he is close to her even for a second..her eyes look for him when he is not around... Ranvir once told her to look into his eyes if she wants to know the truth and when she looks into his deep eyes she wants to believe that truth which she sees in them.

She kept looking at him and felt as if Ranvir through her eyes was looking directly into her soul...She didn't want to take her eyes off him...She wanted this moment to last for a lifetime..It was only her and him in this moment and this moment was their's and no-one else's...she wished if they could stay like this forever lost in each other's eyes...if he could just stay here and never leave.

Suddenly Sarika's voice Khade jyu ho , jaldi jao aur jaldi vapis ao' broke her chain of thoughts and she shuddered at her own thoughts and cursed herself for feeling this way for Ranvir.



Nope she was not supposed to feel this way for Ranvir...it's not like he is her husband or that this marriage means anything to her...She is here on a mission...she reminds herself that she Is here to seek justice for Meenu and revenge for his dad's death from Ranvir...Ranvir is her enemy and means nothing more than that to her .

She watches him leave after giving her one final glace, she moves her eyes away from his as she watxhes him leave.

Aanchal just stop thinking about him...vo jeeye ya mare usse tujhe koi fark nahi padta' Aanchal says out loud to herself and then rushes upstairs to her room .

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Aanchal is in her room but sleep still eludes her...She is turning from one side to other in her bed...She still can't shake that uneasy feeling she is experiencing since Ranvir left. She is restless..She looks at the watch on her side table and it's 3 am

Ranvir kabhi itna late nahi ata' , Aanchal ponders and takes a sitting position

Before she could think of something else she hears Sarika's voice which seemed distressed.

She gets out of the bed and goes down the stair in the main hall

Aanchal notices that Sarika is panicking while an equally tensed Kabir is trying to pacify her while at the same time calling Ranvir.

Mom just relax, bada koi baccha thodi hai jo ap itna pareshan ho rahe ho , kahi phas gaya ho ga kaam mein , abhi aa jaega...main call kar raha hoon na' , Kabir tried to calm down his mom.

Kabir u know Ranvir aisa kabhi nahi karta, he makes sure that he calls me once if he gets late but aj no toh usne call kia aur na hi apa phone pick kar raha hai...something is wrong'

Suddenly someone finally picks the call

Bade ! bade! Tu theek hai na...bata mujhe...hello...bade ! Kabir inquires hysterically on phone and puts the phone on speaker

Kab-Kabir- Kabir', Ranvir s speaks with a lot of effort.

Kabir could sense that there was cleary distress in Ranvir's voice, he sounded short of breath and it took a lot of effort from Ranvir to even take his name...He knew something was wrong..very wrong...his heart sank when he heard his bade's feeble voice.

Badem tu kaha hai, tu-tu theek toh hai na...bata mujhe kaha hai..main-main abhi aa raha hoo' said Kabir..there was panick in his voice and he was worried for his bade.

Ka-Kabir Elfinston road, kaali madir' Ranvir told Kabir before darkness engulfed him.

Bade ! Bade! Muhjse baat kar..just keep talking to me..hello...bade! Main..main aa raha hoon,,tujhe kuch nahi hoga Kabir got the address but could hear that Ranvir's words were slurry and that he was in pain and losing conscious..he tried to get Ranvir to keep talking to him but that was of no use coz he realized that Ranvir was perhaps unconscious.

Kabir kya hua hai Ranvir ko...bolo..just tell me dammit!' Sarika hysterically shouted at Kabir but Kabir didn't give her any proper response

Mom don't worry kuch nahi hoga Bade ko..I promise! Kabir assured his mom and then rushed out of the house.

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Aanchal was witnessing everything and when she heard Ranvir's voice, she couldn't but help notice how weak and feeble it was, she could sense that Ranvir was in pain , she could sense the fear in his voice, she could sense the pain in his voice, she could feel it! She could feel everything and a cold chill ran down her spine and she stood still...she didn't even know how long she stood there, all she could think was RANVIR'...She didn't know why she was feeling this way..what exactly she was feeling s...was this helplessness she wondered or restlessness..She just felt as if someone had pulled her soul out of her...she felt so EMPTY !

