FF-'DESIRE'--Part 12'the Prom night'part-2 pg 47

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joliefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Sidda8
OMG, Neha this update is absolutely superb. Avita has found out that they love each other but Arpi is not reading to move on because of her Di. Poor Avi is heart broken continuously. I don't know what he is going to do but hopefully all their misunderstanding resolves.

thanx sidda dear,

ya finally they realized their feelings,
but still thay don't know how to express it even avi can't explain his love , what he feels for Arpi is abov all that words can express, so he just tried to expresse thenm without words.😳😳😳
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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

Jo i edited my post in Pg 20 and 25

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#203

Hye dear.
Update it soon me eagarly waiting dear u are making us mad in curiosity.
Well i expect no more twists now.

I have Updated my post on pg-26.

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joliefille

@joliefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#204

Hey Rups dear, just be prepared for biggest jhatka as its going to be ma last update so i want to clear some characters too, 😉
n m really sorry for delay in updates i have exams dear , will update soon ,
may be in this week in two days😉

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joliefille

@joliefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: prash_t
Heyyyaaa Jo🤗😳Hey Parashu dear🤗

Update was...

OMG!!! Avita...😳 they atleast know they love each other😳yap but still , they didn't confessed it in words😳

U beautifully described their scenes❤️thanx yaar but its nothing in front of "together again"😳

Both are made for each other❤️

Kya dhoya RV ko👏 He deserves it😡i tried my best to pour out my own frustration on him, i hate him too😆😆😆

Why sacrifice now???😭 My poor cutie pie😭😭😭

Update sooon darling😉

thanx for liking dear😳

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joliefille

@joliefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: jes_jade
Neha!!!!!!!!🤗

That was so awesome!!!!!👏👏

Mindblowing update!!!

& romantic too...☺️☺️☺️

But again they came back frm where they started...again misunderstandings...

Plzz update soon..😊

hey jess dear thankyou sooomuch forliking it 😳

don't worry Arpi will realize her mistake soon😉

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joliefille

@joliefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#207

hey everyone thanx for liking Desire till now n sorry for the late update,

hope u all will like the pre. n coming update too😳

Avi-"That's why I m saying 'Thank you Arshika' if you excepts my foolish proposal at that time, may be till now we got married n could never realize that you were right, I don't love you, I never loved you ever, I still don't know what was that, all I know is, that when I was with you I can feel someone else in you, n today im sure you are not that person bz she ditched me today bz of you. But anyway I don't have any hard feelings for you bz just bz of you I met her."

It happened in front of his eyes, he felt like world turns dark, everything stops, his whole world shattered into fragments, he fell on knees as his own body seems him very heavy to stand ,

will try to update soon😳

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#208

Heyyy JO 🤗

Precap seems to be interesting and scary too

u r giving me jhatkas 😡😆

love you 🤗

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joliefille

@joliefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: danno
wowww jo this is very nice part
yaar gkd forum pr itne saare achhe ache writer haina ki mere paas toh shabdo ki kami ho gayi hai...😆
thsi part is extremly well written...👏
plzzz pm me when u update
kai baar mere ko pata hi nahi chalta ki tumne next part update kar diya hai...😕
all in all👏

oh Sharan dear thankyou sooomuch for liking tthis part😳
n yap i m sending u pm for pre also
hope u like the next part too,😳