FF-'DESIRE'--Part 12'the Prom night'part-2 pg 47 - Page 27

Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hye jo,
just readed last two parts thank God dis part was already there,b'coz when i readed the ch-10 i got 440 watt jhatka,thanks dear for not ending there it will be too sad
and sory dear i cant rply for last part and in the opinion giving also but for sure i had choosed option 'c' only.
This part was realy too sweet and heart touching, i just loved avitas convo in hospital.
Bye

Originally posted by: prash_t

Heyyy Jo🤗😳

Hey Prashuuu🤗

Im first..!! yayyy!!!😆

OMG!!!!😲😲

yeah😃

This update really took my breath away😳




From the start till the end...It was fantabulously fantastic👏

You are a rockstar Jo⭐️ awww ☺️☺️

Ur update made me cry😭😭😭 It was sooo touchy...!!!!☺️☺️☺️


No more words to appreciate ur update sweetheart!!! It was outstanding👏


Loved It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

Update sooon... i cant wait fr ur last part😛

Love ya...😳

love ya too but plan is changed a bit😉

Hugs to you🤗

🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Sidda8

Neha, I'm happy that you are continuing with this ff even if there is one last update left. We will love GKD even after its conclusion and I hope this forum continues to run.

Hey Siddu dear thanx for liking it

n yeah i suppose to end it by this update but as you had asked something n Priya is not allowing me wind it up so i m adding few more chapis hope you like it too😳

@bold i hope soo dear bz after this one i want to give one more story but if forum closes then i won't give it other names😕

Originally posted by: jasveensokhi

Hey Neha di well i m bit late 2

post mah comment never d less

kya baat hai bas yahi keh sakti hoon

coz i m speechless wowww😊

n i uresed ol mah posts😊

Hey Jas koi naa putt

der aaye durust aaye😆

aawww thanx for liking it dear hope you will enjoy next one too😳

P r e c a p

Papa-"ek baat jaanna chahte hai tumse jawaab satch satch dena, ye jo ladka tumhe leke yaha aaya tha "Avdhesh" un.." Arpi got it what her father want to know she lowered her sight "Ye Arshika ka hone wala mangetar hai naa?"

Arpi-"ji papa! Avdhesh humaare collage me hi hai!"

"Arpi when I send you here for studies , I didn't expect this from you!"

Avi was about to leave when suddenly Shikha came in the room she was looking tense

Avi-"Shikha what happened? why are you looking so tensed kuch hua hai kya?"

Shikha- "Bhaiya hospital se Simple ka call aaya tha , aapko bula rahi hai, Arpi is not well, she was crying n docs put her on oxygen again."

thanx

Originally posted by: joliefille

P r e c a p

Papa-"ek baat jaanna chahte hai tumse jawaab satch satch dena, ye jo ladka tumhe leke yaha aaya tha "Avdhesh" un.." Arpi got it what her father want to know she lowered her sight "Ye Arshika ka hone wala mangetar hai naa?"

Arpi-"ji papa! Avdhesh humaare collage me hi hai!"

"Arpi when I send you here for studies , I didn't expect this from you!"

Avi was about to leave when suddenly Shikha came in the room she was looking tense

Avi-"Shikha what happened? why are you looking so tensed kuch hua hai kya?"

Shikha- "Bhaiya hospital se Simple ka call aaya tha , aapko bula rahi hai, Arpi is not well, she was crying n docs put her on oxygen again."

thats all for pre hope u all like it n plz drop ur comments so i can UD asap. 😳

thanx