She didn't realize when she started walking towards the door and followed Kabir.

Kabir, wait main bhi tuhare saath chalungi' she informed Kabir

Tum mere bade se door raho,jab se tum uski zindagi mein ai ho tumne usse sirf pain diya hai..got it !' Kabir snapped at her.

Kabir main tumhare saath chal rahi hoon' Aanchal said in a very determined tone!

Kabir was about to say something but then stopped and simply uttered Chalo'



So, this was pretty lengthy...huh ! ...anyway do drop your comments and let me know if u all enjoyed it...u all can drop in ur suggestions as well ! 😃



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very interesting!! Update the next part soon :)
-Sanu
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Very interesting!! Update the next part soon :)

-Sanu


Awww...glad that u liked it !
Yes have completed the whole story...will update soon 😳
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Wow this is beautiful anshvi.. Haraharike next part update Karo 😊
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Originally posted by: lakshmi32

Wow this is beautiful anshvi.. Haraharike next part update Karo 😊


Aww thank u for liking it 😊
Harharike next chapter update karungi pakka 😊
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Hey all
Here's the second chapter , after this only one more chapter is left !

do give me your feedback ! enjoy

SECOND CHAPTER

RANVIR'S POV

Ranvir after collecting the important documents was driving back to home when he noticed the Kaali Mandir' on his left...He wasn't someone who had immense faith in God...Nah! He was man who believed in making his own destiny...He didn't have much faith in the Almighty but he knew two people who had immense faith in God..One was his mom and the other was Aanchal...Aanchal was a believer and devotee of Maa kaali and he was aware about this...He was amused that once again Aanchal had occupied his thoughts.

Aanchal , aanchal , aanchal.' He said with a chuckle and took a deep breath and exhaled ...He parked his car and got out of it.

He was about to cross the road when 4 bikers start circling around him and before Ranvir could process what was happening one of the bikers hit him on his forehead with a hockey stick and Ranvir fell on the ground...Blood started tripping from his temple...Ranvir tried to get up on his feet ..

One of the bikers again was about to hit Ranvir when defended himself by holding the biker's hockey stick ...Ranvir pulled the stick and the biker fell from his bike

The other bikers stopped their bikes , they also had hockey sticks in their hands and started circling around Ranvir who was now up on his feet

One by one they started attacking Ranvir and he fought with each of them...Ranvir had a n upper hand and he was beating the goons...Ranvir was punching one of the goons

Bata kisne bheja hai tujhe' Ranvir demanded and punched the goon.

Ranvir was busy trying to get it out from the goon the name of the person who sent them here when one of the goons hit him on his head with the stick

Ranvir clutched his head in pain...his head started spinning , he turned around to see the face of his attacker...his vision was blurry and before he could see clearly and process everything he sensed a piercing pain right above his stomach , near his chest

One of the goons had pulled a gun from his pocket and had shot Ranveer.

Ranveer felt an hot burning pain in his side and he fell on his knees clutching his side from where warm blood was oozing and in no time his white shirt was drenched in his own blood.

His knees gave away and he fall on his back on the ground...By this time the goons were gone as their work was done

Ranvir inhaled a deep breath but quicky cursed himself coz it was damn painful...His vision was getting blurry and he felt weaker with each passing second...He was pressing his wound with his hand but he could feel more blood oozing out of the gaping hole.

He felt like giving up, he wanted to just give everything up and go to sleep, he was in pain and he was tired..he felt like embracing this darkness which was ready to engulf him but then the faces of his mom, dad ,Kabir n Aanchal flashed in front of his eyes...Ranvir thought to himself that he has to get up...Ranvir can't die like this...Vo apni zindagi , apni taqdeer khud likhta hai' ...he looked for his phone in his pocket but realized that he had left it in the car.

Ranvir gathered all his strength and tried to get up..after a couple of failed attempts he was finally up on his feet and staggered towards his car...Every step was more painful than the next one...Ranvir could feel that his feet were giving up, he was losing blood and strength with each step but he knew that he had to reach the car and get his phone so that he can call Kabir.

