Avadesh's Story - Of Flowers, Birds and Blood - Page 2

Thanks verymuch for this awsome piece about the Avi's childhood how he had lost his innocence of childhood at his very young age. For every child its always their favouritetime of their life where its filled with love, joy, beatiful things.I do think the time the reality he has to face/see of his life is also very important where he is going to have another level of human development, adolesence, the transitional stage of physical and mental human development occurs .now he is not going to be a typical teenager instead he is going to be trained to be/ transformed to be a man with revenge and some purpose.Unfortunately he had no other options to choose, like other teens, where they have plenty of choices to enjoy their life, but poor boy even he isn't allowed to dream his own dreams, nothing but to follow his Bauji, who is his caretaker now.Me think at one stage he was forced to become bhayyaji, against his mums wish.

Vista, Thanx so much for this brilliant vivid flashback 🤗 U know all these days i kept wishing tht the cvs show us the scenes of Avi's childhood and the moment when LS killed his bro n father. That is the most pivotal scene of this show ....a turning point where a small kid was compelled to enter the Bad world.

But after reading ur write-up , am sure even the cvs cud not have described it better. Ur the Best 👍🏼 Am touched and cud actually see a small boy running thru the mustard fields, playing with the butterflies and one tragic moment in his life changed his fate.

Once Again ....Thanx Vista 😃

u r great, wat a writing n imagery,

i can imagine the young avi,full of life n innocence,running after butterflies,such innocence😳

n the sudden disaster ,death of his father n brother on his wedding day,that image of blood shed is just heart rendering,u just paint it by words👏👏👍🏼

will wait for 2nd part🤗

This comment has nothing to do with the topic vistaa posted at the momnet..But i just thought to comment /express my views about the other thread vistaa posted before"did he do it"

where someone(i do think its nandu darling)commented "how would he know he is the first one?"

In my opinion whatever he said is right(i mean he is the first perdon), not by practically, but by the moment of truth. what's it?Its the truth Still Avita not consummated their marriage.How would he know?either ways. One through Lal Singh, who can be his father(im sure)or the other through Bauji.

The current status of Avita's relationship was only known by Haweli ppl.There is no chance of Shika or Ammaji telling RV about their relationship.Only Bootni is the person can tell this to RV to get rid of Arpi, not by killiing her but by killing her izzath.Since Avita back to haweli she been watching howmuch Avi desperate for Arpi and for Dday of their life.She spoiled the night by spilling oil in the floor making shika fall thus to bring her story of unwed mother before Avita.

She cannot do it anymore making someone prey for her disgusting motivations every time.This time she has planned to do something that will finish Arpi forever from Avi's life. She might tell RV about Avita relationship and may be tell him whatever he must do it just before their SR. This is the best way to seperate Avita and make Avi weak so that she can seduce him when he becomes very vulnerable. But for RV who doesn't know about Bootni's reality behind getting rid of Arpi, only sees his benifit to destroy or kill Avi's strength, by making Arpi weak(we all know what he did ).

There is the most possibility of knowing this truth, Avita still virgin wife and husband, is through Lal Singh. Other than Haweli, he is the only one knows about Avi's first P. Even MC rai's family also unaware of this truth .

Can U remember the day Avi captured LS and brought him to the Bridge where his father and brother were killed by LS? Then Avi did tell him shouting

"yaadh keejiye ye jagah ko, yahi jagah par tum hamra babuji aur bhayya ko maar raha tha na. Jab thak tumhe maarthe thab tak shadhi shudah hothe bhi brahmyacharya ka palan karne ki pratigy lee hum"

so LS knows until Avi kills him he wont consummate his marriage, so his wife Arpita.

we all know that Avi nullified the first P and he no more wanted to kill LS. May be LS unaware of this and still thinking the same as before and must telll his son RV about this. There is another chance to destroy haweli without killing them. May be RV want to kill Avi coz he is after his father for long time.May be LS did tell about BJ who rescued him from Avi's hands. Instead of maintaining enemity with BJ , RV might thought to shake hands with Bootni for destroying Thakur kandaan to take his revenge.For Bootni its better for herself as well , where she can c her biggest dream going to fulfill, by getting rid of Arpi.

But the CV's just showing whatever Bootni is doing is for curiousity about the story in viewers .But in my opinion BJ knows about this long before and the brain behind whatever RV doing is just her's.Even im thinking she is the only one bailed out him from jail to c the things in her favour.

Now im totally agree with CB , RV is the LS Man(son)😆

Hey Guys🤗

Thanks so much for liking it and for all your kind words☺️........this had been in the making for so long........the first para had been in my head since the time I wrote Arpi's story.....thankfully it is done now😊

CB, Swamini, Prash, Sarah, Kali, Nandini, Priya, Sowjanya, Kriya, Jollie...........thanks 😃...you guys are the best!!

