FF-'DESIRE'--Part 12'the Prom night'part-2 pg 47

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Jessie

@jes_jade

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

What a lucky day!!!!

Another update!!!!

I am just speechless!!!👏👏
Just want to hug u for ur update.......🤗🤗
It was mindblowing!!👏👏
The way u expressed AVITA's feelings were just amazing!!👍🏼👍🏼

Really eager to read the Romeo-Juliet part!!

Plzz cont soon!!!!!😳😳

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Hye,
today both the updates were just to sweet and touchy.

Well i wonder avi must had watched arpi in rain when he had closed his eyes.

NP MAM will bring them together well i guess.
Avita first fighted then become friends then close friends and now the love part next is just waiting for them.
Too too good thankyou dear updating it soon.

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angili

@angili

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

jo this is great you did a wondurful job 👏👏👏

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Vistaa

@Vistaa

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Oh Neha, you took my breath away............it was so beautiful.........Avi - Arpi conversation at night in the hospital room ..........

Very very well done....you are spinning quite a yarn here and I love it.👏👏⭐️⭐️👏👏

Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us.😊

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Superb jo........loved it...Avita was soooooo emotional.........love you update soon

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PrashT

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Updated My post on Page 10 😳

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Wow Neha.. U updated. Let me read & Comment.

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sharan

@danno

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

hey neha,
this part is just awesome..............................
romio and juliet ...............
love shove aur bhi bad jayegaa
wowwwww
waiting for that part

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joliefille

@joliefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

hey everyone just trying to give a precap hope you like it,

, "now every morning Arpi wake up with the thoughts of Avi or the dialogs of Romeo which they practiced last day, Shikha and Avdhesh pick her daily if Shikha was not going then Avi pick her as they are the protagonist so they have to rehearse together, they were rehearsing the first meeting of "romeo and Juliet"the very first visit of Romeo at copulates mention where the party was on, and everyone was dancing"

hope you like it as its not so engaging but will try to make it intresting, give your views frankly😳

Edited by joliefille - 14 years ago