After what seemed like eternity he finally reached the door of his car, Ranvir was short of breath and he knew that he could fall unconscious any minute...He reached for his phone and dialed Kabir's phone

Kab-Kabir- Kabir', he spoke with a lot of effort

Bade tu kaha hai, tu-tu theek toh hai na...bata mujhe kaha hai..main-main abhi aa raha hoo' said Kabir...Ranvir could sense the panick in Kabir's voice..He wanted to comfort him that he will be fine but Ranvir really at this point didn't have the strength to stay on his two feet let alone do anything else

Ka-Kabir Elfinston road, kaali madir' Ranvir informed Kabir before darkness engulfed him. Before he finally let go.

Ranvir fell on the ground once again and this time he remained there, he was too tired and in pain to do anything else...he could only hope that Kabir will reach in time...He lay on the ground while blood kept oozing from his wound, he stared at the night sky, it was so peaceful, so calm...he wondered if this was it...he wondered if this is the way how Ranvir Raichand will go out ! He kept going in and out of consciousness

He thought if this is how last moments of one's life feels like...He couldn't help but chuckle at the irony that just like in his life during his death also he is alone...all by himself !

His life started flashing before his eyes...his dad, mom . Kabir...the moments he had spent with them flashed before his eyes...he knew that they were far from perfect..he knew that there were secrets, lies , betrayals when it comes to his family but they were his family'

And then finally that one face came in front of his eyes whom he was perhaps searching for all this time...AANCHAL

Their first meeting, their first fight, their first emotional connect, his revenge, their wedding everything flashed like a movie in front of him

She seemed so close to him...He could picture her very clearly in the bridal attire she had worn on their wedding day...Gosh she looked so beautiful just like an angel ..He could see her...she appeared so close that he could just reach her face..her beautiful...he lifted his hand but all he could grasp was thin air. Ranvir couldn't help but chuckled at this...It was always like this...Aanchal was always near and yet never in his reach !

Ranvir wondered if really it was his time to go, were these really his last moments and if yes then why along with his loved ones he remembered Aanchal of all the people, why does his heart want to see her one last time, why his eyes will still searching for her...why deep down wanted to be with Aanchal, why his heart wanted to love her, why his heart wanted to live so badly so that it can tell Aanchal how much he loved her, how much he wanted to be with her, how his heart while pretending to be in love with her has truly fallen in love...how this is no longer a pretence but the absolute truth !

Ranvir wanted to live... he wanted another chance to be with with, he wanted to live...live with her...live for her...Aanchal is the one his heart desired in his last moment !

He could feel life going out of him slowly but steadily...he was ready to go when the lights of a car fell on his eyes and he could see a figure running towards him...It was AANCHAL his AANCHAL

Aanchal' he called out but it was more of a whisper and then darkness finally engulfed him but not before he could see her face one last time !

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AANCHAL'S POV

The entire time in the car felt like an eternity...Her heart was pounding and she was getting more and more restless with each passing second...She just wanted to be with Ranvir...She wanted to see him..she wanted to touch him...She just wanted him in this moment and that is what all she cared about and nothing else.

Kabir was equally worried about his brother

Aanchal realized that at this moment in the car there were two people for whom Ranvir was the person that meant the world to them...Ranvir was the common connection between her and Kabir..Both of them were focused on getting to Ranvir as fast as they could

Finally both Aanchal and Kabir could see Ranvir's car and as their car came closer to Ranvir's car they could see a figure lying on the ground near the car

All Aanchal could see was Ranvir and that he was lying on the ground bleeding...She didn't even wait for Kabir ..she opened the car door and rushed towards Ranvir.

She ran and felt as if it was the longest distance she ever had to cover even though it was a few metres...

She reached and sat on his knees beside Ranvir...She took his head on her laps and frantically called his name.

Ranvir, get up...Aankhe kholo Ranvir...Come on...open your eyes' she pleaded while tears freely rolled down her cheeks.

She gently slapped his cheek to wake him up but to no avail...all her pleas were falling on deaf ears coz Ranvir didn't wake up

Kabir had called the ambulance and rushed to Ranvir's side.