Sowjanya, will reply to your post in detail in the evening....have to get to work now😳

Vista

Whatever she believing so far is only narrated /pretended/were shown by RV as if its true and the deed was done. He is the only one knows the truth what exactly happened that night.Unless he has confess himself what ever she saw and believing him is totally absurd Arpi wont beleive that she is still virgin.But how he can confess to Arpi ?what makes him to confess?How would she have her SR?

Iam just imagining what she should do instead of killing herself.

Here the next scene starts Arpi calling RV on her mobile(im really surprised when she was sitting with her mobile in her hand at the middle of night, as if she Is expecting a call from RV.I never ever saw like that her before in haweli )ok!Now the scene starts.

Arpi"Ranvijay ji hum aap se milna chahthe hai. Jaroor bath karne hi aap se"

RV. the evil who was kept thinking of her whether she going to kill herself or not ,is very surprised to hear from her and answered her

"jarror Arpita Ji, hum tho aap se milne ke liye besabari se inthejar kar rahe hai. Kab aur kaha milenge, kyoun ki ab Ghar me mera Tamy and shika were busy right now in their bedroom."

"woh wahi mandhir me, jaha humne aapko jhor se thapad mara tha"Neech, kamieena ....hum fir jhor se ek aur thapad dhenge lekin is baar tumhare dimagh par Arpi soch rahi thi

"teek hai Arpita ji, hum be fir ek thapad kaane ko thayar hi, akhir hum dhono ki rishta bangayi tho hum tho thapad kya , aap jo kilana chahthe hai hum jarror kayenge"with a dirty laugh.

Behind the curtain some one hiding and listening what Arpi talking, but dont know who she is talking to . Its Avi, who was worried and had been started doubting about Arpi's behaviour for the last two days.

Arpi started walking towards haweli door watching worriedly whether someone did notice her leaving haweli?

Now Avi with his goons Pehelwaan , chulbul and Bayankar following slowly as he heared Arpi telling someone to meet at Mandhir.

PJ the BF of BJ told what did he see as Avi leaivng haweli in hurrry.

So PJ with BJ in another vehicle following Avi and the gang.

Now Arpi take with her mobile which was fully charged before she leaving. Battery beech me khatam hua tho usko bhi apni jidhagi katham karna padthi. Is liye woh mobile ko fully charged kar liya.Now u all can understand why she need her mobile. Right now she hired simple's brain until RV confesses the truth.Her finger press the recording button on her mobile and started walking towards RV.

There in the temple premises RV waiting for Arpi impatiently. Arpi ko dhekthe hi Uska chahra par mushkurahat ayi.😡(haso haso, jaldhi thume rona padega)

RV ko dhek ke Arpi bi gave a cute smile thinking "ab hasna tho mere baaari aur rhone ki baari tumhari "

RV said"kyoum Arpita ji kal raath aap ne kahi thi khudh khushi karne ke ,ab kya hogaya itna achanak muj se baath karne ki. kyoum hamse pyar karne laga hai kya?"

for a second she really got very angry with him but she controlled herself and suddenly she knelt at his feet .(here AVi and the gang behind the one of the Corner posts shocked and eagerly waiting to c what really happening between Arpi and RV.BJ with PJ at another corner , as she dont want to let Avi know that she followed him. She was very happy as if she knows Avi now will regret for marrying Arpi and he will be her's for ever.Ha Bj keep dreaming until ur death😡)

Arpi started crying holding both his feet (im sorry guys this is just pretendence of Arpi)aur kaha

"Ranvijay ji , ab humne aur ek baar socha ki khudh khushi kyom karloo jab aap jaisa police officer hume chahthe hai aur hamre saath jeena chahthe hai tho marne se kya faiydha?Ab sirf aap hi mujhe iss badnaami se bacha sakthe hai.Mujhe apna patni ke roop me sweekar karlijiye, mangalsutrha ko hamare gale me baandh dheejiye."

RV really got shocked now after hearing whatever Arpi said.

He is more than clever but never thought Arpi would tell him such words very cleverly.

Now he totally confused and worried about what to do.

Poojari ji ye sab dhek raha tha pooja paat karthe aur RV, Arpi ke paas aya aur bola.

"beta , shub kaam ke liye dheri kyoum? yahi shub ghadia bi hai. Beti kitna sundar aur susheel diktha hai. Aur dher math keejiye. shub gadiya nikaal raha hai. waise aaap ki jeb me ye mangalsuthra bhi hai tho dheri kyoum?"(poojari noticed Arpi mangalsutra hanging from his trouser' s back pocket, as RV forgot to put it completely inside of his pocket.)

