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Cuty16

@Cuty16

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#151

Hye dear,
U made me so much confused confused,shocked when my confusion got on extreame u started revieling the truth and u made me happy happy.

Whenever i read a os or ff i try to guess the further story but this time my brain was completely clueless and giving error signals.

Loved it dear,and the rapid fire between avita previously thinking avi and shila of yes no was great.

Pappu & shila both are positive thats good.
SR Was also awesome sorry dear i could'nt make my self to close my eyes aur wo bhi when SR is of our avita.
Loved it truely great part waise when u will update the ff dear.

Edited by Cuty16 - 14 years ago

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Sidda

@Sidda8

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#152

Wow, I'm still poundering why Shelia was hurt by Avi's behavior to forget Arpi. I can't believe that he hated Arpi's innocence and childishness. Those are two aspects that I love about her. Avi is hurting me with his quick change at one point he is obsessed with Arpi and the other with Shelia. I would really love it if Shelia was Arpi with a plastic surgery because at least then I have some happiness with Avita's reunion. Avi is making his vows now, they must have been the same words he told Arpi. Although I'm hurt, this update is very interesting. Thank you writing for raising more doubts for me. Priya, do update soon. I love your ff even if I hate Shelia.

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PrashT

@PrashT

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#153

Hey My IC 😳

Part 4- Ye kya kiya??

haldi rasam of Pihu and pappu...and Wedding of Avi - Sheila with tht Sheila being Pregnant and It was murder not accident of Arpita

Itne saare jhatke ek hi update mein

Im speechless

But as a writer...Loved it Ic

It was awesome👏👏👏

Sr of Sheila- Avi😡😡😡 Nahiii

Last Part-

Loved the part of understanding between Arpi's parents and Avi...

Loved the discussion of Tanmay,Rv, shikha, Manjari and all...😆

Its yet to be continued😉

waiting for full update

Love ya😳

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#154

Updated last part 😛

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coolguy3

@coolguy3

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#155

Hey Priya , awesome update 👏👏

Finally raaz ka khulasa ho gaya ...yipppeee AVITA 2gether n married again n Arpi is preggy ...Sheila n Pappu (atleast yaha toh achha kaam kiya ) 👏👏 ... u cud give an epilogue of Avi takng care or a pregnant Arpi n then AVITA after d delivery (just a suggestion)

B/w did not understand Avi on terrace wid Arpi's pic n then tellng his mom why is she doing dis ...if he knew he got married 2 Arpi again then why was he sad , he shd b happy na n also his mom knew na ki she is Arpi ?????????

Wished dis was d show's end 😔

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Amit

@GunDaa

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#156

Priya aka Toofan,nice update priya,though i never watched GKD,but ur OS,seems to be quite interesting...nice pqiya keep it up dear...hope to see ur more OS in future😃

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ozzyie

@ozzyie

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#157

Awesome priya,,,

such a lovely ending ...

it was awesome !!!!!

thanks for such a wonderful os !!!!

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#158

Thanks for updating it priya loved it.

Mujhe avi pe pura bharosa that baby is not his, thank u.

So is arpi only wooohhh thank you again.

Dear ghunghat idea was superb.
Finaly avita is going to have there nanha munna.
Updated my post
on pg 20.

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sharan

@danno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#159

priya😆😆
jiyo jiyo
is baar kya jhatka diya boss
maan gaye
tumara name JQ iase hi nahi hai
hehehhe
BTW just love this part
everything is in it
drama,love,emotions,romance and of cource baby to🤣
and i promise u to give u a gift
when u complete this OS
so
munni haazir hai
here it is..
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- -
- -
- -
deti hoon
itzaar toh karo

kaose lagi?????
i hope ki achi lagi ho

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joliefille

@joliefille

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#160

Hey Priya😃

wow yaar what an update yaar👏👏👏👏

just loved this Jhatka wow

u know the biggest jhatka was not that its Arpita not sheela
but for me its that Sheela and Pappu came out as positive characters 😲😲😆😆

m waiting for ur new Jhatka ful OS now😳

gr8 job dear 👍🏼

😃

Edited by joliefille - 14 years ago

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