Bade..bade' he also pleaded to Ranvir to open his eyes but to no avail

The ambulance reached at the location...2 compounders jumped out of the ambulance with a stretcher.

A doctor also came running and tried to check Ranvir.

Mam ap please hatiye hume Mr. Raichand ko hospital leke jaana hai, he is critical' doctor spoke in a gentle tone to Aanchal who was playing no heed to him

Aanchal's eyes kept staring at Ranvir...She kept staring at his face waiting for him to open his eyes so that she could keep looking at them forever...She wanted to just see his eyes...the ones that had so many emotions and pain buried in them..those eyes which say everything only if one could understand.

Ranvir please aankhe kholo' it was more of a final plea, a faint whisper from Aanchal

Aanchal didn't even realize that she had held Ranvir's had all this while as if she was holding on to her dear life, as if the moment she will let go of his hand, he will go away. She kept whispering to Ranvir to open his eyes while holding onto his hand while he lay motionless in her lap

Mam please hame Sir ko le jane dijie..please haath chodhiye' , the doctor asked Aanchal to let go of Ranvir's hand so that they cantake him.

Kabir held Aanchal firmy by her shoulder ,'Aanchal bade ka haath chodho...doctors ko apna kaam karne do'

Aanchal kept looking at Ranvir while Kabir held her by the shoulder so that doctors could take Ranvir...As the medical team placed Ranvir on a stretcher and started moving towards the ambulance...Ranvir's hand slipped from Aanchal's hand.

Aanchal kept looking at him and felt as if someone had pulled life out of her body...She felt so EMPTY !

Aanchal started walking towards the ambulance but Kabir stpped her in her tracks

Tum kahi nahi jaoegi, Aanchal tumhe main phir keh raha hoon...mere bade se door raho...tum mujhe uske aas paas bhi dikhni nahi chahio samjhi! Tumne mere bade ko sirf dard diya hai aur kuch nahi..just get the hell out of here' Kabir snapped at her and then went inside the ambulance and the ambulance left.

Aanchal was left behind all alone and empty ! Just like a body is an empty shell without the soul...Aanchal felt the same...EMPTY from within without her Ranvir !


To be continued...😃






Edited by anshvi - 7 years ago
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Hello people

So, here comes the final chapter of this story! happy reading ! do drop in you feedback ! 😃


HOSPITAL SCENE

Doctors had taken Ranvir for a surgery which went on for 5 hours...The bullet has pierced his lung due to which it had collapsed and he had lost a lot of blood

The surgery was a success and Ranvir was sifted in the I.C.U...his condition was stable but he was put under 24 hour observation...Since his lung had collapsed the doctors had put him on a ventilator so that his lungs could recuperate.

It was midnight of the next day...Ranvir was still unconscious...Kabir had sent Sarika and Mr. Raichand home while he went to the cafeteria to get some coffee. He didn't want Aanchal to be anywhere near his bade !

Once he was gone to get coffee...Aanchal who was waiting all this while for Ranvir to be alone quietly entered his room.

One inside the I.C.U. she removed her scarf with which she had covered her face and looked it the still form of Ranvir lying on the bed in front of him

He noticed how pale and vulnerable he looked, the dark circles had formed below his eyes...His forehead was wrapped with a bandage, he was intubated a breathing tube was inserted in his windpipe through his mouth, she noticed that he was receiving blood through an IV a tiny tube was inserted into his right hand's vein using a small needle...Heart monitor was also attached to him and she could hear the constant beeping of the monitor which indicated that Ranvir's heart was beating and that sound gave her immense peace in this moment coz she knew that her Ranvir was okay!

She couldn't help the tears from falling from her eyes...She had never seen Ranvir in such a vulnerable condition...Her heart ached on seeing Ranvir like this in this condition

This is what she wanted...Aanchal Srivastava wanted to destroy Ranvir Raichand, she wanted to give him pain, she wanted to ruin his life...Seeing him in pain, seeing him so vulnerable should make her happy, his condition should give her peace and satisfaction but she didn't feel any of that.