"aap muh bandh rakhiye" shouted RV at poojari loosing his patience.

"Kya kya soch tha, kya hora hai? Ye tho Bhayya ji ki plan tho nahi hai na. ?He thought for a second. Woh tho fool. josh me hosh kho jatha . Iysi clevr plan.?" His mind keep thinking as if its going to expload very soon.

"Arpita ji aap kya kar rahe hai? Hum aap se kaise shadhi kar sakthe hai. Aap shadhi shudha hai

ye kanoon ke kilaf bhi.Hum nahi kar sakthe"Rv said(bastar**, usse badnamm karne ki plan rachne se pehle ye kyoum nahi socha?😡)

"Ranvijay ji aap aisa math kahi ye. Ab aap ke lawa hume is dhuniya me koi nahi, sirf aap he hame shadhi kar sakthe hai kyoum ki ab hamri izzath aap ki hogayi aur hum bhi .Aap hume raasthe pe math chodiyega. hum ab na kisi ghar ki na ghat ki ho jayenge.please. hum aap ke haath jodthe hai, paav be padthe hai. "

she stood up and said"aap jab thak shaadhi nahi karthe thab thak hum aaphi ghar me rahenge."

Now RV really getting one shock after the other.

Now his plan going to be utterflop. Humara bhai ko patha chal gaya tho? woh hamara baare me kya kya sochenge aur kya samjenge hum?Nahi, hum kabhi bhi hamara pyara bhai ko nahi chod sakthe, hume chodne se nahi majboor karthe. Hum fir doosra plan banvayenge woh bhyaaji ko khatam karne ke liye. filhaal is bewakoof aurath ko sachayi batha kar bag jayenge. iss se behtahr cheese koi aur nahi, hamra dimagh be kuch kaam nahi kar raha hai, log be hame hi gunegaar samjenge. he give up his plan to weeaken Avita for the moment and decided

"are aap sachi me bahooth bewakoof thi. Hum jo kaha , aap usse maan liya? Aap kab sudharenge. Aap ki Bauji se seek leejiye log se kaisa nipatna hai.Hum jo sab kaha aur dhikaya woh sab joot hai. sirf aap aur thumhara pati ko badnaam karne ke liye"RV said.

"nahi, aap joot bhol rahe hai, ab humse shadhi nahi karna chathe hai. Aap ke paas kya sabooth hai ye sab joot hai ,ham ye baath nahi maanthe"

RV thinking and getting vry irritated by her behaviour "ye kaisi aurath hai hum is dhuniya me kahi nahi dheka hai, hume nahi maanthi ki hum uska izzath nahi loota hai"

He lost his temper and shouted at her as somany ppl gather around them watching this tamasha

"yahi hai sabooth, hamara paas , ye DVD khudh dhek lijiye wus raath hum ne record karliya tha. ab aap ko samajme ayega.bas hume chod dheejiye" aur ek baath"ye aap ki mangalsuthra ,"lijiye"

Arpi started laughing loudly and said "hum be yahi chahiye tha. ab aap khud confess bhi kiya aur kya hua aap ke ghar me wuska recording be. Aap ne bahooth acha kaam kiya hai , ab is dhuniya me hame koi bhi characterless woman nahi kahenge.kya socha aap ne hamare baareme. aap jo jo sunathe hai aur hum chup chap sunthe rahe? nahi, hum bhyyaji ki patni hai hum. sirf Avdeshji ki hai hum,khudh Bagwan bhi hume alagh nahi kar sakthe tho aap kya?"

Then Rv with very low voice said"whatever i did just for the revenge as Bhayyaji trying to kill my father Lal singh"

AviTa and the Gang turned their heads as they about to leave the place ,stunned after listening to his words. Now they understand why RV after thakur kaandaan. Avi came to RV and said"thum rishtey me saala laghte hai tho hum yahi chod dhethe hai. Lekin agaly baar fir kuch karne ki socha tho.............hum se kya hoga khudh dhek lena. waise tho hum Woh kutha Lal singh ke peche padethe ab aur nahi, kyoumki hum sab ye himsa se dhoor rehana chahte hai. Ab thumhara babuji ko humse darna nahi hai.Woh humra shika ka bhi babuji hai"

This time RV got the biggest shock of his life as he never ever expected Avi would change. But now he can see with his eyes and seeing is believing.

After that The goons taken RV to hospital.

few days later RV with his father LS entered haweli on a fine and sunny morning hand in hand to reveal BJ's truth.

.Im sorry if u dont like it.

i edited my post in page 2 😳

thanks 😳