May 27 WU - Last Epi: Avita Together In Death - Page 9

To begin with, the thing lacked Impact, for the whole length of it (except for the final flashback in Kisna theme). The script was shoddy, loose and executed in an extremely laid-back and casual manner; even the death of Avedesh was also made to look very random. As someone has already pointed out i believe, the terrace height was hardly enough for someone to fall to his DEATH. Not to mention, the confession and payback scenes had no event at all...it just looked like some petty goon was confessing backstabbing his ring-leader.

In disagreement with most other peeps here, I'll have to say that it was thoroughly infuriating that Bhauji got to live...albeit the contention that she would rot away grappling with the memories of the one she'd held most precious to her. Time brings to rest all wounds...however mean or deep; and moreover, by letting her off the gun, he risked exposing Pihu and Dev to future assaults from her. Really, i'd much rather have preffere4d a bloody ending with Bhauji falling prey to a bullet...stray or intentional. Maybe that would have been an easy death for her, maybe she'd have gotten only one-hundredth of the pain stored up for her by her misdeeds, but still she'd have FELT PAIN, if only for a few fleeting seconds until the bullet did its job. Blah, the word should be for the ending. What an ordinary fizzle-out for a strong show!!