All she could feel was pain...Ranvir was the one who was shot but she could feel his pain...Her heart ached on seeing him like this...She felt helpless and horrible...this was the worst feeling in the world for her and she never wanted to experience it again.

She sat beside him and gently took his hand in her's making sure that the needle in his hand remains in it's place.

The rising and falling of his chest made her relax and she took a deep breath...She kept looking at him for a while.

Tum mere dushman ho Ranvir...Tumse badla lena , tumhe barbad karna mera maqsad hai...islie toh tumse shaadi ki...tum bure ho Ranvir...bahut bure...mujhe tumhe iss halat mein dekh kar khush hona chahie...mere dil ko sukoon milna chahie...kyuke tum bure ho.

Par phir main khush kyu nahi hoon...tumhe iss halat mein dekh kar mujhe sukoon kyu nahi mil raha...tum toh bure ho na Ranvir toh phir...'

Aj jab maine tumhe uss halat mein dekha aur jab tumhara haath mere haath se choota toh mujhe..mujhe aisa laga ki meri zindagi mere haath se chooth rahi hai Ranvir'

par tum toh bure ho Ranvir toh tum kab meri zindagi ban gae...Main aisa kyu feel kar rahi hoon...main...main tumse kaise pyar kar sakti hoon Ranvir kyuki tum bure ho !'

Kyu tumhari aankhon mein dekhti hoon toh lagta hai ki tumhari har baar pe yakeen kar loon...kyu lagta hai ki bas tumhare aankhon mein dekhti rahu aur zindgi beet jae issi lamhe mein'

Kabhi kabhi sochti thi ki jab kisi ke jism se zindagi alag hoti hai toh kaisa feel hota hoga...aj maine vo mehsoos kia Ranvir...aj tumhara haath mere haath se chooth raha that aur mujhe laga ki mujhse meri zindagi chooth rahi hai'

Mujhe nahi pata ki tumse pyar karna sahi hai ya galat par ye pata hai ki maine bahut koshish kee ki tumse pyar na karu lekin phir bhi dil ne meri suni hi nahi aur kar lia tumse pyar'

Mujhe nahi pata Ranvir ki kyu tumse pyar karne lagi hoon...kya tumhari aankhon mein jo sachai dikhti hai uss vajah se ya koi aur...pata nahi...kya pyar karne ki koi vajah hona zaroori hai...pata nahi...kya pyar mein sahi hona zaroori hai ..,mujhe ye bhi pata nahi...bas itna pata hai that I LOVE U RANVIR! Aur tumhara haath jo maine thama hai vo main kabhi chootne nahi doongi'

She places a kiss on his forehead...Ranvir slowly opens his eyes and his eyes meet with Aanchal's...Both don't say a single word but keep looking into each other's eyes'

Iss pal ki sachai bas yahi hai Ranvir Iss pal mein tum ho...main hoon...aur bas ye pal hai...'

Ye pal, ye lamha hamara hai Ranvir , sirf hamara aur iss lamhe mein bas poori zindagi yuhi guzar jae' , Aanchal softly speaks , it was more of a whisper but it was all Ranvir wanted to hear in that very moment.

He simply gives her a smile and both kept looking at each other...Aanchal places her head gently on Ranvir's chest and they stayed like this for a while...for a long while !

Aanchal and Ranvir both knew in that moment that their story will not be easy..they might not even have a fairy tale ending...coz neither she was a damsel in distress princess nor Ranvir was a goody two shoes prince charming..they knew that there will be hurdles, there will be ups and downs...but they will be ready to face them all ...They will be by each other's side till death and even beyond.

Ye ishq nahi asaan...aag ka dariya hai aur doobke jana hai' Mirza Ghalib

Some love stories are beyond the realm of right and wrong


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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was just perfect! Aanchal's dialogues we're beautiful! And the last one, ye pal, ye lamha humara hai...was the best!
Awesome SS Anshvi!

-Sanu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

It was just perfect! Aanchal's dialogues we're beautiful! And the last one, ye pal, ye lamha humara hai...was the best!

Awesome SS Anshvi!

-Sanu



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow
amazing story
absolutely loved it


Thanks 😊

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